ArshiFF:The Controlling Lover(16+) Thread 1 Ch1-13 - Page 65

The story has a pace and is progressing well without long breaks by writer as in other stories

Hmmm.., Arnav is mystrey.. Which Khushi is going to solve..

Wow chapters 11 n 12 were awesome
Never seen or read fifty shades so can't compare
I can only sad I like this story its der captured my interest
Anyways back to my comment
arnav giving khushi a phone n telling his secretary to put her through to him no matter what he is doing is showing some posessiveness for her already ...yes n also the fact he is finding it hard to sleep without her beside him tells me khushi has become his addiction now maybe instead of his pot.
Also have noticed the little posessiveness in khushi too the way she notices other girls eyeing him n how she feels afterwards...worried or angry
Looks like Lavanya noticed but can't identify it yet
Looking forward to seeing how their relationship progresses n how khushi handles it
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

well i too think therez smthng with this guy

Loved the cheer leaders expressions...lol...continue soon

Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Lavanya is having some doubts it seems.

pls update soon, Can't wait to read the next chapter

nice update...what is arnav thinking abt khushi n him together??

OMFGGG :O
Second TIME ?? O.o
I need it ASAP !!
PLEASEE

He has actually became a controlling lover now