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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
plz update soon
nice update
everyone is jealous lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Oye ye drama queen banan band kar..ye toh super se upar tha...
Super J add kiya..yaar..
Arjun throwing daggers
he he..
Then sakshi.. Puri coffee pee li..
So arjun looking at riya, sam at the duo., and sakshi at arjun..and aisha at samiya..
She is so much J.
Riya ko man hi man mai maar hi diya ...
Arjun in full swing to throwing out riya..
Then liza ki wo song and shree ki epression..
Lol..
Phir lift ..
Oh my god..
Riya took front seat and car toh uski J k fuel se hi chalegi ..lol..
Arjun kitna gussa hai..
And sakshi is totaly fida on arjun..
And shree-liza- chotu- sakshi talks..
Aisha is now total killer mood..
Lol.and arjun ne toh sabka murder hi kar diya...lol..that was so funny..

Fir riya k flat k bahar..ha ha ha..
Riya samjh gayi aisha ka gussa.,
and she said indirectly..
Bt sam..ha ha ..
Usse ye sab spanish mai laga..
Too good yaar..

Now lets see ye J kitno ko jajalti hai..
And looking forward to see the past yaar..
And samiya also..
Put samiya...its really intrestingg.
And ab sam ko bhi lag raha hai ki dono mai kuch hai..
Arjun undono ko couple na samajh le.
And he is cursing riya..live in..kya kya soch liya yaar...
For devils sake..wo tumhari biwi thhhiii..
Matlab thiii.
Itna toh baharosa hona chahiye ..
Totaly hate story BB..
Continue..
Ab dobara bekar bola na..
To sacchi mai bite kar lungi..
Samjhi ya samjhaun..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
COME ON SAMEER!!!

Itna accha cop aur Aisha ko notice nahi kiya??!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
superb update h yr...
lol kya jealousy aur thinking ka chakkar hai...
riya arjun aur sakshi ko dekh ke... arjun riya aur sab ko dekh ke sam ariya ko dekh ke and aisha samiya ko dekh ke... 🤣
sb ne man hi man kitne murder kiye hai by god...
aur end mai riya ka dialogue... ufff acp hoke kuch nai samjhta sam...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
nice update
poor arjun he came back to office after 2 hours & nobody cares abt his gussa wala look😭😆
ariya still has feelings for each other but still wanna keep them away but y???
everybody is jealous & ready to kill each other😆
passionate jealous lover😆 she got it😉
as she said the whole etf is blind in their personal life including herself
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
@pihu thxx

@lovv thnxx

@akansha trust me, i dont know whats going on too

@jass i hope so...

@aman glad u liked it

@vampu uhh..i am scared agey se bekar nahi bolungi...and really i myself want to throw arjun off a cliff. he is so jack ass

@dash i am also surprised

@devil uff sablog kab samjhene? jab main samjhaoongi..lol

@madona...etf in pagal and J mode
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
nice part...
kya golmaal hai yaar??? 😆
sakshi full on lato arjun pe,arjun riya ke peeche sam in donon ki peeche,aisha sam ke peeche...shree & lisa addng fuel ...
rathod ka spanish wala dialog ws superb...
lykd it a lot..😃
update soon
Edited by nakshatra92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
@leki thnxx

@nakshatra..dont ask the golmaal, its the fruit of my mental block.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
fantastic update :) loved it
love the way sakshi replied to him on the chai
seems like riya was jeaolus
aisha's thoughts wer funny
loved shree and liza's nok jhok
oh god everyone is jealous 😆
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

another part is below...thank you guys. for commenting and liking it.



After a day full of action , what team ETF don't want to witness??

A dhamkedaar jhagra between two senior officers.

Flashback, 20 mins before…..

The ETF team was returning after solving a case and handing over the culprits to the local police. They were extremely pleased with themselves and chatted animatedly, to which rathore didn't mind.

The two Etf was running parallaly on the not so busy evening streets of Mumbai. In one was Sameer, Ayesha, Chotu and Liza, and in the Other was Arjun, Riya , Saakshi and Shree.

Sameer and Riya was driving the Suv. Arjun was hating each of the moments. Actually, after he settled himself in the Suv, he witnessed that Riya was in the driving seat.and it was impossible for him to back out due to his I don't care attitude and big fat male ego. And moreover, Shree was watching her like he is observing a girl first time in his life and Saakshi was eating his head with her baseless talks. And there was no use of his glares, as she is not scared of them, actually, she was never scared of them.

