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Posted: 12 years ago
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@nakshatra will update soon

@fatima glad u liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

hey...my dearest forum members..i am back again...

aww, come on, it cant be so bad😆


presenting another part, many were upset as their was no Arjun in the last part, so here he is..


enjoy.



The relationship between sleep and Arjun S. Rawte was not easy.it was broken many years ago.if he wanted to close his eyes, he can only see his list of wrong doings and her face…..

Her face, when he first time saw her, dressed in white salwar, she looked no less than a fairy from heaven. Her face, when they got married, full of hope in her eyes for future.her face, when he raised his hand on her, broken and shocked , her eyes , hollow and blank. Her face, when he witnessed her after 3 long years, indifferent and cold.

Riya….. a whisper escaped from his lips, and a lone tear rolled in his cheek.

Suddenly , his phone rang, snapping his thoughts.he looked at the id, and his pain stricken face changed into anger.

''you are not doing your job properly, Khan. It seems like you have to go back to jail soon.'' He threatened.

''sir, it was not fault of mine.it was an undercover job.'' The man pleaded in a low tone.

''I don't know anything.you were supposed to give me info about her, about every second of her life. I guess you are preoccupied with some things.'' He got up from his bed and paced in his room up and forth.

''give me another chance. I will give you every single info.'' The man pleaded again.

Arjun closed his eyes in anger.Khan was the best man to do this job, he thought. He whispered, ''ok.dont fail this time.''

''thank you.'' Saying this, Khan cut the call.

Next day ETF Headquarters.

The new entry entered the conference hall, where most of the team mates have settled and discussing something.she knocked .

The man, looks like chief, engrossed in the file, looked at her and smiled.

She entered and everyone looked at her and get up from their seats, some looked shocked while others looked please.

''guys, she is Riya Mukherjee, our new team mate.'' Sameer introduced her.

Actually everyone was shocked.and Shree was shockingly happy.Rathore got a call and he excused herself.

'hi.'' Finally, he got a chance to shake hand with this beautiful lady.

She shook it, looking directly in his eyes.he was looking at her with awe , his eyes was dreamy, and his lips had a nervous, shy smile.they shook their hands many times, but he was not in a mood to leave it, may be he forgot himself in her eyes.

Liza and chotu looked at her and the trio burst into laughter.Riya stopped and asked to chotu, still holding shree's hand, ''well,tumhara naam sach mein chotu hain?''

Before chotu answered, liza jumped, ''arre nahi.uska actual naam to chandrakant hain.short name chotu. Specky ka naam bhi to shreekant hain.''

''interesting.shreekant, chandrakant. Bhai ho kya?'' riya asked.chotu jumped to clear her confusion.

''arre, nahi nahi. Main Marathi hoon, aur yeh Bengali.''

''aap bhi to Bengali ho, hain na?'' shree asked dreamily, still holding her hand.

Riya looked at him directly.she slowly closed the remaining distance between them, with a mysterious smirk in her face.she whispered, ''yes. But really sorry, I don't know Bengali.'' Then she looked deep in his eyes, like there are no one in this room except them ,''mear haath chorne ka irada nahi lagta Sen sahaab.''

The sound of the chotu-liza's laughter snapped shree into reality.he immediately left her hand, his face red with blush and embarrassment. Riya acted like hurt, ''itna jaldi chor diya? Itni buri hoon kya main?''

The duo stop their laughter to witness more.shree mumbled, ''who, apne hi to….''

She was still very close to him, his heartbeat was so much that she could hear clearly.she whispered in his ears, ''just kidding, Sen sahab.'' And winked.

This time, not only the duo but Sameer also bursted into laughter.he witnessed this from outside and laughed like maniac.Shree was clearly red now. He mumbled, ''mujhe kaam hain.'' And literally ran from the room.

Ayesha and sakshi found a red faced shree running away from the conference hall and their chief laughing like a maniac.they had never seen their chief laughing.

''he looks so carefree, and handsome.'' Ayesha thought, while sakshi entered the conference hall.

''hey, shree ko…'' she paused, as she identified a new face, ''aap kaun?''

Riya turned to her and said, ''I am Riya Mukherjee. Aaj hi join kiya hain.''

Sakshi was happy to have another girl in the office. She raised her hand, ''hi, I am sakshi.journalist hoon.''

Liza whispered, ''don't worry, yeh specky ke tarah nahi hain, jaldi haath chod degi.'' She and chotu again bursted into laughter, while she was confused. Riya shook hand.

Ayesha also entered the room, with Sameer.she also introduced herself.

Soon they settled in their seats.Riya noticed a big board full of photographs and chits. She settled herself on the table and looked questioningly at the board. Sameer stood near her and answered, ''yahan par cases ki saari details rehti hain. Makes work easy.''

The cantin wala came inside and handed over coffee to everyone.he did not know about riya, so she had no coffee.she snatched away Sameer's coffee from his fingers and threw, ''thank you.'' And took a sip.

All other persons were clearly shocked, while Sameer only nodded his head , smirking.Chotu whispered, ''dekha dekha, apni girlfriend ko kuch nahi kahan. Mujhe to pehle se hi pata tha.''

Ayesha choked on her coffee and stared at them disbelievingly.'' Girlfriend???!!!!'' Sakshi looked amusedly at SamIya and Chotu - liza and whispered, ''awww, such a cute couple.ab to ek hi office mein.how romantic.''

Ayesha looked at them shockingly, her eyes were wide with shock and disbelieve.Liza whispered, ''arre, specky to Riya par lattoo hain.''

Sakshi whispered back worriedly, ''apni boss ke Girlfriend par crush?? Baad mein pachtana na pare.''

At that time, arjun entered, and everyone went to their work. They pretended to read files, while eyeing SamIya.Ayesha was staring shamelessly at them.

Arjun at once knew something is cooking in here.he entered and saw Sameer and a girl were sitting on the edge of the conference table, engrossed in deep conversation.he cleared his throat and Sameer turned to him.

''Rawte, meet our new colleague, Riya Mukherjee.''

He looked at him, very cautious to control the feeling that is growing in him.he was happy, that they will be together. And he was immensely scared, they will be TOGETHER ! he wanted to push her at once from here, at the same time, hug her tightly.but unfortunately, he could.nt do anything.he looked at her, who was still facing her back.

They got a call from a crime scene and went there.it was a murder of a middle class housewife. Someone had brutally stabbed in her stomach.Saakshi ran outside the room the moment her eyes fell on the dead body,may be to puke.even Ayesha and Liza had a tough time to see the dead body and so much blood.the male officers went to interrogate the family members.

When the girls were busy feeling the need to puke and men were busy with their interrogation, Riya roamed inside the house, watching and memorizing everything. Her eyes fell on the fruit basket and she took an apple, making it her breakfast. She went near the dead body, where Liza, Ayesha , shree and Chotu were busy.

''kitni berahmi se mara hain.'' Said Chotu in disgust.

''oh Christ, mujhse isse thik se check nahi kiya jaa raha hain.lord, help me.'' Prayed Liza.

The sound of a biting apple turned them to Riya.Ayesha said shockingly, ''tum aise situation mein Apple kha rahi ho?''

Riya took another bite, and said after gulping it, ''so? Yeh khoon mere muh ke andar ghuss jayega kya?''

Everyone looked at her, like she is from another planet.they went back to their chatting, cursing the murderer, while Riya was busy finishing the apple and checking out the house.

Sameer sent Ariya for some work in this case.Riya didn't mind,and went in the Suv.Arjun started to drive.after finishing the job, while they were returning, Arjun suddenly stopped the Suv on a deserted highway.

''this is it.'' She muttered mentally and untied her seatbelt, while Arjun jumped outside the Suv .

She came outside, and saw him, turning his back .

''chali jao yahan se.'' he said in a determined voice.

She mentally prepared herself, and said, ''why should i?''

