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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Hi..read this SS in 1 go...loved it...feels like I made a trip 2 darjeeling 2 witness a wonderful love story...😊

PS: whats uP vth ur last comment...?didnt get it...😕

Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago

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deepikadhanu

@deepikadhanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Wow fabulous story. Just came across this story and read it into 1 go. Loved it lottt. Cute story with happy ending:-)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#333

iam a new reader of your works

absolutely a mind blowing SS -

beautiful one

arnav's insecurities were excellently portrayed

wonderful SS

will move on to the next story in your index

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Ohh my ! this was such a lovely little story!

Loved every bit of it !

Absolutely fantastic ! 😃

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#335

I am no fan of tea ( in fact like you, I rarely drink it). Also i haven't been to Darjeeling. As I write this, I wonder why am i telling you all this...well just so to affirm that the above mentioned elements were in abundance and although not being accustomed to them, I enjoyed this story very much.

The title was well justified; loved how you began it all, then infused bits and pieces of the past of both of them, enough to draw a picture on what they had to undergo or from where the protagonists come from. Nice of you to have touched on the topic of scoliosis.

The secondary characters in the form of a cheeky Cheeku (Aman) and an understanding and caring sister (not to mention filmy) sister Lavanya were also well woven in the story.

The bike rabba ve was also good, and I didn't mind an entire chapter getting devoted to that particular scene in fusion with Arnav's first words to Khushi.

Over all, a lovely story.

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Ahh!! This totally in contrast to your Salve!!

What eh story man!! Genius you are definitely!! I'm not a tea person Coffee is the cup I prefer between my lips yet this one made me feel tea can be good too!! The way you described it all definitely takes the credit!!

An Arnav that I have come across for the first time! And it makes me wonder how come both your works have this reality touch that is you portray your characters as naturally as possible! It can happen to any one those kind of real characteristics!!!

This was a complete relax read!! And each of the scenarios totally different and unique from the other!!

When I read Lavanya Raizhada only I know how I saw green!! So I totally understand Khushi's plight the morning after at the tea stall!!

And the bike ride!! Ushu this makes me love my bike all the more :p can anyone portray a better scenario than you? I highly doubt what eh way to show the feelings and the emotions!!

Aah that kiss! It said it all didn't it!! And then the usual the self pity or to say underestimation!!

I loved lavanyas characterization there kudos man!!

And the union at the village bliss!! Hearts conveyed feelings accepted and portrayed!!

Sweet man!

Lovely read!

Cheers buddy!

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Bhartic71

@Bhartic71

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Awesome story!! Thanks for sharing.

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

I haven't had a chance to read your work before the last place on earth and I was thinking about exploring your index, now I got that chance. You are one awesome, very talented writer. Love this story. Physical deformity in Arnav was definitely a first. I love the way you have described teas and tea gardens, in fact I love everything in this story 😊👏

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sabz105

@sabz105

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Wow Anupama, I came across this SS of yours and I'm just left speechless!!!!

What a beautifully portrayed heart-warming ArShi story!!!! I have completely fallen in love with your writing style and this story!!!!!

Anupama you are just awesome!!!! Hats off for coming up with this amazing SS!!!!

I just loved both Arnav and Khushi's characters and to top it off with the beautiful description of Darjeeling and its famous teas!!!! Aww how I wished I could have been there!!!! I'm already dreaming!!!!

Thank you for giving us a happy ending, I'm so glad Khushi listened to La and went after Arnav and made him realise she truly loves him and not any pity!!!!!

Anupama could you please write an epilogue??? I don't want this story to end, I'm already missing it!!!!

Anyway thanks for a great reading experience!!!!!!

Wish you all the best for your future Fan Fictions; please continue to write many more amazing ArShi stories!!!! I would definitely love to read them!!!!

Well I'm off to find your Index so I can read your other works!!!!

Take care,

Lots of love,

Your fan,

Rahat