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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I have removed the previous chapters!

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Resing for all the chapters at once!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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MAKE PAYAL PAY FOR ALL SHE HAS BEING DOING AND BRING THEM BACK TOGETHER PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PLEASE READ

As I had mentioned in a earlier note that not everyone had the chance to read... P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N has taken a route that I had not planned on. I mean, I had never planned to take it this way with Khushi, Arnav, Gaurav, and even Payal...

And I asked for your opinions about me rewriting P.E.R.F.E.C.T.I.O.N from chapter 11 because the plot that I had written was not the originally plot that I had planned.

So in the end, I decided to rewrite it because I knew I would not like the where the story was headed before and I'd hate to ruin this story for myself as well as my wonderful readers.

Below are Chapters 11-13, Chapter 14 will also be coming soon, but I ask you to please reread Chapter 10 before reading the new Chapter 11.

Read Chapter 10 here - :Chapter Ten - Let's Turn The Tables:

I hope you enjoy this new version! :)

-Anjani-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey Anji! All three chapters were great and you are surely back! I'm glad that you followed your heart and rewrote chapters. Now on to comments.

Chapter 11

Loved this version and so like Khushi to get excited over planning a birthday party 😊 I love how she's a fashionista and is immediately thinking of what she will wear and I liked her suggestion of Arnav going as a ruble prince!

My favorite line of this update was the following:

"Nothing can hold Arnav Singh Raizada against his will. Not even you." Arnav added the last part with a smirk to which Khushi replied with a sarcastic "Ha Ha!"

Very apt for Arnav indeed

Chapter 12

The party was amazing and beautiful! I knew that Khushi would throw a spectacular party and that she did indeed. The Fairytale theme was quite magical and any five year old would love it! Your description of Khushi's dress was great! I loved the part when Mamu is romancing .. Too too cute!

Chapter 13

Again loved the clothes that Khushi picked out for Arnav!

Sheetal having a girl crush on Khushi made me chuckle ! Loved how you turned around the jealousy factor into something positive and their dance and PDA were so sweet!

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Hawa1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Res😛

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Welcome back, Anjani!!!😊

You came back with a bang, three chapters all at once!!!

Me happy!!!😃

Amazing updates!!!

Love all the chapters, they are way better this time around!!! You've written them brilliantly!

Chapter 11- Arnav and Khushi are very cute!! Love the bond that they are sharing with each other..

Chapter 12- love how Khushi went all and about for Annie's birthday party, the theme was amazing!!!

She made Annie's dream come true😃 Khushi's outfit was beautiful, was very cute when Arjun pulled Annie away and said Mamu is romancing😆

Chapter 13- NK is so flirty😳,he really looks out for Khushi.Arnav was so jealous 😆.Gautam and Arnav need to get to know each other better. It was so funny when Sheetal came hug Arnav, and later found out that Arnav getting married to "the Khushi kumari Gupta", she was so honored to meet her and completely forgot Arnav..😆

The moment they shared at the end was just beautiful!😳

Incredible!!

Eagerly waiting for more!!

Please also update the Once upon a time...again, please!

Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago