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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

ananya the update is good i loved it

kidnapper is going to be shown and caught who is khushi and what will be circumstances if she is caught by ASR 😉

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punnaanchal

@punnaanchal

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Amazing update

U continued it after long time

Continue soon

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smilli

@smilli

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Nice..khushi kidnapped...now wat gonna happen...eagerly waiting for next part

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annanyaleya

@annanyaleya

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

NOTE:

Hi everybody i'm soo soo sorry 4 not updating.I was busy wid sme personal matters.

I've noticed the no.of likes r decreasing as the story is progressing, is this becoz the story is not nice? in that case i'l stop and not waste every1's time.Please let me know n please do inform me if u hav any suggestions on how i've to improve ma writing.As i've told be4 dis is my first written work other than wat i've done for academic purposes and comments whether dey r gud or bad wud be taken wholeheartedly 😃 I'm updating a teaser now.Update will be given only after i get a response 4 dis.

Annanya

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annanyaleya

@annanyaleya

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

TEARSER 2:

Cop: Mr Raizada Kushi Arnav Singh Raizada is no more.

Aarav:What!!!!!

Cop:She has been murdered.But we're sorry the culprit has escaped.Please come and identify the body.Your son has been admitted in the hospital because he had fainted.

The phone line gets cut.

Nandhini:Who was it and why do you look tensed?

Aaarav:Our Kushi has been murdered(still in shock) and Arnav is in the hospital.

Nandhini didn't hear the last part as she had already fainted.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

As far as d note in concerned , d stry has no problems. Its amaizngy. Plzz do not discontinue. Its amazingly good. Keep updating.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

As far as the teaser is concern itsawsum. Ohh god khushi cnt die so sooon. Arnav is unconscious. Whu is dt guy whu is behing our khushi. Excellent teaser. Thnxxx for d pm, keep updating.