Virman FF - Tujhe Bulaa Diya - Page 43

Created

Last reply

Replies

428

Views

39.5k

Users

62

Likes

610

Frequent Posters

Posted: 11 years ago
hey i am abit to busy after ages i got enough time to come and check my messages on this forum, but i think i wont be able to continue this story, however if anyone does wanna continue plz tell me know as i know other people also have views on what should happen next. thanks and sorry.
btw i dnt think ill be coming on this site much but i will try again for the next month just to see if any one wants to continue
or email me on g.hasrat96@yahoo.co.uk
Edited by Sia12345 - 11 years ago
niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
plz do continue...
was waiting for long time for you to update
Posted: 11 years ago
I know my update is after ages so im sorry for being so late, another thing i would like to apologise is for not commenting on your story however that's only because i haven't red em yet. If u had pmed me I will for sure read and comment on them soon, but I had quite a lot to read so it may take me a while.

Manvi was dancing with the boy, where virat was getting jealous at this scene, viren could see the jealousy in his eye, infact everyone could.

As manvi was dancing the boy said something in her ear which enforced her to let out a little laugh. Virat was indeed angry at this scene.
By now virat was burning in anger, so he with out saying anything walked towards manvi, he would indeed kill the boy today. But thankfully he didn't all he said was.

Virat - may I dance with u miss manvi.

As the guy knew who virat was after all the party was arranged for him. He just stepped back and he let virat dance with manvi.

Now virat and manvi were dancing together, everything else ran smoothly except for the fact that whenever someone went near manvi, virat would get some odd feeling in his stomach.

*****later on same day******

Everyone had reached home, jeevika had planned to stay in the chaudrys house, so she went there. In vadera house everyone was in there own room except for viren who wanted to speak to virat so he went to his

Viren - so mere bhai, how was today's day

Virat - great

Viren - of course it was you had manvi by your side all the time

Virat - wat do u mean???

Viren - common bhai I know U that much that I could see how you were staring at manvi though out the whole party

Virat - yes bhai she is awesome, I never knew she has this side to her as well , and overall my career is on a high all thanks to her.

Viren - virat can I know the reason for your changing behaviour toward our family, I mean one minute you are talking to us as if we have done something really bad and the next minute u are really sweet

Virat - bhai lets talk about this another day, I am quite tired and I've got a very long day tomorrow

Viren - if u say so virat but seriously u could at least tell me.

Virat - yes bhai I could, and I will but at the right time

*****in chaudrys house******

Jeevika wanted to talk to manvi therefore she went straight to her room, even though she knew manvi didn't want to talk to her.
Manvi was just getting ready for tomorrow morning as she has to sort some files therefore she was busy in that, jeevika walked into the room but manvi didn't notice her.

Jeevika - manvi ( she had turned around and looked at her for like 5 seconds and then back around again.)

Manvi - did u need anything.

Jeevika - can we talk?

Manvi - is it important? Because I'm really busy ( she said this walking around the room, jeevika could clearly see that she wasn't interested in talking to her)

Jeevika - please manvi don't do this please I really want to talk to you( she went and stood right in front of her) okay you tell me what do u want me to. Ur di will do anything to get her sister back.

Manvi - for the last time U r not my di. If you were u wont leave me when I needed you the most. It may seem like a small thing to u but it was a big thing for me.

Jeevika - I know i Hurt u. But you tell me what do you want me to do about it.

Manvi - di ( the ways she said it, it seemed like she almost said it to jeevika. But no she didn't)

She looked at her phone and it was khushi's. manvi answered the phone straight away, jeevika noticed that this wouldn't be the best time to talk to her so she just left from there as manvi continued to talk on the phone.

******next morning******

Virat and manvi had a long day as there was a concert coming up. So they had left the house early morning without informing anyone.

Virat - hello manvi

Manvi - hello

Virat - how everything?

Manvi - good

Just then arnav had entered the room

Arnav - okay virat and manvi your first concert is coming. Always remember first impression is last impression, so lets make it good

Virat - no arnav not good, lets make it great or even better than that. I really want to prove that I'm not just good but great.

Manvi - wow virat is this the same old virat.

Virat - no manvi there is a biggg difference,

Manvi - I can see that, By the way jiju when and where is the concert arrange.

Arnav - I was just about to get there , the concert is in one weeks time and we haven't got much time at all. The concert is in Chandigarh.

Manvi - Chandigarh ( she was quite surprised why in Chandigarh)

Arnav - yes Chandigarh and everything has already been arranged, ur hotel and u can leave tomorrow morning.

Virat - arnav no need to arrange for hotel for me and manvi we will be in vadera house

Arnav - as u wish virat (and he left from there. )

Manvi was still digesting the news of going to Chandigarh she didn't want to visit that place in her worst nightmare but she didn't have a choose. As soon as arnav had left she came back to reality

Manvi - virat I am not going to the vadera house the day I had left from the I said to myself I will never com back to jeevika VADHERAS house.

Virat - manvi calm down I know you don't want to go to our house but have u forgotten I am your friend. So for at least that friendship come to MY house.

Manvi didn't answer then but still virat knew she would agree. The same day virat and manvi went home in the evening. Once again the VADHERAS were in the chaudrys house discussing they would leave tomorrow morning.

Virat and manvi entered

Manvi went straight to her room telling virat she will be back.

Viren - how was your day bhai

Virat - fine actually I want to tell you all something.

Everyone was extremely happy on the fact that virat was once again talking to them normally.

Viren - okay so what is it???

Virat - bhabhi manvi will come to vadhera house with us

Jeevika - really virat. Wow does that mean she has forgiven me. Thank you virat

Virat - actually bhabhi I have a concert in Chandigarh and I have convinced manvi to stay with us but

Jeevika - but what virat.

Virat - as my friend.

Jeevika - as long as she is coming that's more then enough for me.

By now manvi was back so everyone had changed the topic.

Manvi - beji I have to leave for Chandigarh tomorrow the company have organised virats concert there. But no need to worry I will look after myself properly now please agree,this concert is really important for me. So please let me go.

Beji - wen will you be coming back ( these words were more than enough for manvi to understand that she can go)

Manvi - 1 month maximum and thank you (so manvi had left from there as she had to get ready for the next
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

I AM FIRST.
SUPERB UPDATE.👏
LOVED THE JELOUS VIRAT.
VIRAT LOVES MANVI. PLZ MAKE HIM CONFESS FIRST.


Okay so thanks first sorry for late reply and thanks alot for ur comment
I will surely try and make him confess but thats only if I get time to write. Haha
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301

SIA u never listen do u - I tell u to rest n take care n nw u update well the update was very very very good omg yes virat finally realised his love for manvi - im sooo happy bt uh-oh I feel really sorry for that guy who is dancing with manvi now : he is so gonna get it😆 continue but only wen ur well now - plz choti take rest yaar 😊

No I actually nvr listen till I get really bad, but still managed to update again evn tho I hv deadlines
niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
virat jealous bcoz manvi is dancing with other guy
hope every thing gets solved soon
manvi going yo stay in vadera mansion for 1 month
continue soon
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
prathe thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
wow superb loved the jealousy track...
Am happy that u r continuing the story...will be waiting for u updates do continue whenever u can dear 😊
floral thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome update
i don't like jeeman seperated
virat getting jealous
anyways dear it was fantastic update
i just loved it to the core of my heart
please do continue soon
😊😊
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow awesome update

i don't like jeeman seperated
virat getting jealous
anyways dear it was fantastic update
i just loved it to the core of my heart
please do continue soon
😊😊


Awww but dear thats the whole point of da story, remeber tujhe bula diya. Bt thanks for da comment

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".