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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Amazing update dear...and precap is scary... Khushi really did go to Lucknow?

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

he did tell her not to go!!\
but she had her reasons!
lets see how they get out of this one!

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ara_000

@ara_000

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

lovely update yet again 👍🏼
i can feel d pain arnav is going through...
I loved it how he pleaded khuhi not to go coz he is too much afraid to loose her...
Their hug says it all how much they love each other...
Loved anji-arnie boy convo...
Its sooo cute...
Precap seems scary...goddd i just hope khuhi is fyn...!

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

fab updt

wt hapnd 2 khushi ???? wt was dat she wanna tell arnav

waitng fr d nxt 1

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Awsum update.
wen anji made arnav say d dialogue 'anjali di sabse sayaani' i felt lik cryin.
hope arshi marry each other soon

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stories.1408

@stories.1408

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

awesome...original dialogues r just out of this world.no matter how many times u listen or read they still get to me.cliffhanger again! now di khushi nt go or if she has then I presume he will follow her to sheeshmahal esp after that voicemail.so plz update soon nd let us know

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xmaangeetx

@xmaangeetx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

hey u left us on a cliff hanger..

loved it

thanks

and a big hug for ur regular updates

u make my life beautiful

thanks

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

Amazing update...

Thanks 4 d pm

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#229

R.
Edited.

"It was no secret to anyone, who knew Arnav Singh Raizada, even remotely.. " that his sister meant the world for him.. But no one, yet, knows the secret that , apart from Anjali, Khushi also means the world to him, in a parallel way.

Throughout the chapter, I have felt that Arnav's attention is divided marginally for his Di and Khushi, and sometimes it intensified towards Khushi, more.

Crying rivers during her Bidai, was the most spontaneous and expected reaction from Anjali.
.. But the reasons for shedding buckets of tears, were so genuine and it reflected only pure and unadulterated Love, for her little brother.

You haved potrayed the sibling relationship of Anjali-Arnav as beautifully as you have potrayed the sibling relationship between Rohan, his Bachchi and Payal.
Sometimes I'm confused to figure out that which sibling relationship, between the aforementioned two , I Love the most. 😕

Arnav's decision to go to Boston and to live like a recluse, had very serious emotional effects on his loved ones.

I just loved Arnav's line-
"Ghalti ho gayi, Di.. Maaf kar do?.. "
It shows that he is just Chote when it comes to his Di and not at all the intimidating ASR..

Pappad ka Tukda was so sweet and emotional.. It was exactly like some secret between the siblings, shared during the childhood..
It was a very fresh concept that you have implemented during the Bidai scene unlike the cliched ways of Bidai.
Creativity Galore! 👏

I seriously wanted Arnav to tell Anjali, about his Love for Khushi. But he said everything except the name.

Arnav had no staring sessions with Khushi. Too bad.

This chapter distinctly showed that Arnav's focal point of attention is Khushi.. And that might be more than Anjali.

His impatience to talk to her is.. Amazing!

The memories of Sheesh Mahal are so Ambivalent.. It's your sheer brilliance, in the way you have showed, how the study, the attic and the garden have both good and bad memories.. It's hard to decide that which memories to remember- the good or the bad.. And considering Arnav to be cynical, he is bound to stick to the gruesome memories of the argument and gunshot, his mother's disappearing pallu and the abandonment. It is quite instinctive on his part.
The description of Arnav's perspective about the Sheesh Mahal was heart-breakingly poignant.

Mami's "inverted" thought process is actually very much basic.. But what she doesn't know is that her reticent nephew's world consists of Khushi too, other than his Di.😉

I seriously burst out laughing while reading that Arnav was moving his head like an antennae for supposedly catching signal.🤣

.. And I again burst out laughing when he very seriously asked Khushi not to wear Red, when they argue because he forgets what he wants to say. 🤣🤣

Khushi's plan of visiting Lucknow to trace her roots while effectively keeping Rohan Bhaiyya away, seems to be a very fool-proof plan..
Like Arnav, she was efficient to cash on the ripe oppurtunity and accompany Rohan during his honeymoon.

"Mat Jao" - was so emotional and
heart-touching.

Arnav's vulnerability comes to the fore when he (almost) begged her to not go to that cursed house.

I loved the conversation very much. It was Great. 👏

Arnav is hell angry.. And that is quite expected.

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

R.
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Precap

Typical hot-headed Arnav. This is a major flaw in him - He can never think straight in anger.

In the middle of the night , Arnav ".. woke up with a start".. Was this a Premonition of things to come..?

Khushi's frantic voicemail with a very distressed voice is scary. I just hope things are/will be alright.

.. Ahh! This is such a potent
cliff-hanger!

Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago