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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

For Chapter 7-

I've a feeling that when ASR bought The Wild Bull with La they had put up this charade that they were dating so that other men didn't give her unwanted attention. Aman n La got together later but have kept their relationship under wraps for some reason.

Khushi was wearing full sleeves to hide her marks, wasn't she?

Of course the protective and possessive Arnav can't see Khushi working in a saloon. His demo didn't quite work but Arnav's intention was never to harm her. Some other man who was intent on it would be a different case.

I'll keep my views about the dream to myself again.

Dream on Khushi. You've the right :)

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Two more updates? I love you dammit!

First things first, that was a lovely poem! And I love all scenes with Nanny Raizada, the wise old lady who is to take care of her children. She's raised such noble boys and seen a lot in her lifetimes. Love her to bits!

Arnav cannot see her tears, respects the secret she shared with him and is protective of her. He is ashamed of himself for having bruised her. Such a lovely man, and he is so kind! Came up with a middle ground so everyone is happy..

And Khushi, she is an innocent child but she is badass! Oh, and Arnav makes her blush so prettily :D

Suspense, romance, action..everything is right here! I am slowly getting addicted to this story, give me more jaldi !

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Lovely Update!!!!
Pretty different from the other FFs, but love it.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Loved the poetry and Nanny taking advice from the owl.

Khushi is a fiesty girl.

Loved the way she gave it to Aman.

Shyam seems to be following Khushi.

She might have been scared but she didn't spare Arnav too.

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Strong attraction building between Arnav and Kushi...so strong that both don't know what not to do...!

Arnav being all protective...trying to scare Kushi into quitting...! A calm calculative person with a deeply ingrained sense of doing right...when it comes to business but totally clueless on how to handle a woman..!

Nanny has night communes with owl's ... And how does she understand ...? Do the animal references mean something...?

The question on why Arnav wanted Box-Lightining is now clear...Arnav clearly has his role cut out an he takes up the responsibility very seriously...he does not have to do so many things but he does and with obvious love...that is so so...so awsome...!

Nanny is already making plans for the Gupta sisters...! nice..!

Aman and La have a nice setup going...strangers by day and lovers by night...ha...!

The title of both the chappie s..Angels and Demons...for me draws a parallel to the scene where Kushi is teching the children and telling the fairy tale...and she asks the question how can the same person be pal mey rajkumar pal mey rakshas...!

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

just came across this ff and read all the chapters...very interesting concept of presenting Arnav-Khushi story in the western genre...i l enjoyed reading so far and will be waiting to read more...

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

I have read the FF all the chapters in one go...very refreshing story...thanks to Rasgulla_sp for recommending this FF...Please PM me the updates...Thanks in advance

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Superb...really...am glad Charu recommended this story to me...

Love the animals spirits who are guiding them, their presence takes the story forward so beautifully and now poetically too. It was really amazing, it's like hearing their thoughts voiced ...

The night seems to be a time to ponder, reflect and introspect, sleep seems to playing with all of them...Khushi cannot get over why she felt it was okay to break down in from too Arnav and memories of him and his feel soak her up...

Nanny is match making from her point of view...but fate has other plans for her pairs...

Arnav in a dilemma ...apart from the twins he is also thinking of Khushi...her vulnerability touched his heart and his decision now making things tougher...he can not ignore her...I thought he would offer to marry her...

So Rudy is Anjali s father in law...just a thought but was he shot by the guy in with the bracelet in the beginning? Shyam?

Is Shyam s connection to all this deeper than just his interest in Anjali?

I wonder what the Guptas make of his proposal, sounds interesting and practical ...

I loved how Arnav is mesmerised to see Khushi in a dress and soon the thought of her exposed to so many men in the bar brings out his protectiveness for her, love how he cannot help but question La on Khushi's appointment and very un characteristically tells La she cannot work there, La smart and perceptive to catch his concern for for it really is...he just cannot risk something happening ...does he realise why ? Love their anxiety and waiting for more jealous Arnav now that he knows where to find her...

Aman and la together...also I like...

Thank you for the double treat ...it was double joy!,

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

This is for last two chapters
Fire, I have always obsession with cowboy hats, there is saying, want to judge a cowboy capacity, check his boots and hats. Here, how to say, whenever arnav uses his hat to wear or to dust makes me scream my mind yeah.
After reading these two I am damn going to stick with salma and Antonio, that was unexpected, Ela with aman. But my doubt is he is caring or using her?
Your arnav is perfect blend of the arnav we saw in the show with the west wild. He is full into business and approaching with dimag only dimag, Caja De Rayo, I liked the history related to it, so Rudi didn't wanted to sell for his own reason but arnav wanted to buy for Drew Roy and Dave Roy. Hope sashi, feels the offer is comfortable for him.
That practical lesson to kushi, oh you arnav so caring, you are mixed up with your own feelings.
Fire thanks for the pm, thanks a lot for the cowboy arnav and thanks for getting rid of anarkali's, I liked this kushi with jean, plaid shirts with fleckled vest with boots and hats.