The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 32

That was superb update...

hey

superb jen and im amazed at the way you write things

here in different set up you know I have penchant for stories of that age the way I liked mohini and the kings story

so its TS never mind bring it on

OMG .. its so awesome ..

I love this .. I loved the original Sachin Balika vadhu..I was working on a similar child bride set in Bengal myself..all the best dear

Beautiful premise, Jenny! The feel of colonial Bengal, the aristocracy, the little Khushi with her doll.. stunning! I was truly enchanted.

Really beautifully written Jenny…no words can define the beauty of your writing…The way you have captured the lifestyle of the Zamindars in the pre-independence India in year 1920….Arnab Basu seems to an intelligent and patriotic youth….and I love my doll Khushi….are you sure the age gap is 13 years….it is a huge gap dear!!!

You Rock dear!!!!!

Loved the first chapter….Just brilliant….👏

awesome!! very beautifully narrated.. really loved the narration.. and bengali accent and names was cherry on the top
very well wrote about particular character... mindblowing
arnab babu and khushi.. with more than decade age gap are married and khushi is arnab's 2nd wife and his first wife sis.. how much it arnab is displeasure to know that a child is his wife
cant wait to read more
continue soon

This seemed like I was reding a chapter from 'Sharadchandra' book and that's a biggest compliment I can pay.

It was beautifully written and as you know you have a great flair to write stories with historical backdrop and this is no exception.

Poor Arnav getting embarrassed to hear his grandmother talking about his real marriage and him being a father and about the girl taking too long to grow up.

Khushi has arrived barely a child and with a doll
In her hand and Arnav feels for her as he is seems like a man of principles and with a soft heart with lot of empathy for people around him even the servants who were not treated very well in those days.

Please continue soon. Will wait eagerly for the next chapter.

loved this arnab over typical arnav...