SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19) - Page 50

Ah my favourie FF has been updated, I was ecstatic to see Ch 18 on the heading of the thread! Left everything aside and started reading the chapter on my phone. What a powerful, emotional chapter that was. "you are not my type" Arghhh of all things to say the emotionally challenged moron had to say that. Doesn't he know how girls interpret that, there were so many other things he could have said but no he had to utter those words. I could so imagine him saying it, she is keeping your gift alright but do you realize what you did to her. ( Is that all you wanted to ensure that is for her to accept you stupid gift, I don't think so). While we get to see Khushi's pain guess we saw Arnav feeling frustrated and maybe even disappointed at Khushi's indifferent reaction. It was so great to see Khushi tell him "you should not have crossed your limits" you go girl. How can you kiss someone so passionately and then tell them they are not your type. That is sure to make Arnav babua guilty, you can't just go around and kiss your employees as you please. Ah well at least he knew if he is not into marriage then she is not into meaningless flings either. That put things in perspective for poor Khushi!

Of course,my fav char in dis story has to be the whoopi goldbergish devi maiyya:)

Oh no!! Misunderstanding?? But guess all will be fixed at the fashion event..

Nice update...Khushi and Arnav both r thick headed!!!

I absolutely loved khushi here, she was so brave 9esp not to break down infront of him) and arnav man you have really put your foot in your mouth this time...did you really need to say that she was not your time...well i guess if she did not know it before than she f**aking knows it now.
give him hell khushi..please give him hell and a good taste of his own medicine, say yes to marriage with someone else and quote his lines back to him..

I just read the last 2 updates! OMG MY EMOSHUNS. I just wow! You executed it so well.
Every word uttered, and every word unsaid was just so important and heartbreaking. Im glad that they both somewhat acknowledged what was going on though. And Arnav tried really hard, I know he did but the truth hurts. Gosh it hurts. And Khushi, oh my poor baby. She was so hurt. And then when she gave in and accepted it, it hurt so much more. I love how you didnt spell everything out. For example, when Khushi said that he should have stayed within his limits, she was basically saying "you shouldn't have lead me on, breaking my heart, knowing where this was going and still doing it, etc." Gosh it hurt. And just omg this was epic! So heartbreaking. I really loved these 2 chapters so much!

Loved it, Arnav never eloquent with words especially if it involves emotions ...but you wrote him so beautifully...he needed to tell her, he owed it to her ...

Poor khushi
I hope they patch up very soon

arnav khushi and even devimaiya is so confused..lovely update

Its funny - how you've brought up the tension a notch and the pace is down a notch. Really like that.