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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anamikarocks

Awesome!!!

So what's next...ofcourse Asad's confession!!!
And then happily ever after!!!😃


not so soon... i'm thinking of extending it to some more shots...lets see what i write tonight... and happily ever after is must yaar sad likhungi toh main khush kaise rahungi...serial me bhi kuch dhamaka hone wala hai i just saw the spoilers pics so...
Edited by stellar_sheen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Hi
amazing part.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
I was so scared after d precap in the first shot...hae finally he found her..n he heard her confessing...dat was a aww moment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice dear😊

asad will confess hs feelings⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
NOTICE

I'm using this account only for pming updates of both the stories

1) teri meri love story (arshi) and

2) qubool hai ss

As some reads only arshi and some only asya...

PLEASE AFTER SENDING BUDDY REQUEST DO PM ME FOR WHICH STORY U WANT PMS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

4th shot

There was a sudden thunder in the sky and asad's voice got lost in the thunder. It started raining heavily asad was not able to speak anymore. Zoya's condition choked his voice. The bonfire went off and zoya moved in the small hut she had made with tree branches leaves under a big tree. Asad also went near the hut and he was also safe becoz the big tree. He sat next to the hut whereas zoya sat inside it. Zoya still hadnt seen asad, her injuries had decreased her attentiveness.

"Thank you allah miyyan I had been part of a lots of adventurous program other wise this bonfire and hut would have been impossible and I would have died long time back starving in this forest." and zoya smiled after what one can call long time.

A minute back she was crying and now she is smiling. She had cried enough these 2 weeks thinking about what could have happened if Mr. Khan would have stopped her, if he had accepted his feelings. Now her pain was less as she had let it out of her system to no one else but this forest.

She again started blabbering there to no one but herself.

"crazy" asad chuckled.

"zoya faruqui finally u got this stream and tomorrow you are starting towards its downflow where it will meet the sea means u will be at sea shore. According to me as the burning smell is still cuming means the debris have not been removed and there will be people around there and u'll get rescued anyhow. Next they will take u to the nearest sea port from there to hospital or police station to contact ur relatives. Then I'll call'. Umhhh call' call whom I don't remember contacts damn it.

Yes''.. I remember I remember Mr. Khan's contact''. No I cant call him. This will trouble him more."

Till now asad was listening to her with a smile on his face but this part of her self conversation made him drop his smile.

"IDEA!!!!" zoya shouted and asad looked at her with unbelievable expressions.

"hospital or police station they will be having internet and I remember my facebook password yaar I'll contact jeeju from there and will be going back''.."

Asad got disappointed hearing her say she would go back. The night went on with her blabbering and he didn't realized when they both dozed off.

It was morning, the sun was up, birds were chirruping and crackling sound of the stream was pleasant in the pleasant morning. Zoya woke up with a start and looked around where she was. It took her some time to remember what is happening around her. Nothing was happening around her as she was in a still forest with no living being'.. Slowly she remembered what happened in last few days.

Zoya came out of the hut and lazily stretched her body. She turned some left some right to give some exercise to her backbone after all she had to make a long journey today. And then her eyes fellon the creature lying beside her hut. Ahe was shocked to see a man there would be an understatement. The person's back was facing her and he was in deep sleep she could make out with the soft snoring coming from the man.

Yes, she knew the man but was superbly shocked to what he was doing in the forest. To confirm her small doubt about the man zoya picked up a stick which she was using as a walking stick because of her injuries and also as her tool for protection. She started moving towards the person, his back still faced her. She was scared as if he is some one else and someone harmful then what????

Edited by stellar_sheen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
oh cant wait for them to meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Waiting for the lovebirds to meet!!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
waiting for them to meet and for their cute nok jhok
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Awwhh that was amazing dear!!
You are a realy good writer and I loved how I was able to visualise the whole scene!
I am just eagerly waiting for them both to meet!! Awesome job Xx

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