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chibisuke

@chibisuke

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Loveky update! It was emotional yet it carried the story forward.
nd excellent research! Are you planning to be a published writer? The amount of work you've put behind this and the previous update is visible in the accuracy of your story..
Great job, Shikha! Keep it up!

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

God!!!

Akash is dead!!!😭😭

I hope Khushi gets well soon!!!

What will happen now???

Is Khushi pregnant!!!

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Asvati

@Asvati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

😭
its kinda sad to know that, ...ppl livin in the border may have a similar life
livin each day in fear and anguish...felt sorry for akash and payal
but atleast theyr leavin this forsakn land...its a relif that she's suffrin from temporry blindnes...phew,...
great update...thanx for the notfctn
all the emotions bein shown could be felt and it felt true and realistic...
a writer's sucess is when the stories could create an impact on the readers mind ...and u did it...keep up the gud work...and dont forget to pm me...

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

thats so heart breaking...😭😭😭

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Loved d story
pls pm me wen u update

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Simran

@Simran.22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

it was very emotional.
feeling very sad for payal!
hope khsuhi will get her vision back soon!
thanks for the mail and continue soon please!

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

aww that was so sad. First khushi got blind, then akash got killed and arnav was so stressed out. But being aware of the condition of kashmir due to all these terrorists, i know the reality is much much worse beyond our imagination. So it is confirmed that khushi is pregnant? Hope she gets her eyesight back soon. You r just a mindblowing writer, i m telling u.

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: uv-crazyfan
aww that was so sad. First khushi got blind, then akash got killed and arnav was so stressed out. But being aware of the condition of kashmir due to all these terrorists, i know the reality is much much worse beyond our imagination. So it is confirmed that khushi is pregnant? Hope she gets her eyesight back soon. You r just a mindblowing writer, i m telling u.

I knw, I so hate terrorism and war too! I just can't understand why so many people have to die for trivial things... And yeah, the conditions out there must be much harsher that we can even imagine... Even thinking about it is hard, and now going thru it?

Well, keep reading to know if Khushi is pregnant or not!😆 And thank you very much!😳

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Asvati
😭
its kinda sad to know that, ...ppl livin in the border may have a similar life
livin each day in fear and anguish...felt sorry for akash and payal
but atleast theyr leavin this forsakn land...its a relif that she's suffrin from temporry blindnes...phew,...
great update...thanx for the notfctn
all the emotions bein shown could be felt and it felt true and realistic...
a writer's sucess is when the stories could create an impact on the readers mind ...and u did it...keep up the gud work...and dont forget to pm me...

I think it might be much worse, in fact! coz they actually see people dying for practically nothing, right? and now, just imagine being in Arnav's shoes... you see a good friend of your for the whole and, the next, when you go to see him, he's dead! just like that! and you didn't even have time to see him one last time... It was pretty hard writing that... I was scared to get everything wrong but thnx for reassuring me😊 I'm glad that you're likng the story. And no worries, Asvati! I wont forget ya!😉😆

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: penny25
dis is grippin tale wid many many real momnts..i'l defo read d novel now..:)

Defo do, if I've motivated you so much!😉

Really, it's worth it... I had tears in my eyes at some places😭 love really hurts, but it's also so wonderful... I myself have to go read it again!!! As soon as I get hols! And this time, I'll imagine Arshi there...😆

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