Virman FF - Tujhe Bulaa Diya - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its interesting...
nd something unique...
want to read more...
continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Start..~!! Waiting for the next:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update soon can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey really good concept...waiting for the next update..:)
Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1- Page 1, Part 2 ' Page 10, Part 3 ' Page 20, Part 4 ' Page 29, Part 5 ' Page 39, Part 6 – Page 47 , Part 7 – page 55

Part 2

Everyone was suprised by the way she called viren, viren ji wen she normally called him jiju wat happened as such that she didnt want to go there.
Bt anyways everyone got ready to leave not botherin to ask manvi again as they knw she wouldnt agree

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Two days lata in the vadera mansion, the chaudry family came and were greeted by the vadera family. Everyone ws on the top hopin to see manvi after so long so all there eyes were looking for manvi

Jeevika- beji mannu nahi aye (beji didnt manvi come)

her eyes were lookin for her sister everywhere bt she was not to be seen

Beji - nahi jeevika beta manvi nahi aye( no jeevika manvi didnt come)

Dadaji - lekin hum ne kaha ta ke sab ana (bt i said bring everone along)

Beji -(she had to think of somethin quick as she couldnt tell em hw manvi has changed) manvi toh ana chahti ti lekin uski tabiyat tik nahi thi isi liye hum je usko rukne he liye keh diya ( manvi wanted to come along bt we told her to stay at home as she wasnt feelin very well)

The whole vadera family knew the reason for manvi not comin, howver the party still had to go on bt no one was havin the fun intened. The party was all borin without manvis fun love sweet talks

After the party ended the chaudry family went home saying that manvi is alone. The vadera didnt stop em either as they knw they r right and manvi shouldnt be alone at home

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The nxt mornin all the vadera were at the breakfast table. As evn tho manvi was tlkin to the vadera bt she still tlked to virat and stayed normal with him,as it wasnt his fault and he was tryin to defend her wen everyone else jst turned their backs.

Everyon was on the table until virat also can he excused himself and sat down.

Virat- im sorry for being late, its jst that i was tlkin to manvi

Jeevika knw that both virat and manvi tlked to each other bt wenevr virat handed the fone to jeevika manvi would always make an excuse and cut the call

Jeevika-kya kaha manvi ne, vo tik toh hain na( wat did manvi say? And is she okay)

Virat - ha bhabhi vo tik hai, lekin vo tohri buzy lag rahi ti( yes she is okay bt it seemed like she was abit buzy)

Jeevika - kash meri behen mujse be bat karti, meri galti itni bi bari nahi ti ke mujhe mafi nahi mil sakti( i wish my sister would talk to , my mistake wasnt that big that she cnt.even forgive me)
she said this very emotionally, with one tear jst about to fall out, everone noticed this bt they nvr knew wat to say, they knw they were wrong bt y was manvi behavin like this. Y was she only talkin to virat. Dadaji noticed everyone gettin low as manvi was tlkin to any of em

Dadaji - jeevika beta humne be toh us ke sath bura bartao kiya hai na, humne uski puri bat suni hi nahi or use jane ke liye keh diya hai( jeevika we were in the wrong we jst told her to leave without even lettin her give an explanation )

Virat - phir dadaji hume jurmana barna chahiye, q na hum sab hrishkesh jaye our use surprise de, vo khush be ho gaye gi. Our maaf be kardegi ( then dadaji we should pay for our mistake, why dont we go hrishkesh and surprise her she will get happy and might evn forgiv us)

Dadaji- virat yh bohat acha idea hai, q na hum sab ajj sharm go nichal gaye, our kal subah tak waha porch gaye ge( virat thats a very good idea, why dont we all leave for this evening and we will reach by tomorrow mornin)

Everyone agreed with this from sb to sholk. Everyone was tooo happy there were on he seventh sky hearin this news bt the people who were on the 10-20-30th sky were jeevika and virat they could hold there enjoyment in, so without finishin breakfast they jst went to pack there bags

...:

Virat had been tlkin to her bt only sometimes wen she was free, bt he hadnt seen her for ages. He missed her alot bt he never knew the reason behind this.

...:

And the same time jeevika was also happy she hadnt even heard her sisters voice once in this last month, she really wanted to met her and share all the things that she wanted.
She was still packin her bag, till viren can in, he was also excited bt nothin compared to jeevika yes he wanted to met manvi bt he had the feelin that she will not forgive em.

Jeevika- (she was on a high in exitment of meetin her sistet and was runnin here to there gettin her things ready)
viren ji meine appka bag pack karke vaha rak diya hai,
(she went close to him N huged him, leanin her head on his chest)
aj mein bohat khush ho, mein finally apne behen se milogi(she said this and one tear fell down her cheek)

Viren wiped that tear of and pulled her in properly for a tight hug,

In the evening

Everyone had packed there bags and left for hrishkesh

...:

It was about 9 am wen they arrived, they entered the house said hello to everyone and inquired about manvi

Beji went to the main door and said

Beji- namaste, kese hai app sab, aur andar aye na (greetings, how r u all? nd plz com in

Everone cam in and were served with a drink and sat down on the chairs while some of em were still standin.

Jeevika- (her eyes were lookin everywhere for manvi bt she was not to be found) beji manvi kaha hai, shaiyat apne room mein hogi mein mil ke ati ho(she began walkin towards manvis room)
(Beji where is manvi, maybe she is in her room ill jst go and meet her)

Beji didnt reply to her question she was jst standin there numb as she knw manvi had left or work early today

Anyway jeevika entered the room lookin for manvi and saw no one there

Jeevika- manvi manvi

She then cam out and inquired from beji

Jeevika- beji manvi kaha hai( beji where is manvi)

Beji- vo kam pe gaye hui hai (she has gone to work)

Everyone was stuned manvi and work that didnt make any sense the girl who says u shouldnt waste time workin wen u hav better things to do is nw workin

NOTE - vadera family knw nothing about her change

Precap - Next part everyone will see that changed manvi

I knw i didnt meet expectations bt this part was also important bt i promise to pay off next time

QUESTION - would u like discriptions, or more diologues? (by discription i mean how it is going nw)

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Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: richa002

its interesting...
nd something unique...
want to read more...
continue soon... 😃

thanks for ue comment
Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Start..~!! Waiting for the next:)

thanks for ur comment
Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: princess84

update soon can't wait to read more

thanks for ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Awesome😊
cont soon

Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: mahimanair09

Awesome😊

cont soon

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