taarey os - is everthing de same...updated part 3

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Taarey os

Os based on precap

Guys'' I am really pissed off on this current track yaar''

Kabhi taani sahi lagti hai tho kabhi gang but in my pov taani is right cozzz hmm'' I mean sab apne pyaar ko durr nahi karna chahegaa'. , if she is scared of losing her luv n is trying to hide de truth then I support her

But I am really annoyed by de gang's behaviour towards taani''..really its sooo irritating

Based on precap

Argument started btw taarey

Taani ' (wid teary eyes controlling her emotions) iska matlab mein app keliye problems create karti hun

Rey (angry) ' aaj jo bhi kuch hua uss ke baad " haan "

Taani could not control herself she ray away'..

Here rey is frustrated , his heart was saying he did wrong but his mind was saying he did rite'. His frnds were correct n taani was wrong''

At night

In taani's room

Taani was holding her teddy n crying continuously

Taani (to herself) ' kyun krishnaji kyun??? Koi bhi muje samaj ne ki koshish nahi karr raha hai , muje ye soch ke bhi darr lag raha hai ki rey se durr'.. , jab tauji ko rey ki identity pata chalegi tho bina jaane hi rey ko reject kardenge.. jab tauji bhai se hi itna gussa hai tho phir rey se''. lekin meine rey se ye expect nahi kiya tha , muje laga ki shayad rey muje samjenge lekin mein galat thi

She wiped her tears''.

Agar unhe ye lagtha hai ki unke problems ki reason mein hun phir tikh hai mein apne appko unn parr impose nahi karungi'.

She decided n called rey

Here rey is wid gang in his house

They were chitchatting but rey is not at all paying attention as he was in confusion

Vicky ' yaar rey kahan kogaya???

Rey ' kuch nahi bass'

Simmi ' oh plzz rey abh ye mat kehna phir se taani ne kuch aur promise leliyaa tumse

Neha ' selfish becoming taani is

Aashi ' meine taani se ye types expect nahi kiya tha

All started bitching abt taani except shareyam , they were jus listening not able to say anything

Suddenly rey's phone rings , he excuses himself n goes to corner

Rey ' hello???

Taani ' wooh rey I am sorry'.

Rey - ????

Taani ' meine call bass itna kehnekeliye kiya ki jo meine app se promise liya hai woooh mein thod rahi hun

Smile curved on rey's lips

Taani ' abh app ko appki identity chupaneki zarurat nahi hai

saying so she cuts de call

rey was soo relieved , he goes to de gang n they discuss about de dance n they left rey's house

rey(to himself) ' taani kitni achi hai kitna samaj thi hai muje lekin aise phone cut kyun kiya ussne shayd tired hogi kal baat karta hun usse lekin rey tuje taani parr aisa chillana nahi chahiyetha anyways kal sorry boldungaa mere sweetheart ko luv u my star'.

Here wid taani

She cluthed her teddy more tightly

Taani ( while crying ) ' mein apni promise tho wapas leliyaa lekin rey appko nahi pata jab tauji ko pata chalega appke dance ke bare mein , uska outcum kaisa hoga?? Hey krishnaji kya mein itni selfish hun ??? aisa koyi bhi nahi hai jiske saath mein apni taklif share karr sakun😭😭

Then she hears tauji calling her name

She quickly wipes her tears n says " ji tauji aayi "

She goes to de hall n sees tauji pacing here n there

Taani ' kya hua tauji app itne tensed kyun lag rahe hai???

Tauji ' wooh taani kya tum mera ek kaam karogi

Taani ' ji kahiyee kya karma hai

Tauji ' wooh actually beta kal mere business patner ka beta meeting keliye London se aaraha hai , kyat um usse pick karrne airport jaa sakti ho , as I am really busy'.

Taani ' kiske beta???

Tauji ' anuj roy ka beta

Taani - kyaa??? Anuj uncle ka beta adi

Tauji ' oh taani , mein tho bhulhi gaya , tum dono childhood frnds ho rite''. Tho tumhe problem nahi hogi , tho tum kal javogina airport

Taani ' sure tauji

She was smiling widely forgetting her tension , frustration as she was going to meet his childhood frnd'

Cs of aditya roy (adi)

Childhood frnd of taani , cool n attitude hunk , famous business tycoon''' likes taani a lot n can do everything for her , very possessive about taani , adi n taani shares a grt bond'' but swayam knows adi only as his dad's frnd's son

Next day morning

Taayam on de way to colg

In car

Taani ' bhai muje app se kuch kehna hai

Swayam ' haan bolo

Taani ' meine jho appse promise liya hai who tod rahi hun

Sw ' wat???? R u sure'. I mean I am happy

Taani ' hmm'.. n she looks out of de window

Sw ' taani tum tikh hona

Taani ' ( smiles a lil ) hone ki koshish karr rahi hun bhai

They reach de colg

Swayam goes to de gang n taani to vp sir's office

Here rey tries to call taani but she chukes it off

In afternoon 12 pm

Gang is in RH relaxing after practice , they were cracking jokes n laughing

Taani enters n all their expressions changes except shareyam

Seeing taani , rey feels happy but taani didn't look at him

Taani ' mein buss itne kehne aayithi ki NDC elimation date 2 pm tak aajayenge'.

All becums happy

Rey is trying to meet her gaze but all in vain

Taani ' rey ???

Rey smiles widely ' haan taani

Taani ' as AGS kya app dates check karr lenge

Vicky ' wooh kyun karega , ye kaam tho tumara hai rite

Taani ' haan lekin muje kuch kaam se bahar jaana hai so'..

Simmi ' itna bhi kya urgent kaam hai kit um NDC ko ignore karr rahi ho ???

Taani ' ( full on attitude ) ye app logo ko bata na zaruri nahi samajti n she left de RH

Vicky ' wat de hell she think of herself haan'.

Nil ' guys leave it concentrate on our routines

All agreed but rey felt sum weirdness

After half an hr all dispersed

Rey called taani so many times but she didn't pick it up

Taani was in empty class setting sum papers

Rey enters

Seeing rey , taani ' kya hua rey kuch kaam tha still busy in setting papers

Rey ' taani muje aisa kyun lag raha hai kit um muje avoid karr rahi ho''''

Taani ' aisa nahi hai rey buss mein thodi si busy hun , mein app se baad mein baat karti hun n she walked towards de entrance but comes back

Taani ' rey muje app ek baat kehni thi , agar tauji ko ye pata chala ki app ek dancer ho , phir tauji job hi decision lenge mein unse agree karungi''''..n she tries to leave but rey hold her wrist n pulls her closer''''''''..look look hawa hawa

Rey ' matlab agar uncle ko sach pata chalne ke baad agar wooh kahe ki muje bul javo , tho tum bhul javogi'..

Taani smiles a lil - isi kyal (thought ) se darr karr hi tho mein ne app se wada liya tha (now she pushes him) lekin inn sab ko app se kyaa???? Jab app ne mere aur apne frnds mein appne apni frnds ko choose kiya then obviously mein app ke aur tauji ke bichh tauji ko hi choose karungi rite'''n she left wid tears😭😭😭

Ret hurted to himself ' sahi tho keh rahi hai taani jab mein usse chod ke apne frnds ko choose karr sakta hun then she also has de rite to choose her tauji over me''.. shayad taani sahi thi mein usse samaj nahi paya , I hurted her'''

At 2 pm , all r in canteen chitchatting

Taani enters but ignores de gang , goes to de counter n gets coffee n sits on another table

A peon cums to her wid bouquet

Peon ' maam apne bouquet mangvaya thana ye lijiyee

Taani ' thank u soo much abh app jaa sakte hai

Here gang can hear them

Rinni ' ye taani ne bouquet kyun mangvayaa??

Taani phone ring n she picks it up

Taani ' hello ?? kyaa??? Half an hour mein ??? tikh hai mein nikal thi hun n she takes de bouquet wid her

She was abt to go but rey stops her

Rey ' taani kahan jaa rahi ho ???

Taani ' app se matlab ???

Rey hurted ' nahi who kuch reports banana hai so

Taani ' wooh sorry rey meine aaj half day leave li hai so job hi hai hum kal karlenge byee

N she goes away

Rey (to himself) ' ohh damn meine taani ko bohot hurt kiya hai , itna ki woooh abh mujse baat hi nahi karma chahti hai

She reaches de airport

Seeing taani , adi comes n hugs her tightly

Adi ' ohh taanu I missed u sooo much yaar

Taani ' I missed u too'''..they reaches taayam's house

Taani ' adi tu jaake frsh hoja , mein tere liye kuch banati hun

Adi goes n freshen up n they eat together n go to their respective rooms to take rest

At 5 pm

Tauji goes to adi n talks abt family , business n all stuff

Tauji gets a call so he excuses himself n goes

As adi was getting bored he goes to taani's room without making sound n see's her standing near de window n crying'.

Adi goes to taani

Adi ' taani kya hua tum ro kyun rahi ho???

Taani quickly hides her tears ' wooh kuch nahi buss ankh mein kuch chala gaya tha'

Adi makes her sit on bed n he sits beside her

Adi ' abh mein tere liye itna paraya hoga hun ki tu apni feelings mere saath share nahi kaarr sakti

Taani breaksdown n says everthing'''abt her so called frnds behaviour towards her , comment on her on de colg website , how she felt everything'''..

Listening this adi becums furious , how can sum one hurt his frnd' , but rite now she needs him , so he controls himself n console taani '''soon time passes

Adi encourages n support her

Here wid gang

Sharon gets a call , she attends it n came back to de gang happily

Simmi ' kya hua Sharon , tum itna happy kyun ho

Sharon ' guys ek gud news hai hume ek offer mila hai''.ek business tycoon London se aaya hai n usske unofficial party ke liye hume ek performance dena hogaa'''smiling widely

Vicky ' kitna pay karr rahe hai

Sharon ' guess karo ???

