virman ss : Iam nothing without u. Updat new* pt11/pg29 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Awwn..this is so sweet..awesome update~~~loved it to the core..sweet b nice 😃 ...looking forward for next update..continue soon if possible..thank u so much for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The beauty of life does not depend on how much happy u r. But its totally depend on how many others r happy bcoz of u :)



Hai guys, iam here with part 5. Really sorry for the late update. pls, read it & comment & hit the like button too. Guys its a short update. I cant update a long part now bcoz of my study. But i promise that next time i must update a long update. So enjoy this update :)


PART 5


All childrens goes from the park. Now maanvi is going but suddenly she saw that a small gift box laydown in the grass.

Maanvi : what is this?

she take the gift box in her arms.

Maanvi : i think someone lost this.

She looked around the park. No one is there. So she think that the gift box kept with her.She placed that in her bag.

Virats house
Virat came to his room and he serched the gift box in his jeans pocket. But he cant find that.

Virat : where is it? Iam sure that i kept that in my jeans pocket. But i lost it. But where?

Then he remember that when he was in park he got a call from maya & he take his phone from his jeans pocket.

Virat : oh god, i think that time the gift is fell down. oh, god i lost my fav.gift which i brought for my angel. But iam sure that someone found that. But who?

In maanvis house, she opened the gift box.

Maanvi : wow, its looks amaizing. I think someone buy this for his lover. Its really beautiful. Nice choice. Iam sure that someone searching for this now. But who? what can i do now? Just keep this with me. wow, i love this very much.

She kept that in her secret locker. Bcoz if Tanya found that she take that with her.

"Maanvi..." she heard that Girija called her. She run out off her room.

Maanvi : chotti maa, u call me?

Girija : yes maanvi, Tanya wants to go for a night club party. So here is her dress. U must iron this so fast. And after that u want clean the kitchen.

Then girija goes from there. Maanvi take the dress and started to iron that very carefuly. she know that if something happend to the dress tanya and girija going to kill her.
After did all the work she goes to her room and closed the door. She take the gift from the secret locker and staring at her. She goes to the balcony kept the gift in her arms.

Maanvi : Oh god, is anyone in this world buy such a lovely gift like this for me? I know that no one is there.

Virat stand in his balcony. he think about that what happend in the children park. He thanked naithik & naksh in by his heart. Bcoz of them he can goes to the park & saw maanvi.

Virat : Maanvi ???? Y iam always thinking about her? I dont know why, but i cant stop myself from thinking about her. Now i just want to stop this.

Thats time one of his frnd called him. Virat attend the call.

Virat : hey dude, yes... oh, i just forget about the night party... I will be there with in 15 minits... yes, maya too came with me... ok, bye...

He goes to his room for ready for the night party.
After simetime, he came down staire. Maya is watching tv.

Virat : chutki, r u ready?

Maya : oh dada, finally u r here...

Virat : ok, c'mon, lets go...

Maya : i wish that maanvi too with us. But her chotti maa never let her to go any parties.

Virat looked maya when he heard Maanvis name.

Maya : but she let tanya to go to parties. Tanya must do anything troubles in all partie. And one more think dada, she too came to this party. One of my frnd tell me that. So u want to be careful. Bcoz she never going to leave handsome & hot persons like u.

Virat : ok meri maa, u dont worry, no one can catch this virat vadera so easily. U know that? 😉

Maya : ofcourse i know dada

They both walk towards the car.




Precap : Maanvi came to the night party :)


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ok guys, here is the part5. u guys like it? can i continue? pls let me know ur opinion. comment on my story & hit the like button too.

Achu
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mayas dress
Edited by iam-in-love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Res///
unres...
Sorry for late...
Bt update was qweosme...
Waiting for virmaan meeting...
Continues soon
nd
thanks for pm...
I liked this one...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
wow finally u upadted but it was small.continue soon with longer and more virman moments plz.wen will u update next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Plzzz continue soon. I really love reading your story, it's just amazing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
awesome update
manvi got gift
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Cute update...
Virat's gift reachd the rigtful hands...
Luvd the precap...hwz Manvi gonna cum up fr the party???waiting fr cute virman moments
Plzz cont soon n do pm me wen ya update!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
awesome update
And the ring to that person who deserve it ...
And precap sounds interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Superb update~~~haan aakir virat ko paanaa itnaa aa saan nahi hai😉
really nice precap...so manvi coming to the party...😃
continue soon...
thank u so much for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
he is getting attached toward her he was just thinking her and the gift he as taken for his angle its automatically gone toward his angle update soon

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