Heart's A Mess T#2 TSR PG 144 27/10

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

No!!!! No no!!!!
There is just so much pain... 😔
Y is she saying that...im scared that this will deteriorate his health...
Gosh im waiting for the next to next update! :D 😳
absolutely wonderful!

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

I was dreading to read the update .. cognising the effect the read is gonna have on me...

And i was not wrong in fearing so! *sigh*

Her stupor not having subsided... His silent pleading eyes craving for her warmth... made me want to embrace him and cry out loud holding onto him and never wanting to leave ... hoping that it would bring down the distress in me, the ache in my heart ... but...

"I can't ever see you again."

That one line did it... my heart suddenly stopped!

Damn you Sasak! did you have to be this descriptive in your ways!? i still am not able to get rid of the pang..

Ah well!! just says you did a gr8 job there! and there is no second thought on that!

Appreciate your thoughts behind keeping this short... it surely has had the coveted effect albeit its length!!

Waiting for the next chap to get over this pain once and for all! *sigh*

Thanks a lot for the update and the PM darling! :))

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

OMG...
Very nice update...
It ws painful 4 me to read it... 😭
I dnt knw what ll happen nw?
OMG what ll b Arnav's reaction aftr Khushi's reply...
Poor Arnav...He ll b shattered...

Anway waitn 4 next LONG UPDATE... 😊
Btw when is d next update?...
Can't wait 2 read it... 😳

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

yes I know she's hurt, yes I know she needs to cry, that she wants to cry. How I wish she would just let it all go and flow with her emotions, I wish she would just run into his arms and provide him with the peace he requires, the emotional comfort he requires, provide herself the peace she yearned.

But its hard, its always hard, and maybe her decision is really necessary. But still, I wish she would just run into his arms once, stay there for a moment, at least give both of them a proper closure, so they can reign in the hurt later.

love
sonia

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Nisha06

@Nisha06

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Oh man..wat a situation d fate has brought for both..its really emotional..d way his heart beat shot jus bcoz of her presence nd his pleadings to embrace her was so much to take for me..though khushi had seen a lot of patients worse dan dis its difficult to see d one we love lik dis.. nd wats going to be arnav's reaction for her statement..i jus believe dat khushi would stick to wat she said to anjali..huh its really getting tough day by day after reading dis..i'm so involved in it dat it occurs as if its happening real in front of my eyes nd as if i can feel their emotion nd restlessness..really u r an amazing writer.. though d update was small as you said it conveyed wat u hav to say to us clearly.. waiting for d next long nd sad update.. Thanks for d pm..

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anyafarsi

@anyafarsi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

i can literally feel their...i dunno how...coz never in my life i've faced such situation...touchwood...bt i can relate to them...mayb coz of ur writing...