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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Me first !! 😊

Hey I've just realized why this spot is so much sought. it's like catching a movie, first day...first show and that too sitting in the front row of a single screen theater...😛

My reaction to the entry of ASR, where he was prancing around, clad in just a towel...👏...whistle...!!

Oh...so your Arnav has some kind of a deformity of his back...and his father didn't seem to be the sensitive kind...

I love your attention to details...very well written...So Arnav does notice her fragrance...hmmm.

Khushi and Ckeeku...how adorable... Khushi waits every morning to take a cup of perfectly brewed tea to LG herself...She already seems smitten by him...

Thinking of something witty to say to him, that's all she could come up with...how cute..😆

Your story has such a fresh feel to it...I love it already...can't wait till Thursday...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Ooh! Interesting take - Arnav with a deformity and a scar - sounds like there is history there...

And how truly Khushi this Khushi is...eyes like Darjeeling tea - indeed.

Glad this is now an SS. Looking forward to reading more

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Just found this and truly enjoyed the first two chapters.

Like the different angle that you have given Khushi and Arnav.

Looking forward to the next part.

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

First time I have heard of Arnav's eyes being compared to Darjeeling oolong !!! Love the comparison !! Keep going !!

I am an Assam tea person myself... although I drink Oolong when we travel!!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awww man that was just great
So seems Arnie has some deformity
Wonder what happened there to cause the scars and deformity on his back
Not that I care
Hey since its Arnie don't matter
Waise so true what she said of his eyes though
Hmmm seems we really like coming to her little tea stall
Man can't wait to know more and more about them

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@Anony_mous

Inactive

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

This story so deserves to be converted to SS.. it has immense potential. I am seriously glad that you've decided to do that :)

So Arnav has a deformity on his back. That is a new angle. Liked it!

Have you read/ seen The Rag Nymp by Elizabeth Gaskell I think? Videos are there on youtube if you want. It might help you with ideas regarding this story. Just a suggestion. If you have it all figured out already, then I am ll set to read it :)

Khushi eagerly awaits her this 'company wala bada afsar'.. Awww! I always like flawed characters better then the prim and proper ones, and I can't wait to see how you break the ice between these two here.

When can we expect next update btw?

PS: Unres'ed on page2.

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Eyes like Darjeeling tea huh? After all that planning, tch tch Khushi bitiya. But her nervousness has a charm of its own. This is such a different take on Arnav- a deformity and a scar, and a father who makes him feel ugly and damaged. She on the other hand had a family who would give her away to the highest bidder. They need each other to overcome their heartaches. Looking forward to more. So glad you've decided to make it an SS

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

I dont drink tea at all, unless it is iced.

But your story shows that either you know a lot about Darjeeling and tea or you did a lot of research for the same.

Moving on, Arnav with a deformity and an inclination towards Lavander; and Khushi paying a lot of attention to that Raizada tho in denial...

So, refreshingly sweet. Looking forward to more :)

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Firstly, I'm glad that you've turned it into a SS 😊 because I'm really loving it!
So our Arnav has a sort of deformity on his back? Ow. That's a new angle.
And Khushi Khushi Khushi... well what to say about her. There are reasons why I love her so much!

"'Your eyes resembles Darjeeling oolong tea.'' 😆

Wah! wah! I've never compared Arnav's eyes to teas, but well...now that you've mentioned... it just makes sense! 😃

Also, this update made me desire for the different flavours of tea so much! It's...not even funny how much I want a cup...NOW! I guess this is going to be the scene with all the updates?

Here's a tea quote for this lovely FF: