ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N #2 (Thd3 Link - Pg 1)

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

amazing update
arnav and khushi are getting close than ever and they are realising their love gradually too
they are so cute together.. realy great couple
continue soon

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Apoorvarani

@Apoorvarani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Amazing Updates!!! Loved them all😊

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

I liked this updated version better… That was a fabulous Fairytale birthday party. You have explained it so nicely.

NK and Khushi share nice friendship. Arnav and Khushi's relationship is also progressing. Hope Payal does not come between them in future also. God thing is Sheetal did not create any drama in the party. She was just happy to meet both of them. Do post the next chapter soon…

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Frankly I liked this chapter more.
No bitc** Payal and all, without any manipulation on Payal's part.
The picnic was so sweet and one fall seriously changed a lot. For them love begins at this moment.
Party & NK & a little jealous Arnav - awesome combination.. 😊
Loved their dance and yes they belong to each other. 😊

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Wonderful Update.

The chapters are amazing

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

Hi! 😊

Honestly, the last version just caught me off guard. What Payal did was so out of the blue. I really like this version and I think I always imagined this story to be all sweet and cute. ⭐️ I really like the way Arnav and Khushi are gradually coming close. In future, if there are any twist in the story I hope it will only bring Arnav and Khushi much closer. Great job! 👏

Thanks for the PM. Please continue soon. 😊

Edited by Rimz_k09 - 12 years ago

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Edited comment on pg. 112😉

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Welcome back Anjaji ji, we surely missed you! Great to see that you changed the track and this one is surely better than previous. Not that I had issue with previous one but I loved this one more. Lovely updates, loved the way you showed progress in their relationship, whether it was the fall they shared or their teasing or the way they were bitten by the green-eyed monster, everything made it so prefect and beautiful. They are epitome of PREFECTION, lovely! Wondering who were those 4 pairs of eyes in the end, whoever they were, glad to see they were pleased and not an issue for Arhi. Overall fantastic updates, description of whole fairytale decor was fabulous, you did a great job in planning the party!

Thank you so much for the PM, all three updates were fabulous, simply superb 😃

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narcy24

@narcy24

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

I'm glad that you have updated...

I like this trak better...they really are PERFECT...and made one for each other...

This story is wonderful...

Keep the good work.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#710

Welcome back Huni, I so missed reading this awesome story.

The updates were simply Amazing and brilliant, absolutely loved them.

Wow, Khushi in a cops outfit, what a treat for Arnav.

Awww loved the party Khushi organised for Arnav's niece, it was described so beautifully.

Khushi organised a party for Payal, would love to read whether Payal appreciated it and also whether she will find out that Khushi helped her get the job at AR.

NK and Khushi dancing was awesome, so lovely.

Arnav entering the party and straight away feeling jealous, love the advice NK gave to him.

Sheetal's reaction when she saw Khushi was superb.

Awesome writing and each update was a wonderful read.

So you decided to rewrite the chapters, loving the flow of the story.

Can I make a request if its not too much trouble, could you put in pictures, would love to see what Khushi wears on special occasions, you describe her outfits perfectly.

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx