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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

First of all let me say i love this double dose of updates !!! 😃

Chap 6 : Nanny R is really a wise old lady and am glad she got the direct hint from the spirits ...even though she may have thought otherwise !

So now we know the reason behind Arnav so aggresively rooting for Box Lighting ..and i am sure with this new deal the Guptas will definitely partner with him.

Rudi was shot ??😲

Chap 7: The waited interaction between A and K at the Wild Bull ... i was so looking foward to it and it was lovely. ASR was not only protective , possessive but also jealous and that makes him all the more irresistible !😉 He tried making Khushi understand the need to stay away from the saloon by his own ways but Khushi is not called a firebrand just like that eh !😆

So Aman and Ela are together ... but y this secrecy ??

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Nanny is so so wrong; I'm glad the spirits are working in the right direction😊

Haila Rudy is the grandfather of Drew and Dev?😲 Now that's what I call a twist😃 And would it be wrong to guess that Shyam had a role in the bullet in Rudy's head?😉

Was the question just for the purpose of asking or does Nanny really drink? If yes, yeh Nanny super forward hai!

This Arnav is not just a shrewd rancher but also a considerate guy...my way of saying that I already like him😳

Why does he have a problem with her braid?😕 as the author you can tell him that he's going to get a chance to untie it😳

Nice to see Khushi 'taking care' of herself!👏

So Aman and Ela have 'whatever' going on between them...hmmm

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kushigowda

@kushigowda

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

nice update😊arnav dont want khushi to work there...

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

outstanding! absolutely loved it.

i want to start bugging you for the next update right away

loved every bit of the story. very well done

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

One of my favorite comics was Lucky Luke - the lonesome cowboy. Your Arnav reminds me of him. I always loved western even I did not grow up in NA. This story is becoming dearer and dearer to me because of the Western angle but also because of the way you are narrating it. The characters are all interesting and you have done a great job of integrating what was at the core of them in IPK in your versions of them. Though Aman and La, not sure where this came from. I am loving them though as they are so strong and passionate. Why are they not married? Is Aman with someone else or they did not cross this bridge yet? Now we know why ASR want the ranch and it is a very noble reason indeed. Loved his little dilemma with putting the Guptas out on the street and how he solved it. For a minute, I thought he was going to offer marriage as a solution but that would have been too ASR of IPK, all actions no thoughts. I love Kushi's dream but I am intrigued by it. Di they know each other as kids? It does not seem like it but the dreams (both Nani's and Kushi's) seem to point to some kind of connection between them. Is he going to get back at her for kneeing him? Thank god, he has good reflexes. Somehow, I think he will be coming to Yerba more often now.

Btw, love how you update 2 chapters at once, as they are connected and give your readers a chance to take a break.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

It was beautiful Madhu, I am really loving this. Thanks for the pm.

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

You know, Madhu! all your stories have such delicious undercurrents that it makes them an absolute delight to read...Khushi's past, Nanny's and the owl, Khushi's dream, the intriguing setting for this western, even Ela's dimple, Arnav (everything about him, literally), ...😊 just delightful

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Jst strtd 2 reading ur story...
Awesm concpt... Lovd it...:)
So arnav sees khushi at d pub...
He s so possesiv ovr her...
Nd Aman nd lavanya r 2thr...!!!!
Intrstng...Cntinue soon...
Nd plz accpt my frnd reqst nd do PM me...

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

For Chapter 6:

I LOVED the poem...

You are so good with words that you can rhyme them 😲

While reading the poem I had guessed that Arnav is the Eagle and Khushi is the Deer (even without reading the Ansg Post... You included me in it!!! I jumped with joy... And you kinda took my suggestion too. Thanks 😊)

A night of sleeplessness. Nanny is told by the spirits that the pair she is thinking of is not right... Horse and Swan and Eagle and Deer are the right pairs... The tug of heart and mind is present but things will take their course...

Khushi cant sleep thinking about exposing her vulnerable side to him and having him hold so roughly

Arnav cant sleep coz he has seen the vulnerable side of Khushi and also was the giver of the physical proof of her vulnerability...

I love him. He wants to buy BL, take care of it and return it to DnD when they grow up coz it is their right by birth and blood...

I love him. He cant see Khushi moving once again, crying, broken... He makes a business proposal that makes everyone happy...

So, Arnav is on the way to the Wild Bull... Cant wait!

PS: He smirks and she blushes! Oh the braid!

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago