taarey os - is everthing de same...updated part 3 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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please update soon... extremely interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey awesome...OS...
plzzz continue...
ad plzzz pm me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept, n first part, RD as adi is awesome!!! Just love rithvik!!!! The precap seems really interesting, pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear I m dam happy to read it atleast some was dere for taani in ur os unlike in d3 dese days...
Nd liked nahi yaar I loved it...rey getting jealous 😆
Amazing work continue soon
Luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

Rey tried in many ways to talk to taani but all in vain

Here adi made taani strong by supporting her n assuring her that

" koi uske saath de ya na de he will be wid her forever "

In taani's room

She was lost in her thoughts……

Adi – taani

Taani – hmm….

Adi – kya soch rahi ho

Taani – kuch nahi bass aise hi

Adi – ye lo

Taani – ye kya hai

Adi – khud hi deklo

Taani – wow adi ye dress tho bohot acha hai , kiskeliye

Adi – meri gf keliye

Taani – kya tumari gf , tumne muje bataya nahi , kaisi dikh thi hai wooh………kahan se hai , tum dono kab mile aur kaise…

Adi – woohoo….. ruko meri jhodpur express , brake tho lagavo , meri koi gf nahi hai , agar meine ye dress tuje dikhayi hai tho pffcourse tereliye hoga rite

Taani – mere liye kyun???

Adi – kal meine ek party organize ki hai so tum mere saath chal rahi ho wooh bhi ye dress pehenke

Taani – nahi adi mera mood nahi hai

Adi – oyy hello tujse permission nahi puchraha hun , inform karr raha hun , n agar tum nahi aayi tho I will also not attend de party

Taani – lekin adi

Adi – ok mein jaake party cancel karta hun

Taani – nahi ruko mein aati hun

Adi – that's like a gud girl abh soja jaake bohot der hogayi hai

Taani – gud nite

Adi – gud nite aur haan tere pc dreams bohot hot hoo

Taani – pc???

Adi – arey bhul gayi wooh tera prince charming

Taani throws pillow at him n he runs away…..

Taani (to herself) – sorry rey muje pata hai app bohot hurt ho mere wajaise I am really very sorry , she remembers her precious moments wid rey , tears started escaping frm her eyes😭😭😭

She sleeps wid rey's memories

Here wid gang

Gang prepared wid full hard work as this event was very big for them n set their routines

While relaxing

Simmi – guys ye taani kyun nahi aarahi hai , jab deko tab aake hame irritate karti haina

Nil – shayd uske frnd ke saath busy hogi

Simmi – waise acha hai ki wooh nahi aayi

Vicky – nahi tho kama ka mood karab hojatha n gang starts laughing except shareyam

That was it reu couldn't take it anymore

Rey – shut up guys just shut up…….tum logo ki problem kya hai haan.???? Jab taani apni kaam karti hai tho problem nahi karthi hai tho problem , wats de matter guys…….. I am warning u guys agar tum log taani ke frnds nahi ban sakte tho for gods sake be humans…… aghe se ek aur shabdh taani ke baaremein kuch kaha , mein bhul javunga ki tum log mere dost ho , did u guys get that??????😡 Saying so he marches out

Gang was shocked to see rey's behaviour😲😲

Swayam – guys plzz kaam down rey thoda irritated hai , ussne ye jaan bhuj kaarr nahi kaha , so guys just chill , kal hamara bohot bada event hai so focus on it

All agreed

Swayam (to himself) – as a bhai jo muje karma chahiye thaw ooh rey ne kardiyaa , I am happy ki mere sis ko rey jaisa itna pyar karne wala milaa……….n he sumhow feels guilty

Next day at de event (night)

Inside

The place was amazing beautifully decorated wid flowers , lights n all……… they was so much crowd

All gang members goes to de entry

Bodyguard – app log andhar nahi jaa sakte

Sharon – dekiye hum d3 group hai hum yaha performance karne aaye hai

Manager comes – so u r d3 gropu welcum but app logo ko wait karma padega as our guest of honour is on the way kya app log zara side mein jaake wait karr sakte hai

All gang – ok n they goes sideways n waits

Here at de entrance all were standing eagerly to invite special guest……… gang is lil distance away means sideways hope u get it

Suddenly car cums n stop before de gang but they were busy on talking so they did not notice as rey was not interested he was looking here n there…..

Car stops n guess who cumes mere kyal se app log guess karliye honge offcourse hamari taani yaar

Taani's outfit

She was looking stunning hot……she came out of de car n is looking another side

Rey see's taani , his eyes popped out😲

Rey (to himself) – kya ye taani hai , lekin wooh yaha aise kaise ho sakthi hai , ohh god mein pagal hojavungaa , jisse bhi dekun taani hi dikayi derahi hai focus dude focus……

rinni – guys muje yaha taani kyun dikh rahi hai

then all see's in de direction n gets stunned n confused y she was here……….😲😕

Taani now looks at them n she is also confused so she goes to them

Taani – app log yahan????

Vicky – ye question tho hame puchna tha

Simi – tum yahan kya karr rahi ho , kahin phir hame daatne aayi ho kyaa NDC pe dhyan do blah blah….

Rinni – nahi guys shayad taani hume all de best bolne aayi hogi

Simmi – ohh plzz rinni use ur common sense, ye aur hame all de best that must be in dreams , agar tum kehne aayi ho , then we don't need it……

Neha – yaa , we will rock de performance

Here taani was controlling her emotions , only onething which was going in mind was adi's words…..

Now reyam became angry😡😡 , they were standing back of Vicky , simmi , bharat , neha , ashi…..

Before they could say anything , 4 bodyguards came running , pushed d3 gang away frm taani (not so rudely) n surrounded her

Manager comes running

Manager – sorry mam , hame laga ki app wahan se aayenge tho hum appkeliye waha wait karr rahe the , we r really very sorry mam

Taani (smiles) 😊– its ok mr sharma……..app itna gabra kyun rahe hai

Manager – agar sir ko pata chalega tho wooh hame job se nikal dengeee

Taani – aisaa kuch nahi hoga app tension mat lijiyee

Then manager sees d3 gang

D3 grp was totally confused as wat was happening😲

Manager – app dancers ho rite app log mam ke paas kya karr rahe ho……… (turning towards taani ) maam inn logo ne appko pareshan nahi kiya na

Taani – nahi wooh bass…

Manager to de gang – kahin app log apne fee badane keliye mam ke pass tho nahi aayena

Gang was shocked as wa was happening n were feeling insulted

Taani full on anger – sharma ji samhal ke baat kijiyee , ye mere frnds hai n looked towards de gang

Gang was stunned as they were not expecting taani's answer that too after wat they did to her

Manager – kyaa???? Frnds ???? sorry mam hame nahi pata hai

Taani – muje nahi unhe kahiyee

Manager (towards de gang) – sorry…… app log pehle nahi bata sakte ki app log guest of honour ke dost hai

Gang – guest of honour ???

Here manager phone rings n he picks it up

Manager – hello sir ji kahiyee yes sir mam aagayi hai ok sir ham aarahe hai……… n he hangs de call

Manager – mam sab log aagaye hai , sab appka intezaar karr rahe hai……

Taani – chaliye……..she moved forward wid surrounded by bodyguards………………….she stopped

Taani – mr sharma ji ye kya hai ye log muje aise surround n all

Manager – sorry mam sir ke strict orders hai

Taani - (slowly ) ye adi bhi naa urggghhh…. Chaliye

She goes to de entry

Here wid gang , all were shocked😲😲

Except reyam – guest of honour ???? taani ????

Rey – suna tum logo ne taani ne kya kaha , jo hum logo ne usske saath kiyaa , wooh chahti thi tho hame aur insult karva sakti thi lekin usne kya kiyaa…….usne kaha ki hum uske frnds hai balki tum logo ne tho usse sirf meri gf aur swayam ki sis ki tarah treat kiyaa, kabhi bhi usse frnd jaisa nahi dekha…..😡😡

Now gang was feeling guilty , how they were behaved wid her

Manager – app log yahi kade ho jaldi chaliye andhar

All started moving towards de entry

Taani was before them

She was invited as princess , few people were showering flowers on them

Taani – (to herself ) muje pata hai adi tum ye sab muje kush dekne ke liye karr rahe ho n I promise I'll be happy for u agar uske liye I hav to pretend then I will………….

She made a beautiful smile on her face n entered de party

Two girls comes to her

Girls – di ye app keliye

Taani – awww……. Thank you n kisses girl's cheek

They was an announcement………

??? – now here comes de most gorgeous girl

Taani – adi ????

Adi – my best frnd taani…………

All starts clapping…

Adi comes n forwards his hand ,taani gives her hand

He takes her inside n all sat in their respective places

Adi – hey guys………… howzzz u

all hope app log ye party njy kare

This party is dedicated to one of de person who is so soo important in my life , my best , bestest frnd taani……….thnks for cumg……………

Taani smiles😊😊

He goes n sit wid her

Now another person comes n announces abt dance performance

D3 group performs soo gracefully n beautifully……

All were mesmerized………

Performance over n d3 gang is standing on stage waiting for response………

All were soo mesmerized that they were not reacting at all

Taani stands n starts clapping👏👏 , now all starts clapping

D3 gang starts jumping…….. they go to the green room

Adi – ye log tho tumare frnds hai rite…

Taani – yup smilingly

Adi takes her to de green room

Adi – guys u all were amazing……..muje pata nahi tha that dil dosti dance group are u people

Sharon – thank u

Adi – u know wat guys kab se mein taani ko kush karne ki koshish karr raha tha lekin jab tum log dance karr rahe the she was njying like kid………thnks a lot guys….

All gang looks towards taani n feels guilty

Gang – taani we r really sorry 4 our behaviour

Taani – no guys its ok

N a group hug

Rey was standing at a lil distance , he was staring at taani

He was soo feeling guilty 4 wat he did n was angry on himself 4 hurting taani

Adi – ok guys can u excuse us we hav to meet sum people

U guys njy de party n he takes taani frm there

Gang also joins de party……..all were njying

Now slow music starts

Adi asks taani 4 dance

She agrees , he takes her to de dance floor n starts dancing

Here rey was fuming wid anger…..😡😡

He hears few people talking

Person 1- dono made 4 each other lag rahe hai

Person 2 – suna hai dono ke parents business pateners hai , shayad inn dono ki shaadi karayenge

Now rey was really very angry but somewhere he was feeling scared of loosing his love his taani………

While dancing

Adi – njy karr rahi ho na

Taani – thnks adi ,

Adi – phir se , abh tho mein…..

Taani – ok baba sorry abh se nahi bolungi

After sometime

Taani excuses herself n goes away…….

Rey was standing alone lost in his thoughts……

Adi notices dis n goes to him

Adi – hey……

Rey – hii……fake smile

Adi – taani bohot cute lag rahi hai rite

Controlling his anger rey – yaaa

Adi – pc bohot lucky hai haan

Rey – pc???

Adi – prince charming jise itna pyaar karne wali mili hai

Rey -???

Adi – abh ye mat kaho ki pc kon hai

Rey – kon hai

Adi – u must be joking dude……. Tum aur kon ho saktha hai

Tume pata hai jab hum jhodpur mein the na jab mein taani ko bohot satatha tha tere naam se

Rey – mere naam ????

Adi – haan jab tera naam letha tha wooh itna blush karti thi pata hai………aur tho aur tumse milne keliye Mumbai aane keliye bohot papad bele hai haan ussne

Rey – jhodpur ??? taani muje pehle se hi jaanthi thi

Adi – tume nahi pata , taani na tere photos , videos dekhe pyaar karr baiti………

Rey was lost in his thoughts…….

Adi – dude u know wat u r really very lucky…..ki tume taani mili hai she really loves u a lot……n rite now she needs u , agar tum usske behaviour ke wajaise confused ho then u must hav to check ur colg website…….. don't loose her dur to silly mu's

N he goes away

Party overs all njyed a lot……..

Night at rey's house

He was soo lost suddenly adi's word strike " u must hav to colg website " he checks it n was hell shocked

Rey – how dare they ??? how can they comment like this rubbish……..

Taani itne dino se ye sab seh rahi thi aur mein uske saath hone ke bajai mein bhi usske saath rude behave karr raha tha

I am really vry sorry taani ,am really very sorry (tears started rolling down his cheeks….😭😭.) muje taani se abhi milna hogaa , kitni hurt hogi wooh……….. wooh mujse itna pyaar karti hai lekin mein , mein tho usse sirf taklif deta hun

I am done guys I know ki meine precap mein taarey romance likha tha but sorry abhi bohot lamba hogaya hai aur start karthi tho adhura chodna padtha but promise next part fully taarey romance….. boring update laga tho sorry… 😭😭😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it so much... Jealous rey was amazing...
N it was nt at all boring!!
Waiting fr the nxt part!! Continue soon!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres ...I am 2nd one to comment yayee...Ok it read it...tis was an amazing update...i jst loved what adi told rey...ab plz jaldi patch up krwao...pm me whn u continue...:)
Edited by taareyluvr52 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
This is fabulous! Simply beautiful. Please update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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liked it lot thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super...

hawww
kuch kehne ke liye words hi nahi mil rahe hai...😊

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