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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi13

hey sia amazing concept!!!!

jst read both ur updates!!!
its jst awesome...
aww poor manvi wud hav gt so hurt...
nd she changed her attitude also cz of da hurt...
bt she keeps contact wid virat... dats interesting...
plzz cont soon.. wanna see her reaction abt vadheras cuming der...
cont soon nd thnx fr da pm
sry fr da late comment...


Thankss
And I jnw I hav , made her hurt a lot in this story bt the family will have to pay the jurmana for there mistakes
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301

<font color="#0099ff">in love with ur SS Sia

</div>the change in manvi wow an amazin concept yaar
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i kno ur busy with coursewrk bt update as soon as uve gt tym really lukin forward to the update 😊</font>


Yes I am buzy im coursework who cn understand this better than u . U r in the same place stick with tones of loads of work. Bt this doesnt mean I will stop updating thisnone people like this stroy soni will d4nupdate
Posted: 12 years ago
hello kya hal chal hai
Posted: 12 years ago
Okay to stary with i wanna tell u that the reason i am taking this story at a fast piece is because its a SS however if u want me to change it say so, bt i thought not many people will like it so i better make it fast.

As some people said they want more diologues so here it goes

Part 1- Page 1, Part 2 ' Page 10, Part 3 ' Page 20, Part 4 ' Page 29, Part 5 ' Page 39, Part 6 – Page 47 , Part 7 – page 55


Part 3
Beji- vo kam pe gaye hui hai (she has gone to work)

Everyone was stuned manvi and work that didnt make any sense the girl who says u shouldnt waste time workin wen u hav better things to do is nw workin

Jeevika - manvi aur kam yeah kesa masak hai (manvi and work, let me tell u this is not funny)

Beji - jeevika mein masak nahi karrahi manvi sach mein kam pe gaye hai ( small pause, and turns her back towards the others) pata nahi jabse chadhighar se aye hai bilkul hi badal gaye hai. manvi pehle wali manvi nahi rahi, na hasti hai, na kisi se bat karti hai, sirf apne hi duniya mein hi rahti hai, jab kuch pucho to bat badal ke chali jati hai
(jeevika im not jokin ,manvi has actually gone to work ( small pause, and turns her back towards the others) i dont understand sence she has come back from chandighar she has completely changes, she hardly talks or laughs,its like she is always in her own world, wen i ask her something she jst changes the topic and leaves)

Jeevika - beji itna kuch ho gaya our apne mujhe batana zarrori nahi samja ( walks towards virat) our virat tum toh manvi sa bat be karteh the toh tumne be mujhe batana zaroori nahi samja
(beji so much has happened and u didnt even bother telling me (walks towards virat) and virat u didnt even tell me

Virat- bhabhi mein zaroor batata agar mujhe pata hota manvi mujse pehle ki thara bat kar ti hai, hain kabhi kabhi kehti ti ke vo buzy hai lekin...( jeevika i would hav told u if i knew but was she was normal with me, bt yes sometimes she used to say she is buzy but...)

Jeevika was now flamin in anger that so much was goin on in her sisters head bt no one bothered tellin her until

Viren - jeevika shant ho gao manvi itni be toh nahi badalhi ho gi. Our yakin raho vo tumko dehke sab bol gaye gi
( jeevika calm down im sure manvi hasnt changed alot and anyway even if she has she will see u and her anger will just vanish)

Dadaji & sb - hain jeevika viren tik kehraha hai(yes jeevika viren is right)

Everyone jst agreed with them not knwin wat will happen next. As everyone was assurin jeevika i house fone rang.

Beji walked over to the fone and answered it

Beji - hello kon hai ( hello whos this)

Manvi- hello beji mein ho mein apne file bol gaye ho blue colour ki wahi hai kya
(Hello beji its me, i hav forgot my blue file somewhere could u plz check if its at home (she looked left and eight and found it lyin by the desk behind the main door)

Beji- hai manvi file ghar pe hi hai (yes manvi its at home )

Manvi - acha beji mein tohri der mein ar rahi ho phir kana ghar pe hi ka lugi (okay beji ill ne there in a while and ill eat at home today)

After this beji cut the fone and went to the family tellin em

Beji - manvi ajj lunch ghar pe hi karegi toh jeevika tum mil lena manvi se ( manvi will hav lunch at home today, and jeevika this means u will be able to meet her)

As beji said this a brillant idea poped up in virats head

Virat- bhabhi q na hum manvi ko surprise de. Hume dehk ke vo khush be ho gaye ge ( jeevika why dont wr give manvi a surprise this way she will get happy aswell.

