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Posted: 12 years ago

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amazing os...Comment edited on pg 1..

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Mihika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: megsy
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super cute story mihika! 😳😳😳

sharon being concerned about killing a potential life shows the innocent girl with her, it brings out the simplicity masked behind her diva attitude!! that was really a cute thing!

wish swayam would had heard all of sharons blabbers...but none the less imagining the sleeping swayam and then sharon extending her shoulder to him was ultra awesome and cute!!

m in dream world!

love,
megha

Megha di.. 🤗 Thanks for appreciating my work. Means a lot.. And yeah, I forgot to add... Credits- you for giving me that last part ka vague idea.. :) :) Hehe poor Swayam was sleepy hence didn't hear. 😆 I wish he comes to know about her feelings really soon!!

Thanks for the comment. :D

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Mihika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: tanha29
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Thank God, you posted something happy because like a fool me can't handle any emotional stuff or any tragedies.

Well, Mihika i must say i am loving your works and the way you write. Seriously i am in love with your work especially OS's. You are very good at that. I really want a scene something like this in D3 which is next to impossible i know. 😳

This was so nicely and beautifully written, like i was little in off mood but it made it all. I was grinning ear to ear like idiot and i loved being idiot at that moment.

The best part was SHARON called Swayam at her home to cook breakfast. Awww, this line "They give birth to chicks' right? Chicks develop inside an egg. I'll kill a developing living being this way." was out of the world for me like i seriously cracked.

This was super awesome OS! Not to mention the ending was the lime light when our grumpy drumpy majnu slept like a baby and Sharon confessed to herself and kissed his cheeky! Awww... 🤗

Thanks tons for such a brilliant OS, Mihiks! luv you.. ❤️

P-S: Please do write more OS soon for me but please no sadness and no tragedies! 😳

- Marium

Well, well I'm flattered to see your comment. 😆 Okay, jokes apart. Thanksie for the super sweet comment. I'm glad you liked it. :D :D Even I love you as a writer.. :) :)

And can't promise about tragedies, but yeah i'll continue writing one shots. 😳

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Mihika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: swaron_pk
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First of all thanks ID for such a feel good OS 😊
Teqqq...🤗🤗 Welcome. 😳 😳
Sharon invited swayam officially for breakfast date ... Their romance while swayam teaching sharon 😳
Hehe.. :) :) Sharon was seizing the opportunity. 😆
I wish swayam could have taught her more 😳 😆 and also would have listened to her blabberings 😛
How can I insert so much happiness into a single OS? 😕 😕
I loved the ending sharon confessing her love for swayam , making him sleep on her shoulder.,.. And also adoring him ...hayee... I fear I might get diabetic 😆
I wonder wat would happen when swayam wakes up ? Plz do write more to answer my question 😉
I told you already! And yeah, even i was grinning while writing that part.. :D
Loved the OS <3, as usual awesome job by you 😎
- CM
Thanks for the comment. :)

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Mihika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Swthrt🤗
Hi di. 🤗
The episode in which they mentioned about their "Breakfast Date"...it refreshed the memories of the adorable Swayam who made that heart shaped omelet for his Sharon...all the SS fans were hopeful to see such a date on the show...a date between Swaron seems a distant dream for now...i wish we could see something like this OS on the show...swaronians would die out of happiness if it happens...

I wish I could eat that heart shaped omelet prepared by Swayam.. :)
And palki ma'am won't let such a date happen. :/ I am positive.
Coming to the OS...the cute beginning made me smile...where taani and sharon were on call...sharon was as usual diva...n taani poor girl...
The unusual invitation...to come to her house and make breakfast for both eof them made me grin...😆
I didn't want to include Taani but had to do it eventually...:)
Loved the part when u showed both of them in kitchen ...poor sharon...invited him to spend some quality time with him...where as our Majnu boy was too much involved in making breakfast...
Hehe. Thanks. :) Swayam IS dedicated you see. 😆
The breaking egg part was hilarious yet adorable...loved their argument about the egg..chicken ...lol
:P :P Lame one I know. 😆
Poor Sharon ...lost in her majnu and he was expecting some help from the love-sick girl...
Love makes people go blinddd and do weird stuff. 😆
My fav part being the onions and swaron...😆...loved the cutei pie sharon here...😳😳
🤣🤣 🤣 Many others found this part funny. To be honest my intention was not to make it look funny. 😆
"How's the coffee Swayam?" She looked at him. At first she thought she was imagining stuff. She had never seen Swayam cry. She rubbed her eyes to get a clear view.

"Swayam! Are you crying?" She exclaimed. "Omg why? Is the coffee so bad?"

Swayam looked at her. Before he could say anything she moved towards him and was about to wipe his "tears" but resisted.

"No." Swayam was disheartened. Had Sharon wiped his tears, he would have loved it. "It's because of onions."

The part when she called him "BORN PERFECT" and the aftermath was just so beautiful..loved it...Swaron together define PERFECTION...
Yes they do. 😛

"But what do YOU think?" He speculated, stressing the word "you".

"I think the same." She started a bit low, but towards the end, she looked directly into his eyes and spoke. Soon, her lips carved into a sweet smile, as she looked at him lovingly. His eyes were full of intensity,care, warmth, passion and love, for her. She loved seeing her face in those chocolate brown orbs. Even though she didn't look perfect, she loved it when those pupils reflected her face. She was riveted by him and his perfect personality. She had completely drowned in those pool of emotions. Why did he have to be so perfect?

For the first time, he could see the same love and intensity in her eyes. He couldn't ask her about it though, his life's main aim was to make her feel comfortable. He valued her comfort.

The ending of the OS was just so beautiful and adorable at the same time...poor sleepy swayam slept when sharon kept on blabbering in front him...loved the way she confessed her feelings to a sleeping swayam...could visualize the scene with ur description..
Aww thanks.. :) :) I wish I get to see something like this.. Without any tragedies.. :)

I LOVE THE FLOW in ur storied...its just flawless..keep writing dear
Thank you di. 😳

Love
Deep