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@Rimo22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Res!
Again 2 pages agae! 😔

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Beautiful update.. Go for kiss.. no missed kiss please...

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Very sweet and romantic. The beginning of their love story. Waise hum sab theek hain . But we need the next part soon :P

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aashi12

@aashi12

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

That was a beautiful chp! 'tum theek ho' it just sounds soo romantic! And wid the scenary and weather u've described it looks soo real and vivid!

So its not just khushi who feels his evry touch, caress, breath and his voice, arnav too was much lost into her!

And when he said ' i just came to see you' it just took my breadth away..
Just one ride together, and arnav removed all the awardness from his side, while khushi promised herself to take car nxt time for his convinence!:)

rain and kiss is the best combination!;)

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meera30

@meera30

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Ooh drizzle, Arnav, Khushi and tea...

I love the freshness of this story - quite literally - I feel like I am in the mountains myself!

What is it with mountains and this pair? Just put them there and magic happens!

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

"Khushi too has it but she took her scooty with her to drive him to Kalimpong because she wanted to rabba ve. Scooty par ache se ho gaya."

😆

Kamaal ho tum, yaar.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

I loved the little moment they have shared at the beginning of this Chapter.

The first exchange of smiles was magical.

The descriptions of both their feelings are Perfect.

I loved the way they stood close to each other, Arnav grazed his fingers over her forehead , Khushi lowered her gaze and Arnav swallowed. Fantastic.👏

Thanks for the PM.😊

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meem17

@meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Nice update
Liked it thanos for the pm

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Anu, Your note was as rocking as the chapter before it!! Not a tea person? Lucknow ke Jaade me how do u survive?
You told about full fledged kiss and then not so pretty end.. Iss se to Aap suspense hi rahne dete!
So Arnav will run away from his feelings..?? I hope you will give this a happy ending! Humse tragedies bardasht nahi hoti!

When I read abt Alto, I was like what the!! But then Alto mein scooty ka maza kahan? And I read your note too! Makes perfect sense- no logic. 😉
Milte hai agle update pe kadak chai ke saath!

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

First things First, I did notice her dress details and liked it a lot :)

Reading this chapter it felt like I am falling in love and not Khushi. The flower is blooming in my heart. What a beautiful analogy!

And their thoughts, where Arnav was justifying the smile she brought to his face and she is a little scared to loose that very smile if he comes to know about her feelings was awesome. Very sublime and very practical at the same time.

What touched me most was that he came just to see her at the end of his busy day. He is certainly a man in love. Hope he realizes it soon :)

Are they going to kiss????? 😳

Btw, Hum convince ho gaye, thank you :D

Gosh this is such a cute dialogue. I wish to use it in my story somewhere!

Edited by Anony_mous - 12 years ago