What a wonderful Chapter !! ๐๐
I really enjoyed it, It recorded me my own childhood memories ๐๐๐
Really Molten, you just take us in your story and make us forget everything around us !! ๐๐
Coming to the chapter ๐
Oh no I'll first Comment on the Banner ๐๐
You made it ?? Or another of your fan made it ๐ I know you would gave the credit, if it was the case, so I assume you made it ๐๐
That is such a cute pic ๐ณ๐ณ That shows that you're going to focus this story mainly on their childhood, right ??
I really Like ๐๐
The first Part : Khushi
I was absorb it Khushi and Arnav's meeting, that I didn't care about the bags she was carrying !! and Arnav didn't even help her
So it was for Anjali's wedding ??
But why Khushi calls Anjali, Anjali memsaab and not ChutKi meemsaab ?? ๐ฒ๐ฒ
Buaji is the one who made Khushi call Arnav, chotey Saab, and even Khushi find it weird ๐ณ๐ณ
So Khushi also works for Raizada
I don't really like it but let's see what it will give ๐
I like the way Khushi keeps in mind her social status, but at the same time we can see how much she's hurt ! She may think that if she wasn't a servant maybe her best friend would be there, with her ๐๐
Again you showed very well how much those words Arnav pronounced deeply hurt Khushi !!!
It was just a 'Sorry, I don't remember' but coming from the person she considers as her BF, it's heart breaking !!
The second Part : Arnav and Lillies ๐คฃ๐คฃ
Please tell me was he talking through his Bluetooth !!!๐คฃ๐คฃ
You brought another shade to Arnav or should I say you kept Arnav's shouting capacity ๐๐
Anyway I liked the way you compared that life in London and in India isn't the same and that even a small tash in India might become a headache for people who aren't used to live in India ๐๐๐
Khushi was staring at him ?? Did she expect that Arnav will look on that direction, or did she hear Arnav's shouting ๐คฃ
Btw why Lillies ?? ๐๐
Okay personnaly I prefer yellow Lillies ๐๐
As Lilly's favourite colour is yellow ๐๐๐
oh and Christian Wedding ??? ๐ฒ
The third Part : Raizada Clan ๐
That was a funny conversation I like the way Dadiji defended Arnav ๐๐
Because I thought that Arthurji would be tall and well built, I didn't thought that he would have a paunch ๐๐
And I have some questions about Claire ! Well she's British, I guess she had learnt hindi, but what does she wear ?? and why Dadiji ??
i thought that as she's english, maybe her grandchildren would call her grandma or granny ๐ค๐ค
Wow Arnav did recognise Khushi laugh even if he hasn't heard it for 15 years ๐ณ๐ณ
That so cute !
But Arnav behaved so rudely after that ๐ก๐ก
all because of he guilty conscious
The fourth Part : Two Pony Tail
I liked Arnav and Anjali's bonding ๐๐๐
When Anjali point out that it was rude to laugh at people's appearance, I thouh that she was more mature than her brother but then ๐๐
What do they were children, na !!
I guess most of children behaves the same so did I ๐
Well so that fat lady was buaji, but why did she left Khushi with the Raizadas??
Oh Arnav feeling jealous of Khushi that was so cute ๐
and I mean it, when you're a child you hate when your mother shows affection to another one especially when you're a boy (Complexe D'Oedipe) ๐๐
So Khushi is an orphan ๐ฒ๐ฒ
In fact I expected it ๐๐
The Fifth part : My Queen Queen
Wow that was my favourite part and must be the most revealing part !
Arnav the King, Anjali the Queen and Khushi (KuKu ๐) the Servant.
Arnav wanted Khushi to be the Queen as well, but Khushi said, that there should be someone to serve them !
Does it mean that the end of the FF will be like that ?? ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ฒ
Khushi remains a servant even if Arnav wants her to be his Queen ๐๐
I was really sad reading that part ! Because after all Khushi never thought that the game they played would become true
I felt really sad for Her
And Arnav ๐๐ he said the tea wasn't bad !! So he likes ice tea ๐๐
I know it wasn't funny, but what a mistake !! Khushi has realized that he's lying ๐๐
Wonderful update Rachel ๐
I'll be waiting for you update Monday at 9 am as you always update earlier than planned ๐๐
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