Ab Ke Jo Bicherey ~pg 28 new n note~ - Page 12

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Posted: 18 years ago
new part


A week passed nothing much happened. One day kripa was doing shopping with kashish when kashish bumped in to a guy she lift her lashes to see who it is ..she was shocked a line of fear come across her face …..she hold kripa's hand tightly …while the guy tried to give her support with the jerk kashish pushed him ..kripa then looked at guy she lost her temper and yelled …"you " …….."what the hell u r doing here and actually why are u here " ……..the guy smiled it was akshat ……"look krips ….i have nothing with u ..ur husband and u ……are interfering in this matter …..with out any …particular reason …"….kripa raised her finger and with the gaze tell him to shut up …"look mr akshat …if u r forgetting kashish is sister of angad ….and my sister in law …so better stay away from her otherwise ….."……akshat gave his smirked to both ..."Otherwise kashish will face lose of ria and u will face lose of ur unborn baby "……… kashish now gathered her self and slap akshat …it was unexpected for him how could she ….." this is the answere of all misconceptions u have …I was an idiot who was standing my husband and brother
But from on ward u will see me beside them …standing and facing ur dirty games …get and ….kripa what u think she is weak like you …no she is a strong woman ……..a woman carrying her baby …u know ppl think …..at this stage woman is most weakest person alive on earth …but a lady become mother she is strongest of all …what kripa is at the moment ……so don't u dare to mess with two mothers …..otherwise God knows what will happen to you …mr.akshat shergill ….u have destroyed me enough eight years back …not now ……….I m not going to shattered this time becoz I m not weak like last time …….and yeah stay away from sujal and angad ….i swear to God I will spare u …….i will kill u "……………akshat who was standing quietly since five minutes laughed uncontrolled……"hey kash….opps mr.kashish sujal grewal ……baby u are saying ……this ….as far as ..i remember u love me right …"……..kashish become furious…and yelled .."that was the biggest mistake I did damn it ……..i hate u …..no I don't hate u ….i have nothing for nor love neither love "……akshat …"so love ur hubby now haan "…..kashish ..smiled "u know what I do not love him …but I love him as a friend ..i donot share any physical relationship with him in past eight years but I have more then that…we do not share the relation of love ……but the relation in which we share friendship and pain ….which bigger then love !" kashish continued …"I don't know whether we would be able to spend life like a normal couple or not …..but I m sure we will be remain as best friends forever…." Akshat when saw mixed emotions of love , friendship, longing , pain ……he feel a layer of jealousy also added in his and kashish's relation.!


Hi sweeties

Due to Ramadan mubarak I don't have pretty good time I will continue my fanfics …when ever I get opportunity ..at the present I m trying to complete MOHABBAT JAB HO GAI becoz it have only 5 or 6 parts remaining . plus I m also engaged with some assignments and projects . I hope u understand .
Thanks for u support and love
amna



and yeah i m sorry for posting small parts ..it is all sue to short time ....that i have always lolz 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi nice part yar..... chalo ab kashish ki bhi himmat ai gai... her dialogue abt sujal was so cute...plz post the next part soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
amna dear a very coollllll part..bohat hi achcha tha.. oh the part was just totally super coollllllllllllllllllll.....👏
first of all i got very angry on akshat & wanted to seriously kick him... uski itni himmat ki kripa aur kashish ko daraye....😡
phir jab kashish ne usse tappad marra... usse baatein sunayi..tooooooooooo zabardast..... mazaa aagaya..... 👏
hmm tho akshat ko abhi se jealosy hone lag gayi.. aage aage me very sure akshat ka haal behaal ho jayega sujal , kashish ko ek dusare ke aur kareeb jaathe dekhkar... 😉
ab please jaldi se continue karna.. me will be waiting for the next part... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part. No prob wenever u get time u continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Gr8 part aamna di 👏

Plz cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
It was damn good Aamna di!!!!!! And yes!! Your story is always worth the wait!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi amna
i read ur story today very nice
do cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
new part


