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masam thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Naive.
She's naive from heart and mind, he's naive from heart. The cliffhanger at the end, would finally my answer my questions, and I am keeping my fingers crossed until then.
Their relations is moving on a spiral road, smooth most of the time but the physical intimacy gets in way, and that's when her naivety resurfaces. I just love Khushi for keeping a clear mind, and him on her side.
His past- really painful. Sometimes the anger gets in way, and it drives beloved people miles away, leaving their importance behind. No wonder he doesn't get emotionally attached.

Congo's on the new thread, NBji, keep it rollin'! 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all CONGRATULATIONS..FOR YOUR NEW THREAD...!!!!
I have recently found out about it from a friend...and I really really loved it...its an really realistic story .I just loved it sooo much...but didnt want to bother you for PMs as I had a lot to catch up...but now I have already caught up that too only in 2 days..!!!
So I would really appreciate I you send me PMs for this Ff as I am already in love with it...and also your other works if any. 😊 😊
I promise to comment as I know how much effort it takes to write a beautifulstory..take care.. 😊 😊
Edited by skmr.bs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
just read the entire FF!
lovedd it! <3
please do pm me wen you update next... 😳
Edited by ipkknd_hazel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
NAACH B ..FANTASTIC UPDATE

THE GROWING BOND IS MAKING KHUSHI MORE CONFUSED

ARNAV KNOWS WHAT HE WANTS BUT DOES NOT WANT TO

ACKNOWLEDGE WHAT HE NEEDS

I COMPLETELY RESPECT HER NO BELIEF IN INTIMACY BEFORE

MARRIAGE ...IT MAY NOT BE OK WITH MANY BUT IF SHE IS SURE

THEN SHE SHOULD NOT GIVE IN TO TEMPTATIONS

ANY TIME SOON

ARNAV MUST UNDERSTAND HER AS HE KNOWS N ADMIRES

HER MATURITY LEVEL

THIS TENSION MAY BREAK OR MAKE HER PRINCIPLES THAT SHE

IS FOLLOWING

NAACH B I AM SO HAPPY TO READ THE UPDATE I MAY SOUND

OLD FASHIONED BUT I STERNLY BELIEVE IN WHAT KHUSHI

BELIEVES

MY RESPECT N ADMIRATION FOR YOUR WORK INCREASED

BY LEAPS N BOUNDS

THANKS FOR THE PM

ALERT ME




KKKA
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Posted: 12 years ago
i recently came across your story and i must say, it is very well written.cannot put together too many flowery words but just want to let you know that your writing is appreciated and i'm hooked
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Posted: 12 years ago
jst read chptr 24 it was fab 😊
waiting eagerly 4r de nxt update 😃 plz update soon... Btw congo 4r de new thread 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...I bet this has to be one of the best FF's i have read in IF...Loved your title...👏

The writing style is very good...😊
Best part of this FF's is Khushi...Loved the innocent,but determined Khushi...
Hope Arnav changes his mind soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just wanted to say, I'm waiting for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
finished reading d whole 4 threads @ a go coz it was so interesting!!😊 ... it was recommended by V ...a hug to her for it 🤗 ...

wow! to be in a situation where ur values conflict wid ur heart!! i feel for Khushi...going for values means heartache while listening to heart means being hypocrite ..uff,tough choice!
arnav is well arnav...love conquers all in d end..dats something he's gonna find out eventually and change his mind abt marriage -my thots..😃

Anjali is really one meddler ,isnt she?!... i like Payal here coZ she is so level headed,mature and sensible...d advice she gives khushi are so practical...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey NB!!

The first time I read your work was the collab ff! and then I found the link to this FF!

Just today I was surfing through my bookmarks and opened this one and this what I have been religiously doing since then! Even though I have a paper to write day after considering its already past 00:00 Its tomorrow :P :D

But seriously buddy it was worth the whole time and it had me hooked I tried my level best to close up on some or the other chapter thinking I can catch up on later but each chapter's finish was at such a place that it was hard to resist! and in the end where I had to end up when she posed him the question about his wedding beliefs! bhagawan kuduthaanakum! [ I deserve it :P decently should have stopped long back now I cannot help the urge to read further :P]

The way you have outlined the whole story is just too brilliant! And what more is yet no where near the prologue!! It's really interesting to see what's getting unfolded in each chapter! Be it their meet! Her zeal to live life now, yet not compromise on her family and their love!

The strong support and much needed friend she has in Payal and Akash who help her without actually helping her! suggest but in the end lets her decide! really wonderful!

the way things fell in place the superb london trip and the happenings there their first kiss! and not to forget his nightmare! and returning back the avoidance the acceptance coming to terms with what happened, her break up with Nk!! then on talking terms with him and understanding whats ahead for them ending it!

that quote was lovely to love and lose rather than not love at all! sorry if I haven't got it right! getting back together and from there on the small moments! all so lovely! and I adore Payal and Akash's characterization!!

Anjali and clan are cho chweet! and Anjali is Anjali! the sister always! :)

All in all amazing story and a superb writer!! I cherish this completely! Do accept buddy request and pm pretty pls when you update!

Gosh I have commented so long! :P

Cheers


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