Arhi FF: The Trampled Butterfly #1 Check pg 153 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
Been waiting eagerly ...

Loved the flashback into their childhood ... such cute memories ...
they seemed inseparable ... 😛 Kukku and Annyav ... 😆

Wonder what went wrong fifteen years back that is making him feel guilty ...

"he couldn't bear to see her face, to gaze into those warm hazel eyes, those innocent eyes which had once silently cried for help. He couldn't let her eyes meet the dark molten brown ones which had failed to protect his best friend..."

Waiting to read more ... thanks ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMMLJ (Oh My Molten_Lava Ji)

missed the first page by few seconds.

Wooh update was super awesome n cute. Finally you gave some Cute flashbacks of their childhood.

The King, Queen n Servant play was adorable n the way Annyav said that, Khushi too can be the Queen, bcuz Kings of ancient times had more than 1 Queen 😆 baccha bada samajhdar hai 😉

Waiting for Monday ji

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Edited by Sarunfanatic_Ji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This will be my second comment on your work. I have read all your work as it was all finished work I just could not comment and I thought you have left the forum so I did not want to disturb you with PM as I wanted to respect your wishes to be left alone if you had left the forum. I don't know how to express how happy i am to have you back and writing this amazingly wonderful FF. I Absolutly love your style of writing and your way of story telling. Thank you for taking your valuable time in writing, please do carry on writing.
Coming to the chapter things are getting bit clear as to how Arnav and Khushi met and the social setup, I love the fact that the story is about their childhood too , that the chain of event starters when they were little.
Arnav is hiding from and he is uncomfortable around her , why? he blames himself for something happened to Khushi in the past where as Khushi is very comfortable with past and him does she not remember certain events or is her perception is different than of Arnav's , I guess we will have to wait patiently.
Things will get much more interesting when Lavanya comes from London. It might help Arnav to see bit more clearly as to what place Khushi holds in his life.
Will wait for Monday's update. Thank you for the update.
Edited by gifttag - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
another awesome update😊...too gud...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I remember your name...dont know if I have read mirage but might go back and check it out...but mostly i am hooked by your disclaimer now lets check out the story ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey welcome back...had missed ur stories. Nice to read another one. Read all chapters. It seems v interesting. Cant wait to know what happened bet arnav khushi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Was too good... So what was it that Arnav could'nt help Khushi from.. their first meet was cute and the King-Queen-Servant act was cuter... Loved it... So he just gave away and gave her a hint that he still remembered her... The pain and agony that runs through them were brought out so well... It was heart wrenching to know that their small kid act came true... Small things like how Arnav was behind his mother asking her not to leave him when he came to know that children can be without parents was so moving... Loved reading it in...

The family moments at lunch was so light hearted and wonderful... It was kind of relief para for an otherwise emotional update... So to me it was a mix and I Loved it...

Cant wait to read further... Hope we dont have a saturday and sunday in-between... and land up on monday straight to read chapter 4...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another amazing chapter, really liking the flashbacks to arnav and khushis childhood. I'm already getting curious as to what made arnav leave. Can't wait for the next chapter, so happy that you are updating so regularly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Who is actually he trying 2 confess tht he dsnt remember her??????? Kuku or himself????? 😕 FB ws a bit relaxing 4 me n brought smile 2 me... Will waiting 4 d nxt update...

P.S. I luvd ur Mischief Manage Series... 😳 If possible cn u add sum more 2 it???? ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why Arnav is trying to forget her?What was happened in their childhood?He could nt help her,save her!😕 Every time seeing Khushi as their servant hurt himself.Feeling others' pain in childhood was portrayed so nicely.Waiting to read further.

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