Kripa and kashish sitting on kashish's bed ….when kripa said " di ik baat kahoon ?" ..kashish look at her and smile .."no you bring permit …from court for that !" ……kripa become annoyed "ha ha ha ha …di very funny …ab boloon main "…….kashish smile at her kidish behavior .."ok baba bolo ….."…kripa bit her lower lip …."well ..mujey lagta hai ..ki .."….kashish cocked a brow .."kia lagta hai krips " ….kripa smile now "mujey lagta you love jeeju "..kashish who was playing with her fingers stoped ….she looked up with shocking expression "…krips are u alright …….main aur sujal …kabhi nahi "…kripa is now pretty mad …'kyun nahi di ……after all he is your husband ajj 8 saal horey hein magar u guys donot share any thing except friendship ..kab tak di …kab tak apney app ko rook gi …app maan lo ke u love him "………angad enters in room …."she is right di ……main tu ik saal tak kripa ke saath us ke pass rehney ke baad khud ko nahi rok paya see now she is …….mine and I m hers forever …with every relation and aspect ..hai na kripa ..between how is my daughter doing "…he winked at her ..kripa become red at this sentence .." a- angad ..tum bhi hum kia baat karey they aur ….tumhey tu main baad main batati hoon "……..kashish smiled at both …"dekho tum dono ka demaagh kharab ho gya hai essa kuch nahi hai …" ……..angad made a face "krips darling ye hubby wife nahi behen bhai lagtey hein sachi …..dono khayal kiitney miltey hein ..sujal bhi ye sochta hai …" kashish punched in his stomach .."angad u r mad ……..see we are friends only …"…anad is now enjoying the situation …"aur ye friends forever ka board app ke ghar ke bahir se kab uttrey ga …"…kashish is now annoyed …"tum dono jao yahan se …….phalto ki batein kerney ke ilawa kuch nahi atta ..aur angad tum ne samaan shift kia yahan .."…kripa is now amazed .."kon sa samaan di .."..kashish looked at her .."well yahan London main …….merey hotey howey tum hotel main raho …demmagh kharab nahi hai mera ..ke tumhey is halat main is angad ke bherosey chor doon "……angad is making weird faces now …"haan haan leker agya main saara saman infact kamrey main rakh ker arraha hoon …kia yaar acha khasa romance kersakta tha wahan ..aur ap ne .." ..before angad could continue kripa stomps her feet over his he yell .."kripaaaaaaaaaaa…." ..kripa is now angry …….."chalo tum …" they left and kashish think …about hat they just said …then she remember all the good moments with sujal .




Ik ajnaabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Betabiyoon main dhadkan meri chal paye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Kuch bhi kaha na kuch bhi suna na phir bhi bechain dil hai humara

Behkey kadam hein mushkil main hum hein dekho samley bhala kesey yaara

Chahey bina hi nazdeek hum haley aye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

She remember when she and sujal got married how like a good friend he allowed her to live in a way she wanted …….when he gave his name to ria !

Nazrein bichalein pehrey lagalein dil pe per dil kisi ki na manien

Katoon pe chal ke shooloon main jal ke rokein mil ke rahengye deewanee

Chahat ki yaad tu andhi main bhi jhilmilaye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Ik ajnaabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

She remember when she used to made break offs ..with random guys and sujal support her there !

Ye mulakatein ye teri ankhein batein …ik pal na main bhool paon

Kitni mohabat hai kitni chahat tum se kesey bhala main bataoon

Acha lagye jo wo samney muskaraye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Ik ajnaabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Kuch bhi kaha na kuch bhi suna na phir bhi bechain dil hai humara

She remember how they both share every thing..Sleep together , live together , wake together ……expect physical relations !


Behkey kadam hein mushkil main hum hein dekho samley bhala kesey yaara

Chahey bina hi nazdeek hum haley aye Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai

Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai Shayad ye hi tu pyaar hai


In end she had smile , determination …..a satisfaction on her face!

On the other hand kripa angad…entered in room ..kripa seems to be happy that she is finally in a home rather then hotel …while angad is pissed off……….kripa" angad I m so happy ….here "…angad looked at her in utter shock "jaan tumhara pregnancy ki wajah se demaagh tu kharab nahi hogya …"….kripa"kia matlab ….."….angad give her naughty smirk …"see I cant be all time romeo here na .."…kripa laughed and pushed him …. :shut up …" before she could continue angad's mouth was over hers …..and scene changed !

I know it was more abt kripa angad ..but actually I wanna show how romantic they are …..and their presence in KS …house make two feel the same for each other !


amna
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part
cont soon OK
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Posted: 18 years ago
i just started reading. its a good fanfic and i dont mind the ak stuff cuz im crzy bout them.. but i like sk also.. well continune sooooooooooonn.. hopefully by the end of the shes my daugter not urs phase sujal and kashish will realize they luv eachother!!

continue sooonn

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