Virman FF - Tujhe Bulaa Diya

Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Okay to start with there r gonna be two people ritin this story me(sia12345) and (myvirman).

We dont knw if u r gonna like this story bt its maining based around manvi and her suffering, how everyone lets go of her in her bad times. This story is about hw her life changes after one incident.

So here goes

As manvi reaches back home to hrishkesh, she goes straight to her room n goes back to her thoughts

Of how jeevika told her to get out of the house. It wasnt evn her fault she was jst tryin to help inder chachu cuz she had the belief that he could win the case. Bt y did her sister not evn keep the belief in her that she was only tryin to help him not misguide him.
As she came out of the troughts.

She had crowld up into the corner of her room sayin to herself

Manvi to herself- not evn my own sagi behen trusts me. I was only trying to help chachu. Bt y didnt my sister listen to me i dont mind everyone else not trustin me bt atleast my world, my mother ,my sister could hav kept that belief in me. Hw cn she turn her back on me wen i needed her to trust me the most.
(She was in her thought until all of a sudden another thought came up to her and said)
I always help others and never ask for anything in return bcaz i knw my sister is there for me. Bt who shall i live for nw. There is no point livin

1 month leap

Biji - manvi have some breakfast before u go.

Manvi - no bji im not hungry i will hav lunch lata.

Bji- wats wrong with this girl she has completlly changed, bt she doesnt even tell me wat happened

The day manvi said there is no point livin she ment it she had killed herself she had killed the sweet lovin manvi n became somethin conpletlly opposite.
She began going to office, something which she would hav nvr done
She began to maintain distance with evn people close to her
She stopped all her masti n began a girl who hated talkin to people.
She wasnt the manvi who had left with her sister.

As manvi reached office

Khushi - manvi where hav u been me and arnav ji wanted to ask do u wanna come for dinner tonight?

Manvi - no di u carry on, i hav alot of work to do and i think i better get goin with that (she was tryin to avoid going out with them she was the type of person who only liked her own company)

Manvi was only close to khushi and arnav, so she used to call her di she said she will maintain distance from everyone bt as she met khushi she realized that khushi was a person who understood her at this moment even better than her sagi behen.

Arvan- com on manvi, we hav planned this especially for u.

Manvi - okay okay theres no point arguin with u. Okay ill com.

Khushi - yes this is gonna be fun all of us together again

Manvi did agree bt she was least intrested in goin anywhere all she cared about was completein her office work on time.

They all had a gr8 time together and then went home.

...:

On the otherside chachu had won the case bt non of the family members had gone to thank manvi as they knew they had mistreated her for somethin that wasnt her fault, overall no one had the heart to face her, as they knew there were wrong.
However they got a chance to call manvi over to chandighar as virens b'day was comin up so they planned of calling manvi over
Everyone agreed so dadaji rang.beji

...:

On the phone

Dadaji - namaste

Manvi - ji namaste app khon hai aur kise bat karne hai (hello who r u and who would u like to tlk to)

Dadaji - manvi beta tum ho, aur kese ho ( manvi is it u, n how r)

B4 he could complete his sentence manvi handed the fone over to beji

Beji - sorry vo manvi chale gaye vo galde mein ti is liye (sorry manvi jst left she was in a rush)

Dadaji- ji tik hai hum ne sirf yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya ha ke viren ka janam din ar raha hai, toh ap sab aye ge to hame acha lage ga( o its okay i jst called to say that virens b'day is comin up and it would be really nice if u could all attend)

Beji - tik hai hum sab ane ki puri koshish karenge ( okay we will all try and atrend)

Dadaji- thank u aur hum sab be sabri se intazar karenge( thank u and all of us will be waitin for u)

As soon as they said this they disconnected the fone dadaji informed everyone that they will come.

Everyone was damb hapoy especially virika they were finally gonna met manvi after ages

...:

Wen beji informed the family that they were gonna go, everone agreed apart from manvi so she made a excuse

Manvi - beji mein nahi chal sakti mere bas bohat sara office work hai aur mujhe vo complete karna hai
( beji i cnt come i hav a alot of office work and i hav to complete that)

She was about to walk of until

Dabu - di app asa kyon kar rahi ho, app itna q badal gaye ho
( di why r u doin this and why hav u changed so much)

All the family notice the change bt no one knew wat the reason behind this change was, they didnt evn get a chance to asj her the whole matter as it all happened so fast.

Manvi- (givin him a evil eye, and a bit loud) ha mein badal chuki ho, q k mujhe pata chal gaya hai ke yeh duniya matlab ki hai, yaha kyon be apna nahi hai, log tab tak ap ka sath dedhe jab tak koi our nahi mil jatah
( yes i hav change, cuz i hav realized that people r only by ur side till they find someone else)

Beji- par asa kya hua hai ke tum apni sagi behen se be dori rakti ho
(bt wat has happened of such that u wont even tlk to ur blood sister)

After beji said this manvi didnt bother to answer all she said was

manvi- beji app sab jaye, mein nahi chal sakti app viren ji ko meri taraf se happy birthday keh dena
( beji u all go i cnt come and and wish viren happy birthday from me)

Everyone was suprised by the way she called viren, viren ji wen she normally called him jiju wat happened as such that she didnt want to go there.
Bt anyways everyone got ready to leave not botherin tk ask manvi again as they knw she wouldnt agree

Okay plz tell me if u like it or not if not then i will stop writin. If u like it plz like and comment
If u want me to pm u plz add me to ur buddy list it will make my life easier hope u understand

Index ' Direct links if u click on the part u want the page should open up.

Part 1- Page 1

Part 2 ' Page 10

Part 3 ' Page 20

Part 4 ' Page 29

Part 5 ' Page 39

Part 6 – Page 47

Part 7 – page 55

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey siaaa it was nice plzz cntinue fr me i need a part two right nw i knw i am bng greedy agar part two abhi u can give so give fr me plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey its damn good dear..such an interesting concept..i wish serial mei b kuch aisa dikhate bt its ok nw u'll fulfill this wish..plz cntinue soon nd do pm me..waiting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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New story sound inserting looking forward how two sister relationship take turn and how she will become normal like before and how virat and manvi love story start update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetyvirman123

Hey siaaa it was nice plzz cntinue fr me i need a part two right nw i knw i am bng greedy agar part two abhi u can give so give fr me plzzz

read ur pms plz, i hav told u that i will update if i get a good responce
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow, i like this maanvi very much
is maanvi going to virens b'day?
want to read next pt soon. can u pls update the pt very soon. pls...:... its really nice...
continue soonnn... and pls pm me
Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nishiarora

Hey its damn good dear..such an interesting concept..i wish serial mei b kuch aisa dikhate bt its ok nw u'll fulfill this wish..plz cntinue soon nd do pm me..waiting..

yh i was also thinking the same thats why im riting bt i dont knw hw many people will resonce to this and if i get a good responce i will tell MYVIRMAN to continue soon and if she doesnt i promise i will take time out to write an post
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome. looking fwd to the next part..
continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's awesome, really enjoyed it. Please contonue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: pink1

New story sound inserting looking forward how two sister relationship take turn and how she will become normal like before and how virat and manvi love story start update soon

yh bt i think i am going to be dragging the concept of her forgiving everyone bt there is one good point to the storyrelated with virman which u will realize later

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