Virman FF - Tujhe Bulaa Diya - Page 10

wow...
superb update...
i really like this maanvi...
like this pt very much...
continue soon & thanx for the pm...

wow wat an awesome and dhasu update
just loved it yaar
cont soon
thx for the pm

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

hey sia that is really very intresting part

i loved it to the core

and you write it very beauifully

manvi's changing behaviour and her pain is beautifully described

and love the way how you show that she tried to distract herself from whic is happened with her in chandigarh

love arshi too here

plz cont soon and do try to pm me

Thanks so much, and yh she has changed so much i alway imagined hw she would change. I wanted someone to eitw bt then my patience brock and i began to rite myself.
N yh ofcourse if u r added to my buddylist you will d4 b pmed

Originally posted by: keertu

continue soon.really loved it.😃

Thanks for ur comment

I like this manvi. How much she would have felt hurt to change herself into different person.
Nice update . Continue soon.

Originally posted by: virumanu

wow man u are one of the best writer in if .part 2 was amazing cntinue soon

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

Wow sia awesome update ..:-)
I love the fact tht manvi is talking to virat ...
I wanna se everyones reaction wen they see the changed manvi and I dnt want her to forgive anyone of them plzzz except for chachu chachi shlok and vanshika coz they were nt at fault ...

Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome update please do continue soon😊 thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: princess84

thanks for the pm awesome part more dialogues for now but awesome continue soon

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

lovely update... but u should go a little bit slow with th happenings nd it would be great if u add more dialogues yaar... once again, liked so much manvis attitude in this story... make vadheras more guilty nd it would be excellent (evil laugh)... cont soon nd thnks fr th pm...:)