THE HIDDEN SECRET - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi..dear ur story is owsum..don't even think to discontinue it..lols...

Yeah really... its fab.

teaser is very interesting..UPDATE SOOON..:)

tc...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
mr Kapoor ur end is near...this time u have 2 face both Arnav and Aarav...hope he s caught and Khushi s brought safe...want mr Kapoor 2 face hell...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Abt d note ur story is amazing so dont think of discontinuing it
Teaaer is actually teasing me so plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing teaser..
khushi murdered and arnav fainted, is that why she changed her name so that the killer wont know that she s alive? wonder wat actually happened.
pls continue soon..i really like ur writing..i dont think there s need to change ur writing style..
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome teaser
ur note is valid maybe
d no. of likes nd comments might have decreased
due to holidaying by readers or ppl with exams like me
pls update soon
nd trust me I love ur story nd look forward for ur updates
so pls do not discontinue d story
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey everybody tank u for all the responses and ya i've decided not to stop for those people who dnt care 2 comment.Y shud i? Anyway here's chapter 17 .This is a very important chapter but i dnt knw how much justice i've done towards it.Read and comment

CHAPTER 17

Arnav was searching for his Kushi like a maniac.He was getting scared he immediately informed Aarav about the same.Aarav immediately informed the police and began searching for his daughter.Nandhini was continuously praying in the pooja room.

In the factory where kushi was held captive.

The men returned with the legal documents.The head moved towards kushi who was unconscious.The assistants splashed water on her face and she slowly came out of her unconscious state.But before she could analyse what's going on around her she felt a gun pointed towards her .She was very scared.She could feel her end nearing.The goons made her sign the legal documents.The sound of a gunshot was heard.

At the same time Arnav who had been searching for Kushi saw her chain which was lying on the ground near an old factory.He immediately went inside the factory.He could feel something very bad was coming.He heard the sound of a gunshot once he entered inside.

He shouted :"No!!!!!!!"

There lying on the ground in a pool of blood was his life his wife his Kushi.Arnav immediately fainted seing his wife dead.

The head goon :"Let's escape quickly before the arrival of the police"

The goons immediately left the place.And there lie Arnav and Kushi on the floor.

The policemen who had traced Arnav's cell entered the old factory .They saw an unconscious Arnav and a dead Kushi on the floor.They were immediately transferred to the hospital.

Here back at home Aarav received a phonecall.

Cop: Mr.Raizada I'm sorry we couldn't save your daughter.Miss Kushi is no more.

Aarav:No!!!! this can't happen Nooo

Cop:Your son who had fainted n the spot has been admitted in the hospitalPlease come and identify your daughter's body and finish off the legal formalities.We're sorry but the culprits have escaped yet again.Please reach St Andrew's Hospital Northampton immediately.

Nandhini immediately inquired about the whereabouts of her kids.Aarav who was in a trance said"Our Kushi is dead"

Nandhini:"What!!!1"

She fainted.

Flashback over

Akash:Kya Kushi is dead what nonsense are you saying Arnav!! Then who the hell is this (pointing towards Kushi)

Payal anjali and geet had tears in their eyes hering the life story of arnav and kushi.But now they were eagerly waiting for Arnav to say that Kushi had been saved by some miracle.Arnav wiped his tears that had unknowingly come and said "No Akki it's a truth Kushi Malik/Raizada is dead.She had been killed 5 years ago.She's no more.This is not Kushi Raizada(pointing towards Kushi)"

All eyes widened and turned towards Kushi who was sitting there in a corner of the couch with wet eyes.

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Posted: 12 years ago
REALLY TOUCHING
WHO IS THIS KHUSHI?
PLZ UPDATE SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
pls update soon
looking fwd for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
what is all this???😲 khushi is dead...NO!!!!!!!!!
then who is she..????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hhey thnxx for d pm,loved dis update. Amzingly good. Nw wat is dis twist i want her to be khushi malik der shud be some miracle happening. Excelllent update.. Keep updating.

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