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Posted: 12 years ago
you are a wonderful writer, and this story has a novel feeling as you wanted it to be, completely different from Mirage, i can feel all their emotions while reading the story, you keep saying it was her, but why is he feeling so guilty...

I take my comment from last time calling him a jerk, definitely a big reason behind it if he is feeling so much for her
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update! This story is so interesting! I wonder what happened that Arnav is feeling so guilty about. It seems like Khushi doesn't hate him at all. In fact, she wants him to remember her! I'm excited to read more about their past with each other. Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a wonderful Chapter !! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I really enjoyed it, It recorded me my own childhood memories ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Really Molten, you just take us in your story and make us forget everything around us !! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Coming to the chapter ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Oh no I'll first Comment on the Banner ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
You made it ?? Or another of your fan made it ๐Ÿ˜† I know you would gave the credit, if it was the case, so I assume you made it ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
That is such a cute pic ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ That shows that you're going to focus this story mainly on their childhood, right ??
I really Like ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


The first Part : Khushi

I was absorb it Khushi and Arnav's meeting, that I didn't care about the bags she was carrying !! and Arnav didn't even help her
So it was for Anjali's wedding ??
But why Khushi calls Anjali, Anjali memsaab and not ChutKi meemsaab ?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Buaji is the one who made Khushi call Arnav, chotey Saab, and even Khushi find it weird ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

So Khushi also works for Raizada
I don't really like it but let's see what it will give ๐Ÿ˜‰
I like the way Khushi keeps in mind her social status, but at the same time we can see how much she's hurt ! She may think that if she wasn't a servant maybe her best friend would be there, with her ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”

Again you showed very well how much those words Arnav pronounced deeply hurt Khushi !!!
It was just a 'Sorry, I don't remember' but coming from the person she considers as her BF, it's heart breaking !!


The second Part : Arnav and Lillies ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Please tell me was he talking through his Bluetooth !!!๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
You brought another shade to Arnav or should I say you kept Arnav's shouting capacity ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Anyway I liked the way you compared that life in London and in India isn't the same and that even a small tash in India might become a headache for people who aren't used to live in India ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Khushi was staring at him ?? Did she expect that Arnav will look on that direction, or did she hear Arnav's shouting ๐Ÿคฃ

Btw why Lillies ?? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Okay personnaly I prefer yellow Lillies ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
As Lilly's favourite colour is yellow ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

oh and Christian Wedding ??? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ


The third Part : Raizada Clan ๐Ÿ˜†

That was a funny conversation I like the way Dadiji defended Arnav ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Because I thought that Arthurji would be tall and well built, I didn't thought that he would have a paunch ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
And I have some questions about Claire ! Well she's British, I guess she had learnt hindi, but what does she wear ?? and why Dadiji ??
i thought that as she's english, maybe her grandchildren would call her grandma or granny ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

Wow Arnav did recognise Khushi laugh even if he hasn't heard it for 15 years ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
That so cute !
But Arnav behaved so rudely after that ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
all because of he guilty conscious


The fourth Part : Two Pony Tail

I liked Arnav and Anjali's bonding ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
When Anjali point out that it was rude to laugh at people's appearance, I thouh that she was more mature than her brother but then ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
What do they were children, na !!
I guess most of children behaves the same so did I ๐Ÿ˜‰

Well so that fat lady was buaji, but why did she left Khushi with the Raizadas??

Oh Arnav feeling jealous of Khushi that was so cute ๐Ÿ˜†
and I mean it, when you're a child you hate when your mother shows affection to another one especially when you're a boy (Complexe D'Oedipe) ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

So Khushi is an orphan ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
In fact I expected it ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’


The Fifth part : My Queen Queen

Wow that was my favourite part and must be the most revealing part !
Arnav the King, Anjali the Queen and Khushi (KuKu ๐Ÿ˜†) the Servant.
Arnav wanted Khushi to be the Queen as well, but Khushi said, that there should be someone to serve them !

Does it mean that the end of the FF will be like that ?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Khushi remains a servant even if Arnav wants her to be his Queen ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

I was really sad reading that part ! Because after all Khushi never thought that the game they played would become true
I felt really sad for Her

And Arnav ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† he said the tea wasn't bad !! So he likes ice tea ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
I know it wasn't funny, but what a mistake !! Khushi has realized that he's lying ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Wonderful update Rachel ๐Ÿ˜‰
I'll be waiting for you update Monday at 9 am as you always update earlier than planned ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by Agathe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i wonder why when he is so much in pain because of somethng that happened in the past and tries to stay oblivious to everythng , she clearly doesnt seem to remeber anything about it, other than the fact that they were best friends...hmm...rather than me pondering , ill wait for u to reveal it to us...
btw very nice chapter... i loved their memories... especially the way he called her kukkuu... :)
will have to wait till monday for the nxt one now :( :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
๐Ÿ‘ fab update , excellent narration , beautifully peened ,innocent love story , eagerly waiting for next update plz pm me , thanks in advance
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update..
Kukku nd annyavv.. Kids wid ill fate nd bad memories of chidhood...
Arnav is runnin away wereas khushi has accepted reality ...
Eager for next ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an amazinggg update!!!

When I read that this ff is written by you, this brcame a must read for me n I instantly read it all in a go!!!

Eeeks m sooo happie that you are back to writing since I thot u dnt write anymore!!

I've always wanted to let you know how much I loved reading mirage, I came across it after u had given it a beautiful epilogue!
You wouldnt believe bt I've lost count of how many times I've read its epilogue n sooo many other chpz of it in which I was in complete awe of your writing skills

Have to say it was one of the best work on IF!!!

Then after finishing it I found your index n I read each one of it!!!
And m relli out of words for appreciation towards it
Jus amazinggg!!!

And jus now after reading this ff, with sich new n intresting concept m sure this wid b worth reading as well

Awwwhhh they use to play king n queen n arnav didn't want her to b servant but his queen...owweeiii!!!

Dnt know whats wrong with him but ofcourse story will unfold in due time!!

Childhood besties...awwhhh

He use to call her kukku...hiw sweet!!!

Bht lamba comment hogaya na
But I cudnt help myself from letting u knw jus how much I like reading ur work!!

Hope iu pm me fr next update

Amazinggg update!!!
Edited by robinhood008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

I feel for Khushi.Her dissapointment and hurt cuz of Arnav is evident at some places.Clearly she is putting up as if she isnt getting bothered by his indifferent,but she is.The childhood spent with some good times and promises holds special place for both.But some incident has ruined it for them.Atleast Arnav's guilt for not being able to help his friend indicates something bad happened.. in past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!
ok i absolutely loved the flashbacks...they were shooo cute and adorable...!!!!!
loved it!
and i cant wait to know wat he blames himself for...great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just caught up with this fic! Amazing work :) thoroughly enjoyed reading the first 3 chapters and can't wait to read more :)

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