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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
nice updates
missed reading about adla

i loved this lines

She felt a hand grasp and turn her, and found herself buried against Adi.

Have told you not to cry when I am not there, he scolded her bringing in a fresh flood of tears.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
is there any hope getting adla back?? or it will be same as tweeting utti mama?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Wow Wat an story completed in 2 days really excited to know Wat nxt the goodbye is really painful for d characters & for their fans too. Jaya di I marvel for writing a beautiful story. Waiting for ur comeback..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOW

She stood looking up at him. Her eyes shifted from his eyes to his dimples.

La , he had called.

Deep inside the recess of her shadowed soul, memories stirred.

He smiled down at her.

She smiled back. Her eyes turned grey.

Come he murmured, holding out his hand.

Without hesitation she put her small one into his warm large comforting palm.

Slowly he led her to the edge of the pool, pulled her along with him to dip her feet into the clear water.

They sat silently together, comfort wrapped around them.

His love for her grew more, more protective than he had ever been, more understanding.

Her love for her Dr. A had never had gone away it was just beyond those clouds.

The clouds were ready to burst.

The gate creaked.

They both turned.

Two people stood watching them.

One tall, one beautiful.

A hint of tears in their eyes.

Shyla smiled before she could stop herself.

She turned towards Adi, and looked towards the still waters.

She swung her legs kicking up the water.

A laugh escaped from her lips as droplets fell on her and Adi.

3 people chocked at the familiar sound.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
omg its here can't believe still naren and ridhi r here to meet them..but shyla got her memory back?suddenly?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
no she did not...dear lolz... she will though sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
ready to wait till i get my fav doctor-patient but shylu is able to walk
Edited by Patrarekha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Wow even after so many days memories are still fresh of this most beauitful romantic story. Thanks Jay. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
i think in the previous [ days back] i had mentioned she could walk with a little help. sorry it has been long,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shall We Get Married ???

She stood within his hug, his shirt was getting pretty wet.

She tried to gulp off the tears, unsuccessfully.

He moved her away to look into her face.

I think I will ask your father whether we can get married right now , he said cocking his head to one side,

That effectively stopped all the tears.

Adi she half sobbed half laughed.

You know, I could, he grinned bending down to wipe her tears.

Do You want me too?

His voice sounding serious...

She so wanted too, but she also knew what was best for both of them.

No she sniffed,

I will be back soon pumpkin,

I know, she sniffed again,

No crying,

No, more sniffing.

Go .. she said, pushing him.

Are you sure, a hint of teasing danced in his yes,.

Get lost , a smile glimmered through.

It remained there as she watched him drive away.

She skipped back to her house, she needed to start packing for her trip to Mumbai,

He sat back in the car and grinned. He wished she had said Yes to marriage!!!!!

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