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incandescent

@incandescent

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

That was an amazing update !!

The story already looks very intriguing ! So they are childhood friends and something happened...but maybe Khushi doesn't remember it? Why did Arnav pretend not recognize her?

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

I'm definitely hooked ...very interesting !

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Sandhya

@cindistan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

lovely update...tx for the PM.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

I read Mirage and I am very happy to see you back with another story. Love the setting of this one and look forward to read as you unfurl your story.

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Awesome chapters and I'm already hooked to the story!

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

First and foremost ... loooved your golden rules :):):)

Enjoyed the first two chapters of The Trampled Butterfly. So far Arnav and Khushi appear to be very much in character - brooding Arnav and friendly Khushi despite Arnav not acknowledging her. Where there are Arnav and Khushi there is heart break and passionate love. Look forward to future updates :)

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Amazing and awesome updates, buddy!

Loved Mussorie.

Thanks for the PM, do continue soon.

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

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-Raichu-

@-Raichu-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Helloji,

The first Chapter was mainly about Arnav, but in this chapter you have introduced many characters 😃😃

And I know that you give importance to all your characters, I think it's a significant chapter 😆😆

LAVANYA 😆😆

Sincerely speaking I didn't expect her in this FF, so was completely shocked !!

She's the same La we met in the show 'Baby ...' 😵😵

I don't think she's bad, but I think she's going to be annoying just like she's annoying Arnav 😆😆

Precisely, what Arnav is doing with Lavanya, when she annoys him

For physical relation ?? 😲😲

ANJALI 😃😃

I can't imagine Daljeet being called Chutki 🤣🤣

How old is she ?? Because reading the chapter I don't think she's old enough for getting married !!

She seems rather 16-17 or maybe it's because she's potrayed as too sweet person 😉😉

ARTHUR SINGH RAIZADA 😕😕

I don't know what to think about him, I'm a bit confused I think I should wait for the story to progress to learn more about him.

For me he seemed quite cold and too formal 😕

He's also a bit Arrogant 😆😆

Honor is going to take a big place in this FF 😉😉

But I noticed he loves his son and have some remorses 😉😉

However I liked the way Arnav behaved with his father, that military type conversation 😆😆

Mmmh he thinks that his son has ' Casanova rich spoilt brat ways '

Interesting !! 😃😃

I liked his conversation with his wife. He's not blind, and knows his son well. Or is he a bit overeacting ??

Arnav isn't someone who really cares for his Family ?? 😲😲

After reading the conversation between Arthur and Naina, I feel like Arnav is more a single handed person, who doesn't like interacting with others 😲😲

"But the tiny irrational, emotional, foolish part of my brain says, yes, maybe someday." 😉😉

Last but not the least 😆😆

KHUSHI 😃😃

I immediately knew that it was her 😆😆

Only her could fit that description, enna 😆😆

So Khushi is from a middle class whose family worked or works for the elite (for the Raizada ??) 😲😲

I loved Khushi's behaviour with Arnav !! SHe tried to be formal but she couldn't 😕😕

Arnav recognised her with her eyes, how did she recognise Arnav ?? 😳😳

'Ofcourse, he remembered her very well. That cute little girl with two pony tails who would sit behind him, clutching his back tightly as he sped down the very same road in his bicycle every day. She was that same girl who used to share her ice candy with him bought from the only rupee she used to get once a month as pocket money.'

I loved that part 😉😉

It's very revealing about Khushi's personnality !! Even one ruppe she would share it with others 😃😃

But 'fatefull day which has scarred him permanently' 😲😲

Gosh what happened ??

Arnav had seen something horrific happened to Khushi and didn't help her 😲😲

Arnav was cold, but I think we can't judge him because, afterall we don't why he's behaving like that !! 😕😕

But I really felt bad for Khushi !

So Wonderful chapter !! I enjoyed it !!

😃😃😃

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mysterious_maze

@mysterious_maze

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

okey now am back with my comment... quite late but 😳

Chapter one

this Arnav is change i mean really really change... am not comparing it with Mirage but I must say this Arnav is entirely change from your other work...

He stuck out his head outside the window of the moving car like a dog trying to escape to the outside world and enjoyed the chill grazing his face. And he let his tongue roll out, hanging for few seconds to taste the air of Mussoorie.

he is a kid from heart... isn't he???

Wow now who is this another person???? I hope that must be our sanka devi

Fifteen years is a long time…. What made him wait for this long if he was this much crazy for his home town??? Or is that the case of realizing the importance after losing it???

Riding her behind him??? so they are childhood friends???

Memories, which were the best days of his life.

So it means we will not get good days about their future??? You know I always want a happy ending….i must sound crazy asking for it even before getting the whole plot… lol

Oh this Arnav has a mother…. I mean mother who is alive.

This Arnav is a foodie…. It's a nice change… I mean writers hardly mention Arnav as a foodie….

Big fat Indian marriage??? My first thought was Arnav came back for his marriage… lol… but it was Anjali's… and Anjali is chutki…. Hehehehe…. It's a change… but I need time to consider Arnav as a big bro…

Dad, mama, nani, dadi, Akash, anjali, mamiand also chachas… these are a lot of people to remember…. We have a big family in this story….

Why would Arnav never enter his house if it wasn't Anjali's marriage??? Reason must be gigantic…

He posted his pictures to dadi???? It means they share a close bond??? I feel that there must be some relation with those good or bad memories with his dadi's past… or may be not exactly past but mainly with dadi…. Now what is this "Mussoorie Bhains"???

Now the shocking part…. Arnav's books??? Like really his books??? What sort of books??? He used to like read??? That's a pleasant change in his character…

Why did he not want to remember Khushi??? Or was he thinking about someone else???

You told us that the story is about Arnav and Khushi overcoming their memories and past??? Now the big question is that are those memories about each other or some third person??? I guess they are bound to each other by some third person….

"Annyavv…"

This brought a huge smile on my face….

This chapter is all about Arnav…. A good start… intriguing and captivating….

Keep up the good work…