hey dear,just now finished with finding solace, till the point you have written so far...my head is fuzzy at the moment at reading such a heart warming, cute, sexy, sizzling, story of arshi which was so well thought, and written with absolute precision...!!! wow you are damn expressive...i could see each update as an episode of IPK going on infront me, what concept and execution...!!!!!! hell great...👏 i was so damn excited to know that this was an ff and not an ss,😉which meant that it would be long, and i would be reading it for quite sometime...!!! i guess its already coming to an end, with almost all the loop holes closed...but yeh dil maange more of this...!!!! can you continue this for sometime more...plsss, pretty plsss
you know what i had loved about his story?? it is that you had picked all the little and major things out of IPK, which were very important to the story and jast gave a 180 degree turn to those, khushi and arnav fighting to keep the desires supressed instead of pulling each others hairs off.. mami's completely goody goody avatar😉, calling khushi bitiya😆😆...shyam having an affair again under arnav's nose but this time with anjali...payal and akaash acting like khushi and arnav initially always bickering and answering back each other...then payal and akaash's secret marriage for their siblings, how khushi and payal have changed their traits khushi being the sort of softer dreamy one one where as payal the modern and practical one, akash being the flirtier and carefree one like NK, the hospital hug and comforting scene where arnav comes with full intention to comfort her...akaash stopping buaji slapping payal and saying arnav's dialogues about not giving permission to touch and raise hand on his wife, the family though with great difficulty yet comfortably accepting both the couples...shashi's view on their relationship whereas he was kept all mum in the show, how arya craved for a mother in khushi and aarav craved for a dad in arnav inthe show...there are many more, but these truly stood out for me...!!! how i wished the actual show have been like this...!!! the best part about arshi's relationship that i love is that they dont seem to keep things in their minds and think in monologue's about them but actually have the guts to speak them out to each other, i truly admire this opening up to each other attitude, and trying to give a chance attitude of their...arnav and khushi's realization is one great important factor in their lives, and i love that they both go through it and act upon it, not being the usual hot headed fools...though there is its presence, but i see less of the great EGO of both of them hampering their relationship...!!!!
khushi arnav chemistry, physics biology is hot hot hot...!!!!! will get burns soon i guess withthe upcoming chapters, 😳😳😳 😉😉😉 it is truly commendable how you write mature and intmate scenes, so vividly😳😳😳 ☺️ yet with such poise and dignity that it does not feel wrong or immoral at all...!! i found that in TINA, varu, Kalyaani,omoraboti, appy, sarunfanatic_ji, rtlicious and now you😃😃 feels absoltely pure...
and arya-khushi bond is such a special one...how could not one adore and fall in love withthe little angel instantly...i did too...each and every interaction of these two was so touching and emtional, i literally cried in the update where arya if hurt because of khushi's decision to leave her, and both feel heart broken and dejected at each other's sadness...!!!
i wish to see payal bond at a greater level with arya, being her chachi now...their initial tiffs, specially dislike on arya part for payal was so amusing to read...!!!! all waiting for the next update...!!! will you sned pm 😕😕😕??? i now i just started you stoires, but i sort connected to then instantly... that's two of your stories finished in three days...soprry cant start anouther one today (even if had the wish to start the fairy one you wrote), have an assignment to submit tomorrow, but will surely start it tomorrow...!!! its okay if you are not okay to send pm to a new reader, i ll happily stalk...!!😃😃😃 and as for your doubts of writing so big updates and boring us, you got to be kidding...!! we are like so engrossed in the updates that, it feels like how could she end it so soon, that was short...😲😲 now you get how much we like to get bigger updates...such is your capability of getting us hooked to it and making us crave for more...!!!so dont worry about longer updates, we readers love them dearly...!! you truly are as sweet and amazing as a Rasgulla...!!!!
all the best dear, i had a lot more to say...but i tend to forget in excitement...i guess covered up most of the things i wanted to share about my take on the story...i truly found solace reading it..!!! 😊 cheers
Edited by shona136 - 12 years ago
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