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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

thiss on e is really interesting one..childhood frends now hate eachother wat can be the reason ???thats the only thing going on in my head...
btw very interesting concept and yu write really well👏
update next part soon and do pm me😊


Awww really ... Thank You so much!! Don't worry you'll find out in the next update why they are enemies
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: copypaste

ths ff is so good plz cnt sn and pm me really wanna knw wat happend btwn virman


Be patient ... You will find out
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: manvilover18

wow nice and very interesting story plzzz plzzz update soon waiting...


Yayy!! So glad you liked it ... and will update after my exam :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
oh my god...!!!! witth he very first chapter only u have this effect on me... 😳 i am already loving it yaar... i never thought it would turn out to be so beautiful... but it did n i am really happy... childhood sweethearts... apt name n so is the pic...its so cute...!!! 👏 👏 👏
childhood memories were very bfully written n they were sooo good that i cant explain in just mere words...!!! 😃
virat was attarcted to mannu... yeh toh hona hi tha...!!! n virat still feels the same.. thats the best part...!!! 😃
aww their parents thought that virman would end up together when they would grow up then what happened...??? virman friendship broke but why...??? 😕 😕 😕 😕
uff... so many questions i tell u...!!! 😳
anyways please pm me next tym n thanks for such a wonderful story...
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: naina927

oh my god...!!!! witth he very first chapter only u have this effect on me... 😳 i am already loving it yaar... i never thought it would turn out to be so beautiful... but it did n i am really happy... childhood sweethearts... apt name n so is the pic...its so cute...!!! 👏 👏 👏

childhood memories were very bfully written n they were sooo good that i cant explain in just mere words...!!! 😃
virat was attarcted to mannu... yeh toh hona hi tha...!!! n virat still feels the same.. thats the best part...!!! 😃
aww their parents thought that virman would end up together when they would grow up then what happened...??? virman friendship broke but why...??? 😕 😕 😕 😕
uff... so many questions i tell u...!!! 😳
anyways please pm me next tym n thanks for such a wonderful story...


Finally Naina, I am so glad that you read it at last. I have read so much of your work and trust me you have no idea how much your comment means to me. Thank You so much!! I honestly thinking it was rubbish, but I am glad that you like it. I promise the next chapter will be better though. I will definitely PM you and you'll find out everything soon as well.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Super wala awesome love there frindship they were so cute when they were kinds and viraat still have crush on her he hates her but still expecting her to be beautiful i just want to know happend between them...plz update soon
Edited by kinz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
awesum concept ...lvd chp1.. do update soon n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: kinz

Super wala awesome love there frindship they were so cute when they were kinds and viraat still have crush on her he hates her but still expecting her to be beautiful i just want to know happend between them...plz update soon


Super wala awesome Thanks!! I am really glad that you liked it and I will update right after my exams, you'll find out what happened soon.
Edited by Menzena - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: surovita

awesum concept ...lvd chp1.. do update soon n add me to ur pm list


Thank You ! Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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what the efffing hell is this??dare ever praise my work again!!!!u'r like 1000 times better than i can ever be.can i hv ur autograph plz...
update sooner rather than later.plzzz❤️

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