ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Mmm, interesting.

Khushi steals the lime light in this chapter. Really enjoyed her bold character. Nice how you showed that she wanted Arnav. Passion and desire is often considered taboo for women to feel but is quite natural so it was a nice change reading it.

Arnav works for some secret organisation and got close to Khushi in order to get hold of Shaym? But lost his heart to her in between all this mess?

Eager to read what happens next.

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nightfury

@nightfury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

what happened to shyam ?? very interesting do continue soon 😃

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

That was fabulous Juhi!

Me too hated that terrace confrontation!

There are so many scenes that I felt should have been dealt differently!

Thanks for coming up with this one. Loved it!

So Shyam is her brother and what exactly is ASR's job?

Too many Q's are there and I'll wait for your next update.

Love this strong Khushi!

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Akira Singh

@tinsel_akira

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Omg Shyam Khushi's brother???
It was a total surprise

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sruthiif

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

It was mind blowing...
Eagerly waiting for you to update the next part to close all the loop holes...

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

wow so Arnav is some sort of secret agent/police

And Shyam is Khushi's brother

I am speculating that Arnav pursued her to get to her brother
which turns out to be his jijaji

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Intriguing !!! loved it.. will be waiting for an update anxiously.. thanks for pm 😊

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Just when I think this tale resembles the show and you are trying to change what happened after the terrace scene kahaani mein twist! 😲
Many things surprised me in this story.
1.Anjali's 24 hour obsession is not only puja. She is a business woman too.
2.Arnav works in the police/detective department or some sort of agency like RAW
3.Khushi insisted on the marriage and Arnav did not even want the marriage.
As always you've left us on a cliffhanger Juhi.There are a lot of questions running in my mind.But I will wait for the second part for the answers to them. 😊

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casker

@casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Shyam is Kushi's brother. Then why Arnav refused to marry Kushi.

Confused😕

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

a lovely beginning to the series... the thought of arnav being an officer of the law [I think] is interesting... did he get closer to khushi so as to be able to gather info about shyam's dealings... am eagerly awaiting the unravelling of various unanswered questions here, including why she was telling her brother to leave anjali... looks like she guessed shyam had betrayed his wife in some manner, and was taking him to task... nice to see that arnav realised he had misjudged khushi, so so decided to come clean to her and not marry her on false pretences... liked the fact that you made khushi a successful career woman in her own right who doesn't hesitate to face life's shocks head-on and who's willing to fight for what she strongly believes in! the ever-present passion flaring between khushi and arnav reminds one of their equation in the show! touchin to see her fighting for her marriage, while trying to hide her insecurities and fears... also glad that anjali is a woman of substance, too!