Chachi - hay ni virat aj kal tum ache idea dene lage ho( oh yea viray these days ur givin good ideas)

Everyone agreed with this plan that they would surprise manvi so they all decided to hide behind the pillers and give her a surprise as she walks in

After a while manvi entered the house while the others where hidin behinds the pillers

Manvi - beji meri file kaha hai ( beji where is my file)

Manvi was dressed very formally with and smart navy blue colour suit on her hair was opened and she looked very beautiful in that dressin style.

Manvi - beji app kaha hai aj mein lunch ghar pe karogi ( beji where r u, today i am gonna have lunch at home )

As she said this beji came towards manvi. And said

Beji - manvi tumhare liya surprise hai( manvi i hav a surprise for u)

As she said this she pointed toward the piller jeevika was hidin behind.
Jeevika and then the rest of the family members cam out one by one.

Manvi wasnt much intreseted she had that love for her sister but at the same time she had all the anger inside her aswll.
She didnt want to greet most off then bt there were some members that she didnt hav any complaints to.

Manvi then went forward n greeted everone personally, evn tho some of em she didnt want to meet.

So she first walked towards dadaji

Manvi took blessing of him and and sb both of em asked if she is okay bt she jst nodded her head and moved on.

Dadaji & sb - tum tik ho manvi
( manvi r u okay)

She then head towards vanshika, and took her blessings aswell. After this vanshika placed her hand on manvis cheek n said

Vanshika - manvi tum tik ho? our tum viren ki b'day pe kyon nahi aye
(manvi r u okay? And why didnt u come to virens b'day)

Manvi - vo aunty actually mujhe kuch kam ta isiliye
(actually aunty i had to do some work thats y)

Then she headed towards sholk and chachi she was normally with then aswell bt tried not to get over excited. After chachi amd shlok she head towards chachu

She gave im a hug and said
Manvi- chachu kese ho app?
(Chachu how r u?)

Chachu - mein toh tik ho lekin lagta hai ke tum hume bol gaye, isliye toh bat nahi karti. Aur kya manvi mujhe thank u be tik se nahi kehne diya. Abhi tumhare liya surprise toh banta hai
( im okay bt it seems like u hav forgoten us, thats why u stoped tlkin to us, n manvi u didnt env giv us a chance to thank u properly, nw this means i wikk hav to giv u a surprise for all u hav done for me)

Manvi - nahi chachu app ne sub khud hi kiya, sirf meine app mein vo vishwas raka jo kuch logo ne mujhe nahi rakha
(Nahi chachu y did everythin urself u jst kept the trust in u, that some peiple didnt keep in me)
After sayin this everyone knew what she ment bt didnt bother to say anythin

Next it was virikas turn manvi had walked to em bt the only reason for that was cuz virat was there

Manvi - hey chapu tumne nahi bataya tum ar rahe ho
(hey u didnt tell me u were comin)
Everyone was really unexpecting this she ignored her sister and jiju and walked straight to virat


So guys i knw as i said it was to gud bt i had to finish all ma assignments and and the same time i was rightin this so maybe thats y its not perfect bt next part i cn promise it will be dramatic.

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Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yesss i am the 1st...
It was really awesome yaar...
Pleasee continue soon...
I feel really bad for Manvi and Virika...
Thanks for the PM..
Posted: 12 years ago
thank u and i will as oon as i hand ma coursework in
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Yesss i am the 1st...

It was really awesome yaar...
Pleasee continue soon...
I feel really bad for Manvi and Virika...
Thanks for the PM..

nearly the first lol
and i thought u wanned virika to be treated badly, if u keep changing ur chose it wl be difficult lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the pm but wouldn't mind reading this ss if turned into a ff. She really should teach jevika a lesson as manu is too nice continue soon can't wait to read more
Posted: 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princess84

thanks for the pm but wouldn't mind reading this ss if turned into a ff. She really should teach jevika a lesson as manu is too nice continue soon can't wait to read more

ill see if more poepl want this to be ff i might change it, but it all depends on the comments i get. and yeah manu is too nice bt now jeevika has to pay even if its in my story

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