''because I am saying that.'' He replied.

''and who the hell are you?'' she asked with bitterness in her voice.he turned at her, eyes red due to fury, his face hard, ''I am your husband.''

Riya laughed, mocking him.he carefully observed her, eyes never leaving her.'' Husband? Really? ''

He said, ''yes, as we are not divorced yet.i have full right on you till now''

She stopped her mocking smile, her face become cold, fury clearly visible in her angelic face, ''right? You have right on me? Oh please….. and may be we are not divorced, but your and mine relationship was never from our heart.so one piece of paper does not mean anything if the relation is broken.'' She paused and said, ''you and I were never 'US'.it was never a relationship. It was an burden for you, and now its gone. So don't stress yourself and me with this husband crap.''

Arjun started to come near her, face angry as hell, ''how can you say like that? It doesn't matter…..''

''no it doesn't. and I am not leaving .we work under same roof, so may be its difficult for you.you can ran away, like you always did.better for us.'' She said in a low voice.

''you will leave. I will make sure of that.'' He said, with determaination.

''make me.'' Saying this, she went inside the Suv, sat in the driving seat, and left the place, the deserted highway, and Arjun behind.

After some moments, realization sank in Arjun's mind, she hates me.she and I were never us, she has move on, it was never any relationship…and she left me in this deserted highway, with no taxi or car to reach main road.

''F**k.'' he swored angrily, then promised to himself, ''I will make your life living hell, Mrs Rawte. So that you leave this place forever and never come back.trust me, its best for us.''


precap-- i dont know myself 😆 sochna padega


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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
eh...wat's happening here... why does Arjun want her to leave??? this time sure Riya wont... ah ha it vl b intresting to see nok jok of Mr nd Mrs Rawte... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
yr yeh confusion clear karo plz
continue soon
Phir_Mohabbat thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#65
@aman arre karoongi yaar chillax

@leki i am also waiting for their nok jhok

@akansha pihu sumbul thnxx will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Wow BB ..u rocks..
👏
so arjun is talking to khan , i think he is asking him about riya. 😕
so finally etf mai uski entry karwa hi diya 😉
shree...lol.. 🤣
he was lost in her eyes.🤣
and riya she..lol ..she is busy to ignite him more 😈
and the team..chotu and liza..lol.
Then sameer's laugh gives heart attack to the team yaar
and riya is so cool.😎
then aisha and sakshi
aisha is so confused abt samiya..
Hey samiya is best yaar.
It the crime scene ,riya is behving so cool yaar..
It must took her long time to be that strong..and she is really hav a brave soul.. 👏

its really a hte story yaar..and i liked it 😉
last part ..rocking..
Riya's each and every dialouge is awesome..it express the pain through which she have gone through.. 😔
and her attitude ..totaly fit for the story..
She left arjun in that road.. 🤔
he he..
He is confused..
Is it all arjun's fault
or any misunderstanding 😕
no special samiya scene today 😭
u know i love sam riya and the riya's character very much BB..
Looking forward to read more..

One more thing..bhul gayi thi..
Shreekant-chandrakant..and mujhe bengoli nhi aati 🤣

keep rocking BB..
Waiting fr next part..
Luv u.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
omg what's going on here
both wanna make each other feel like hell😲 hate this much
he was happy na when he saw her first even he cried, then y now he wanna make her leave from there?
riya is so bold & brave conference scene was nice
shree was so funny🤣 poor shree
update soon
Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
@vampu oh i love u vampu on commeenting all part

khan...hmm...dekho kya hota hain...

and their problm hain ya mu woh to baad mein pata chalega.

aur tuhr samiya chahiye??? hmm..kuch sochna padega BB

@madona yeah..poor shree..pitega dono se...glad u liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Dr 1st part Mai tumnai dil jeet lea superb work
Plzzz pm me next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
@jass yaar sorry bt i am nt pm ing any1, bt i update daily so u can follow it if u want...thnx 4 comment and glad u liked it

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