ArHi SS - P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N #2 (Thd3 Link - Pg 1)

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Very good update ...much better read...loved it

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Sandhya

@cindistan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

nice update...read all the chapters...loved the way khushi planned the party for annie!!! good that payal didnt have the hots for arnav...slowly khushi is trying to understand arnav better and becoming a part of his family...sheetal trying to impress arnav and then stunned to find khushi was hilarious😆

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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

YOU WROTE IT! SO IT'S OBVIOUSLY PERFECT!!! like duh!!!
Lol..LOVED IT EITHER WAY! Cz no matter what you are still one of the best writers I know..
Loved the three updates!! ITS AMAZING!! I was hoping for a double booze but you gave me a. TRIPPLE booze lol..loved the update 😃

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kriti_angel1819

@kriti_angel1819

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

These chapters were really good

Can't wait for the next one :)

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Loved Ch13

when you think Sheetal will be a pain in the arse she happened to be a nice person who has a girl crush on THE KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA😆

bet that shocked Arnav LOL

awww NK seems like he was about to warn Arnav to never harm Khushi or else he has had it

but love the progression of their relationship

Ch11 - im glad you started off where Ch10 finished!!

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Saraprincess

@Saraprincess

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Wow awesome chapters

I love this new version

S good job and keep it up

Thanks for the pm

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Sarita Kaur

@kaur94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

Read the note and i agree i didny entirely like hoe the story was heading
Definitely prefer these chapters
Haha adi telling Annie to go because his mamu was romancing
Annie's party seemed amazing i want a party like that
The fall that changed them
LMAO sheetal's girl crush on The Khushi Kumari Gupta
Her Arnav His Khushi <3

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lujainshaikh

@lujainshaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

gr8 updates nd story plot...arnav nd khushi r really spending time togethr...hope payal doesnt insult khushi..well dats wat i thought would happen in upcoming update...all in all its gud...frm all the three updates i luved arjun's lines he said to annie😃..