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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Awww...I so loved it.
Thanks for the PM and continue soon.
Congrats for the new thread.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GOOD BYES CAN BE TEARFUL

I hate good byes, and in a couple of days you will go away too, she stood waving at the disappearing car, her eyes all sad.

Come on doll, I will make you a big cup of coffee. He watched her from the kitchen, it was going to be difficult leaving her, to return to Mumbai.

He settled down next to her with a large mug of coffee, where is mine? She asked searching, Share from mine, holding it against her lips. They sipped alternatively; I like that, a smile at last showing up. I don't even have to hold the mug.

What is the box that you brought along?

Something for you. He leaned forward to take it.

It is something I made.

Then it will be exquisite untying the ribbon.

He pulled out the frame, running his hand on the shells , and looked towards, where did you get this picture,

Naren's mobile, she took it from his hand and held it close to her. It is so perfect.

That frame will go wherever I go , taking it back from her.

The box held one more item, the pristine white handkerchief, the embroidered A , he tucked it into his pocket. And that will stay there.

Shyla went to get more coffee.

Like them? She asked settling back next to him.

Any doubts?

They continued sipping the coffee.

Adi have to go college, got a test coming up next week. She made no move to get up though.

He groaned, he had forgotten all about her college.

Do you have to, his fingers playing with her tresses.

mmm… she murmured loving the feel of his fingers. Yesss.

He bent to nuzzle the nape of her neck. His lips making its way towards her lips.

Adi….k…k.college, he brushed her hair back, pushing it behind her ears. Pulling her against his shoulder, her murmured against her forehead You are not supposed to look this delicious; she bit her lip and batted her lashes at him. It is all your fault, your love makes me feel the way I feel. She leaned forward pressed her lips against his, got up and was near the door before he could react.

Run princess, remember You have to come back here, indicating his arms.

I love you, she said, wanting to go back into the waiting arms.

Bye she called before running off towards her house.

Adi sighed, came up with some reasons for taking her along, none of which seemed logical.

Resigned to fact that, he will be driving back alone.

She got busy with her college, and he got down to finalizing new doctors for the clinic which was almost nearing completion. It was fully equipped, stocked with medicines, even had an X-ray unit.

A few more things to be taken care off, and the clinic will be independent of him and Naren.

That would also mean moving back to Mumbai. He sat pondering how to let his princess know about this.

Nandu as usual had packed up and got the car ready.

He had already Met Himant and Mala, Dadi and Nani. They had no problem with Shyla coming over to Mumbai.

I will take the train, she was arguing with him, I am not a kid, he grinned, I know, but Its your first visit angel, want to drive you to your home.

It was impossible to fight his charm, she gave in, will miss you, hugging him tightly.

He folded his arms around him, kissing the top of her head . she lifted her face, he cupped it in his palms, her lips parted, his came to meet them. Going to miss you more, my little one. Feathering kisses on her cheeks.

His hand gripped hers as they walked to the car. He kissed once more before getting into the car.

You run home princess, don't want you standing here all alone.

She nodded, bye she called as the car started moving away.

He watched her in the mirror, as she turned away, and saw the slightest shaking of her shoulder.

Nandu stop.

Shyla waved turned and burst into tears. She had held it back, not wanting him to see her crying.

She felt a hand grasp and turn her, and found herself buried against Adi.

Have told you not to cry when I am not there, he scolded her bringing in a fresh flood of tears.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
its a awww update...isn't shylu looks bit more vulnerable ??
and Adi needs opportunity to kiss his princess..whatever and whenever it is😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Wow and wowww for both the updates romantic emotional and just so good to read. When u get in sync with the characters u read means they have touched your heart strings. So cute these two feels for all the emotions they go through. Waiting to hear from u about LA today. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Omg how romantic awww don't cry Shyla. Hmmm what a kiss it must be if I imagine lol. Love u r superb jaya beyond words that can describe. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Rocking updates Jay. Loved the romance as well as the emotions of going away from ur beloved. Adla stirs all these emotions within you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
As usual awesome update akka😊😊i just loved it..especially this part..


He watched her in the mirror, as she turned away, and saw the slightest shaking of her shoulder.

Nandu stop.

Shyla waved turned and burst into tears. She had held it back, not wanting him to see her crying.

She felt a hand grasp and turn her, and found herself buried against Adi.

Have told you not to cry when I am not there, he scolded her bringing in a fresh flood of tears.



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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Awesome romantic updates. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
it's a very hot afternoon in kolkata, only the update of your story can cool me down now. so please update, jay.
Edited by Tarakari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Very good one, Jaya di😆😊.
Teasing & romance in one... AWESOME.
Sorry could not comment on the previous one because my exams were going.
Waiting for the next one & thanks for the PM 😊

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