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Tulips123

@Tulips123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

omg 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

double dhamka

luved the update 😃😃😃😃😃😃

creep shyam😡

can't wait for the next update😃

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

OMG!!! That was so worth the wait.

I loved how you built nasty Shyam, he disgusts me! YUCK

The sizzling chemistry between Arnav and Khushi at the end was so well written I just loved the face off. I could just picture them yelling at each other, Khushi pushing Arnav and Arnav pushing her against the wall. That made the kiss so much hotter!

Thank you so much for the 2 chapters. I just love this story.

Hope the next chapter is not too far off. I know i'm greedy after all this! 😆

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sree devi

@lucia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

nice update...
please give me your blog link

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
OMG!!! That was so worth the wait.

I loved how you built nasty Shyam, he disgusts me! YUCK

The sizzling chemistry between Arnav and Khushi at the end was so well written I just loved the face off. I could just picture them yelling at each other, Khushi pushing Arnav and Arnav pushing her against the wall. That made the kiss so much hotter!

Thank you so much for the 2 chapters. I just love this story.

Hope the next chapter is not too far off. I know i'm greedy after all this! 😆

Writing about Shyam was the main for the delay... In my other two stories, there is no particular negative character so it took me time to write his part. I have no idea how many times I just kept on typing and deleting...
I had to complete the updates...after posting the two updates I read your 'Finding Love' update... motivating myself in that way...
I dozed off yesterday after completing the updates...so the delay in posting...
Thanks for commenting...

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: sruthiif.1710

Writing about Shyam was the main for the delay... In my other two stories, there is no particular negative character so it took me time to write his part. I have no idea how many times I just kept on typing and deleting...
I had to complete the updates...after posting the two updates I read your 'Finding Love' update... motivating myself in that way...
I dozed off yesterday after completing the updates...so the delay in posting...
Thanks for commenting...

I just wanted to run Shyam over with my car, so that means you did an excellent job!! 😆

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

I just wanted to run Shyam over with my car, so that means you did an excellent job!! 😆

Thank you...😊

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

amazing updates dear
lved it finally asr learned who is khushi
grt

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Hey dis was a amzing update. Both chapter 4 and 5 wer awsum.. Face off was evn bettr. hope khushi comes to noe d real face of shyam and she investigates about him and arnav is also informed. Excellent udpate. Keep updating.