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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

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(Damn not on the same page yet again. My kismat is kharab!)
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Edited: Haye Anupama ji... maar daala iss update ne hume.

I just loved, loved the descriptions you gave. The touches which happened after the 'tum theek ho'... haye aala... I was dead. I could totally understand why Khushi was speechless for a bit.

And my my... The bade afsar finally melting. It was so good to see him talking to her in this update. And I loved the part where he said, "No, I'll leave now, I just came to see you."

Seriously, sweetest shit ever!

Kiss karwano ya na, Rabbe ve karwate rehna 😉

So finally they're moving from attraction to conversation. Can't wait for the next update.

P.S: Please give me another chance to use a tea-quote :P
P.P.S: Your chapter's on page 17, not page 18.

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Haaye ..what an adorable update !!!

I can feel the tingles the way you described Arnav holding her hands while trying to get a grip of the scooty and the immediate after events !!❤️

He came to see her ...not have tea 😆 and he admitted the fact !😲 😉

What is there to decide ?????? Arnav and Khushi in barish = Kiss !!! BAS 😳

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

lovely update... awww Arnav just came to see her :D cute... so now they r holding hands n running in the rainnn... n i guess the kiss will b in the next chap??

Edited by luvbug - 12 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Loved the fact that he came to the shop just to see her. They are slowly getting closer.

Aman is with Anjali?

Kiss to banta hai, naa. They are standing in the rain , romantic atmosphere.

They are alone. What more do they need?

Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

kya yaar not another miss of kiss yaar#
#wow that sure was something right
and boy was it some interesting things happening
they are so cute together
no really they are
they have gotta stop meeting like this
ufff kya baat hai dil ki baat aa hi gayi naa muh parr arnie
man that was so cute
cant wait for more

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

I farak y0u, I really d0, but the kiss-miss is getting boring darling...letshave some action!!! Pretty please!!!

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Growing closeness...so very romantic..esp with the backdrop of misty mountains.

Arnav seems to be attracted to her too now...let's see what happens next.

So sweet of Khushi to be considerate of his back..

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

wonderfully written. very evocative of the place. been to darjeeling previously and can almost see and feel the place in this story. wish i could be there now!

loved the story

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

You play with all our senses and not just the visual.

On the scooty we can feel the brief touches of Arnav, feel the looks they share since then, the smiles they exchange as they become "easy acquaintances", the blush that creeps, the hesitancy that settles...

Cheeku n Leechi what a fruity combination! 😆

The pg no is 17 for the chapter not 18.

As for the kiss i offer no suggestions :)