Nil ' London means 30, 000 tho hogaaa

Sharon ' nahi guys pure ek lakh isn't that grt''.

All de gang members were stunned''''.n started jumping in happiness''..but our rey is lost in his own world , swayam notices dis n decides to talk to him later

All de gang arrives to taayam's house n got settled in hall , rey's eyes were searching his taani''

Tauji was not at home

All gang members started discussing abt de performance

Here in taani's room

Taani ' adi kya dund raha hai???

Adi ' nahi wooh bus mein apne taanu ko dund raha tha

Taani ' adi , mein tho tere samne hun

Adi ' kyaa??? Lekin tum meri wooh talkative aur bubbly taani nahi hosakti

Taani smiles a lil

Adi - ye kyaa . muj parr ehsaan karr rahi ho kyaa?? Ye tho teri actual smile nahi hai n starts tickling her'

Taani ' ahhh😆😆 hehehe ohhh 😃😃adi chodo muje ahh hehehe ohhohh hehe'' n she cumes out of de room running n adi followed her , they were unaware of de gang but gang was watching them

Rey felt happy seeing taani laughing but felt a pain in his heart as he was not de reason of taani's happiness , many question were raising in his mind who was he??? Y he is wid taani

Adi n taani reached dinning room , taani is running around dinning table n adi is trying to catch her'''

Taani ' adi plzzz'.. mein bohot tak gayi hun , tuje milgaya na jo tuje chahiye , abh chod de muje , hass hass karr peet (stomach) mein dard ho raha hai (she was breathing heavily n smiling)😃😃

Adi goes n hugs her n she too responds'..

Here gang is shocked especially rey he was fuming wid anger or I must say jealousy''..😡😡😡

They broke de hug

Adi ' tu na hamesha aise hasstha raha karr n waise mein aagaya hunt ho'

Taani ' tho tu muje hasa hasa karr marrvayega rite

Adi ' yup'''.n both laughs😆😆😆

Swayam ' taani ???

Now taani stops laughing n turns to de another side see's de gang now her smile fades'.

She goes to them

Taani ' hey guys

Swayam ' taani ye??? Pointing towards adi

Taani ' bhai ye mera childhood frnd hai aditya roy'.

She introduces adi to everyone n wen it cums to rey lil llhh

Adi notices dis n whisper in her ears ye tho tera prince charming hai rite'''.

Taani glared at adi😡😡

Adi n taani sat together''..

Adi ' so u guys r professional dance team , very impressive

All girls r drooling over him except Sharon n boys r glaring at them except reyam

Sharon ' thank u adi'

Adi ' ur welcum miss Sharon but can u plz call me aditya

Neha ' why ??? taani calling u adi rite..

Adi ' yaa , only she has de rite to call me adi n he smiles seeing taani n she also smiles back''..😊😊

Here rey is burning''''''''''..heheheee'..

Taani ' umm'.. guys mein sab ke liye coffe lek aati hun

She was abt to go but adi holds her hand n makes her sit

Adi ' kyaa yaar taanu jab dekho tab kitchen mein gussi rehti ho?? Uskeliye ramu kaka hainaa

Listening dis taani see's rey look look hawa hawa , both were lost in each other''.. rey could se pain in taani's eyes which made him more guilty

Adi ' ok guys u guys carry on , I am going to my room , cyaa soon

Taani chalo muje tumse kuch baat karni hai''

N adi n taani leaves

Rey is now angry , hurt , guilty , frustrated'''.. he was facing mixture of all emotions'''..😡😡

Precap ' adi n taani dances together

Rey's anger reaches de peak

Taarey romance'''..

Hmmm''' finally I am done guys may be dis os will be of

2-3 parts''''''''if u guys like it then only I'll continue'.

Kya karun itna frustrated hun current track se tho socha kuch likh dun frustration durr karne keliye

Buraa laga tho sorry''''' ignore mistakes'''..


part 2 - pg 9

part 3 - pg 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...this was real good yaar...loved reading this OS...awesome...i so want someone like Adi in Taani's life in the show...She need's someone whom she can share everything with.And jealous Rey...i like that...!!!!!:D:D

Do update the next part soon and pm me:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...i mjust say it was superb ...yaayyy!! i luvd it plz update reaming parts soo...n👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely part
wow ritivik as adi so cute!😛
love to see jealous rey
plz contniue soon!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...really good...plz continue soon...i'm so in love with this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting, update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz tum yeh concept palki mam ko dekar aao bechari taani ke saath kitna boora ho rha he
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: TAAREY786

plz tum yeh concept palki mam ko dekar aao bechari taani ke saath kitna boora ho rha he


hath mein hota tho kab ka hi karr deti heheheheee😆
but hum kyaa karr sakthe hai taani character ko confuse karr ke rakh diya palki mam ne..
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Originally posted by: sangeeta_taarey

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aww... itne plzzz
mein try karungi update karne keliyee😊😊

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