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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
wow i really wanted this os...
on the breakfast date,...
thnk u so much.. 😊

it wa really cute..
loved it 😳
the end was great ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Awesome, hope this happens in D3 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome post 👍🏼
wish to see sumthing like this in d3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
*Phew* Finally I read it and am here. 😆 You see you need to work on your pestering skills :P
With God's divine intervention I read your OS and you should be obliged because I've nothing to do with reading or even writing these days :P

Okay,We could ramble about the same some other time too.Let's just finish off the business :P
I liked how you began with some quotient of real life, Taani was so her, stupidly weird :P Whatever it is, the story was adorable and on the top 'realistic' so I wouldn't be criticizing it :P Thus,it made a good read. I like how you've grown as a writer your flow has grown to be methodical and meticulous, iLike it. :D

Thanks for the PM.

P.S:Stop Pestering me now!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon

*Phew* Finally I read it and am here. 😆 You see you need to work on your pestering skills :P

With God's divine intervention I read your OS and you should be obliged because I've nothing to do with reading or even writing these days :P

Okay,We could ramble about the same some other time too.Let's just finish off the business :P
I liked how you began with some quotient of real life, Taani was so her, stupidly weird :P Whatever it is, the story was adorable and on the top 'realistic' so I wouldn't be criticizing it :P Thus,it made a good read. I like how you've grown as a writer your flow has grown to be methodical and meticulous, iLike it. :D

Thanks for the PM.

P.S:Stop Pestering me now!

Omg!! I can't believe you finally commented here. Someone pinch me. 😵
Well thanks for the comment.
@Bold Rofl. 🤣
And I can't stop pestering you since you have to comment on one more OS. 😳
Happy commenting. :D
Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
first of all sorry for late reply but it was awesome.just loved sharon how sharon feel the same for swayam.egg wala part was awesome.over all a treat to read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
I love this x
Best part is it's Sharon's POV
This is amazing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
It was amazing update

sharon too much excited to have breakfast with him.
Taani don't want wake up her bhai bt eventually he wake up due to her mistake.
Swayam too excited to go to her place

Swayam preparing breakfast for them. Then egg moment btw them was fab
Sharon lost in him nd started to adoring hhm

swayam crying due to onion was fab nd sharon shocked due to swayam behaviour.
They ate there breakfast with each other nd sharon happy after eating breakfast.

Sharon complained abt her, not knowing preparing breakfast.
But swayam dozed off already
nd she aww due to his expression

sharon confessed her feeling bt swayam already slept

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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
such an adorabe os mihika
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
this was a really cute one..
the way sharon answers taani.."sharon! who else?" her insistence on waking up swayam ...tat was all soo sharon!!!
at sharons place the egg breaking and her getting all lost in swayam it was all too adaorable. and then..
"Oh please... You yourself know that nothing can happen to me in your presence... And asthma gets aggravated only when i do some physical activity or if I get hyper.. How can anything happen to me in your presence Swayam? What would have had happened if you had let me into the kitchen? It's my kitchen after all. I know that day you prepared breakfast for me but today I was there.. You should have let me in too... And even for breakfast, I called you for spending time.. I enjoy your company. And I know you enjoy it too, I wish I could spend some time with you in the kitchen.." Sharon was blabbering everything at the same time and too fast. She wanted him to know about it. It should have been impossible for Swayam to understand what exactly she was saying.

this is exactly wat v shld be hearing from sharon in the show as well at this point..
and the best part mihika.. this was all more of sharon's side of the story and for that take a bow!!😊

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