The two Suv s stopped at a red light spot.Chotu shouted, ''Shree, enjoying?''

Liza also jumped, ''haan specky, enjoying?'' and both bursted into laughters and hi 5 ed each other, while RaEsha were confused, Saakshi giggled, Arjun glared and Shree was getting red.

Riya spoke, ''waise I have a fantastic idea to enjoy.'' She stopped, while Saakshi and Shree looked at her. Riya shouted, ''Rats, what say? Ek race ho jaye?''

Shree Saakshi and Chotu Liza were very eager about it, while Sameer was not comfy. ''no, leave it, Champ.''

''ohh…ETF Chief scared?'' Riya said mockingly, while others laughed and Arjun looked at her with unbelievable look.

Sameer turned to her, with a mischevious hint in his eyes. Ayesha said, ''Sir, dikha dijiye who's the boss.''

Sameer turned to see her, while Ayesha was giving her murderous glare to Riya and Riya was smirking. Sameer eyed the red light, and shouted, ''don't forget the rules, Champ.''

''oh I remember.there's no rule.'' She said back. Arjun could'nt take it anymore.

''what the f**k??? no rules? We are cops goddamnit. We cant behave like this.'' He yelled at the two.

''oh shut up, Rawte. And if u r scared, get out of the car.'' Riya answered, and Shree and Saakshi looked at her with scared and awe expression. Arjun glared at her and before he could utter anything, the car sprinted.

Sarrati sarrati raftaarein hain
Aage bas manzil hai, peeche hawayein hain
Tharrata tharrata ik toofaan jo chhoo ke jo guzre to
Tham jaati raahein hai



The two SUV s were running over the top speed limits, and they were breaking all the traffic rules. Saakshi was enjoying this race while shree was scared, ''agar traffic police ne pakad liya to?''
saakshi answerd, ''arre duffer, hum ETF hain, bata denge ki kisi criminal ko pakadna hain. Samjhey ya samjhaaon?''

Riya chuckled from front seat, while Saakshi bursted into giggles. And Arjun continued to fume from inside.

Ziddi iraada hai koi
Kismat ki ik jo na maane
Jalta ik shola junoon ka
Khole ujaalon ke khaane
Raato'n ko cheere subah ki teerein
Kaali zanjeerein tod ke hi bana dil naya

Waqt ne jaise Lamha chuna ho
Sare itihaaso pe jo choodega apna nisaan ho

Sarrati sarrati raftaarein hain
Aage bas hai manzil peeche hawayein hain
.Tharrata tharrata ik toofaan jo chhoo ke jo guzre tto
Tham jaati raahein hain



Chotu and Liza continued to cheer their Chief , ''come on sir, who log humse aagey nikal jayenge. Come on.''

Ayesha also joined, ''yes, Sameer, go for it.'' And suddenly stopped as she accidentally called him by his first name.

Sameer also looked at her surprised, while Chotu Liza was looking at each other with this new chemistry in front of them.suddenly, Chotu shouted, ''sir, who log humse aagey nikal gaye.''

During their short eye lock, Riya managed to go ahead of them. Chotu's shout bring RaEsha back to earth. While Ayesha blushed a little, Rathore tried to concentrate on the race.

Mushqil woh mushqil hi kya hai baazi jo jaan pe naa aaye
Gir hai bhi gir hai kahaan hai aasani se khul jo jaaye

Khayalo mein bhi jo, mumkin nahi ho
Wahi kar dikhana himmaton ki tto pehchaan hai
Khud me khud hi ka kuch bhi kahaan hai
Jaan bas wohi hai yaariyo'n pe jo kurbaan hai

Sarrati sarrati raftaarein hain
Aage bas hai manzil peeche hawayein hain

They were close to the ETF headquarters. They were on the top gear and top speed now. The two SUV s crossed the entry at the same time and with such a speed that is enough to bring a hurricane.

''I won.'' The two drivers said at the same time and bursted into laughter. The others were busy chatting about the race and arguing about who is winner.

Arjun had enough now. He dragged Riya , holding her wrist tightly.

''what the hell….'' She shouted back at him.

''what are you doing Rawte? Leave her.'' Rathore was now getting angry.

''what the hell am I doing? What the hell were you two doing back there? Race? Seriously? Are you still kids? And what was wrong with you, Rathore? You too? Actually, its all her fault. She is destroying the environment of work here.'' He managed to spoke it all in one breath, still holding tightly her wrist.

''just shut up.'' She jerked his hand back, and he looked at her shockingly. ''really? I am destroying…oh please, '' she let out a small mocking laugh. '' why don't you say that you are jealous that we are a team and you are not part of it? Why don't you admit that I managed to be close of them in merely 2 days and you failed to do that in years. And why are you reacting? You wanted to be alone, you wanted that everyone leave you alone. So here it is. You are alone, none is disturbing you. Happy?''

Everyone looked at them shockingly. Arjun glared at her, hurt evident in his eyes, like someone has slapped him. But Riya didn't care. She went back to the ETF SUV and drived out of the office entrance.

Present

Riya was driving at the top speed now. And curshing her ex husband in mind.

''how dare he touch me? He has no right on me. And how dare he shout at me in front of the team members? Rawte, I so hope you don't come in front of me right now.i will be pleased to run over the SUV on you.'' She talked to herself. Then she tried to calm herself.

''breathe in, breathe out. Yeah now I am ok.'' She chanted the mantra .

Her eyes fell on the rearview mirror, and suddenly the police officer in her rised.a silver Honda city was following her from 200 feet distance. She had also seen it during the race. And she is sure that it is the very car.

The car was neither overtaking her, nor stopping. It continued to keep its distance. And instantly, the angry Riya's devil mind thought of a plan.

''shit. Kahan gayi who SUV??? Ab to sir mujhe zinda nahi chorenge.'' Khan cursed his luck angrily as he lost the black ETF SUV.

He was doing his job greatly. He managed to keep his distance and continued to watch her since morning. 2 mins before the SUV was in front of him,but now it is gone.all of a sudden, the SUV gained speed and managed to be out of Khan's sight.

''agar sir ko pata chal gaya to who to mujhe zinda jameen pe dafna denge. Ya allah….'' He prayed to god.

He stopped the car in a road circle from where three roads were going to three directions. He stared at the roads helplessly when suddenly

* BANG *


A black SUV, out of no where, banged his Honda city.and it was the same SUV he was following.

A lady, barely of 25, get out of the SUV, and came beside the driver seat.

''get out now.'' She yelled, in a tone that scream from every inch "don't mess with me "

Khan gulped in fear, he is so dead now , from both parties. He meekly came out of the car.

''why are you following me?'' she asked in a dangerous tone.

''main kyu….dddekhiye aaap mujhe gggalat….'' He mumbled, but , bad move.

''oh cut the crap damnit. Tell me. And don't you dare say main galat hoon. Maine tumhe peechle 35 mins se follow karte huye dekha hain. So tell me.'' She crossed her arms on her chest.

He mumbled again, with a strong voice this time, ''dekhiye, yeh aap thik nahi kar rahi hain. Ek to apne meri gadi thok di…aap police walli hain iss ka matlab yeh nahi ki kuch bhi….''

He never completed the line, as Riya took her gun and pointed in his head.

''meri goli aur tumhara sar. Beech mein kuch bhi nahi. Now, tell me another crap and you are so dead.''

Khan started to sweat, and started to blabber, ''dekhiye, aap aisa mat kijiye..meri umar hi kya hain? Aur humesha main hi kyu phasta hoon? Who bhi mujhe baat baat par jail bhej ne ki dhamki dete hain, aur aap maarne ki dhamki de rahi hain….''

Her eyes widened after hearing about a third person. She asked '' kisne tumhe hire kiya hain
? aur kyu?''

''who mujhe maar dalenge…'' he whispered, almost starting to cry.

''usse pehle tum yahan se zinda nahi bach sakte. Aur mujhe deparment se medal bhi milega…after all ek mujrim ka encounter jo hoga…'' she threatened, with a smile that is as dangerous as her eyes.

Khan send a last prayer to god, and then said, ''mujhe ACP Arjun Rawte ne hire kiya hain, aap ki har movement par nazar rakhne ke lieye. Aur who…… '' before he could complete, Riya put down her gun, curshed something, and ran towards her SUV.

''ya allah..ab to main gaya.'' Khan thought, and took the Sahara of his car to calm himself down.

ok...u have survived it😆


i am in full on dhamekedar mood...to agle epi mein dekhte hain, ki arjun sahab riya naam ki toofan se bach jaate hain, ya phir riya ko aur ek jhatke ka samnaa karna hoga...


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