Heart's A Mess T#2 TSR PG 144 27/10

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soaringskies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

it was short but painful sasak...😕

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

short but effective...was on the edge of my seat ant the end and almost wailed...powerful update that left me very sad

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Deepti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Khushi's words were heart wrenching...😭 But i guess she is suffering equally... I hope the situations were not like this but i wish that it would make their bond much stronger...❤️❤️

you are planning to make us cry in the next update right?? 😭 but everything you right is a treat for us..always..😊

wonderful update...👏

Do update soon...😊😊

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skmr.bs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Aww the chapter was really sad...though I really loved it...it did have the isolated effect you wanted...I really felt bad for both of them...they r both heartbroken...The best part was when arnav's heartbeat shot up after seeing khushi..loved it sooo much...!!!

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Oh Lord! What is thisss? You know what, I don't even know what I should think right now! I think it's natural for Khushi to behave that way but it still broke my heart! :'(

I loved the little detail you put in - Arnav's heart rate spiked up upon seeing Khushi, how he pleaded her to look at him, how her knees gave away upng seeing him, how he rushed to help her. Small yet wonderfully written! <3

I used to comment on the blog but because you find this easier, I'm happy to oblige! :)

Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago

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thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

they way u portray emotions is like painting with all the solours n and the larger picture is so beautiful sometime ur like in a hypnotic trance immobile and thoughtful beautiful man jus speechless and i cant agree with the the need for it to be short cos it was needed the space and my heart jus went out to the both of them god bless sasak

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Archana M H

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

It was a small update, but it, really had its moments

-like when she turns up, his heart rate shoots up & he just knows Khushi's there!

-their pain is so palpable, especially Khushi's!

-Irrespective of whether him hiding such vital piece of information from her will ever be justified or not, I am yet to come across an Arnav better than the one you have written, here!

You are one hell of a writer!

Edited by archana.mh17 - 12 years ago