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rashikhandelwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow! Its suprb too bad arjun hates girls i think he loves roshni and she ditch him and thats wy arjun hates girls rgt cnt soon watng 4r nxt update

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

hi piya🤗...nice one👏👏👏👏... arjun ki bolati band kardi riya ne😆😆😆😆😆😆...only with smile n hug😉😉😉😉😉😉...????... feeling bad for arjun's mom😭😭...the way sam's treat her...pihu ???...she love arjun the most then y this cold behaviour????...update soon

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Hello...sorry for late comment:(

im glad u wrote a new Ariya thanks for it...hey no offense to NL

loved the char sketch...wahan pe hi flat hogaya main toh...it was good...

coming to the story...loved the first chap...!!!

waah riya had bolthi band of the gr8 Arjun...lovely:D

whats up with this pihu gal????

waiting for the next update:)

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arnavkhushi1206

@arnavkhushi1206

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Interesting concept and cs!!
Loved it 😊
I wonder whts up with pihu?? Wonder y she hates Arjun so much?
I loved how even though Arjun hates girls he was talking to Riya as if she was his girlfriend
I loved tht!!!
I wonder who broke his heart and I also wonder who Riya loves??
Can't wait till u update again 😊

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

abhi shuruat hai pm me plzz goanna b interesting

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

First thank u so much frs for ur lvly n sweet comment back with next part hop u like...
*Riya first morning in sameer house...*plz dont forget to hit like butten at least..in last
PART=2
"Her raat ke baad ek naye subhaya hoti hai..to mujhe ek dosara moka kyun nahi..
-----------------------------------(Arjun surayakant rawte)"

SCENCE-
TIME-6:00
DAY:-SATURDAY
LOCATION:-SAMEER HOUSE
It was saturday morning riya sleeping in her room(guest room)
arjun plz thoda or sone do nooo never..
wake up its already
6 o 'clook..wake up..no plz arjun sone do..
tum ehse nahi manogi..
arjun comes closer n he took one glass of water ..
Riya ud rahi ho ya nahi..
verna phir mat kehana ye panii kyun dala..
Noo arjun ehsa mat kerna..
Ok to tum nahi manane vali..
arjun sit beside her n give one kiss on her cheeks..
she blushes n hide her face on blanket..
After few minute..
She remove her blanket from her face..n looked here n there..
ohh god ri what r u dreaming..
he he he she gigling herself n hit her head..
(muttered herself)
tu bhi na riya kitani pagal hai..kya kya dekh rahi the sapne main..
She get up n goes to freshnep..
(Loll poor she kiss vala dream dekh liye or blush bhi ker liya..ager sach main hota to..)
she is very happy it was almost fives year ..
they didnt contect or meet each other onces..
She was lost in her thought..
she comes out washroom..
she recall her first meeting with arjun..
that was such a lucky day for her..
first time jab arjun ne meri help ke..
ager arjun time per meri help nahi kerta ho..
Sudenly she bumped on somone..
Aouchhh..ahhh
she lost her balence..before she fall some one hold in his arms..
Dhayan kahan hai tumhara kahan koe ho etani shubhaha shubhaya..
Ager main time per pakadta nahi to abhi jameen per padi hoti..

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

riya looks angrly toward him..
kisane kaha tha meri madat kerne ko..or bythe way ager main kahi per khoye huye the to tum to hosh main
they ..
Achha bachu ek to help karo or upper se..
Lagat hai bhagban ne mujhe he banaya hai..
baar baar tum musibat main pado ..
or baar baar main tumhare help karon..
Riya making a pupy face..baar baar ,
baar baar kab main mosibaat main padti hoon..
Are wah etani jaldy bhul gaye..yaad hai hamari first meeting..ya vo bhi ..
ab samjheye..
both brust out with lough..
Ri-to tumhara samjhe samjhayon aaj bhi
🤣.🤣.🤣...
he he he..he..

(She loughing holding her stomch)
per mujh per kaam nahi karega..
(i hop u all kno who is this samjhe..are bhaye our arjun)
Arjun hold his cheeks n start rubbing..
haan vo to pata hai..
tum doniya ke pehali ladki ho..ye arjun samajh nahi paya..kab tumhara mood swings ker jaye pata he nahi chalta..
Riya try to controled her smile stil holding her stoumch🤣.
arjun gives her an amusing look..
she comes near arjun n touched his cheeck with her heand..
Abhi bhi dard ho raha hai..
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flashback of their first meeting

SCENCE-five years before..
month-April..2008
CITY Ooty..the most beautiful place..Queen of hill stations,Ooty which is deep within the nilgiri hills is also known as blue mountains..

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The Ooty racecourse is isolated in ooty..
in april month there was one house racing event r held..
It is highland race course so the altitude for the race is much higher...
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All r very excited ..bez race shoru hone vali the..
Us waqt arjun is not arjun i meen..he is acp arjun suryakant rawte..
Arjun was there for one misstion..
He got an information due to some sources..
race main kuch illegle hone vala hai..
(its was just my thinking i dont know more about racing plz read n enjoy..)

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Arjun on mini mike to shree..
Shree kuch pata chala ke vo kon sa ghoda hai..(only arjunn shree was in ooty n all etf members r mombai)
i meen yahan to 50 se upper ghode(horse) hai..
Race bas shuro hone vali hai..or etani jaldy pata lagana possible nahi..
sh-Arjun sir main vohi pata lagane ki koshish ker raha hoon ,per tab kuch pata nahi chal paa raha hai..
Bus etana pata hai..
Es ghode per ek dragen ki stemp lagi hai..
Ar-ok i will find out here ,or tum dosari jagah dekho..or haan ager kuch or pata chale to mujhe batana..
sh-yes sir..
(It was open street racing not organiged in stadium..thats why its more dificult for arjun..but arjun ye operstion ooty etf ke saath mil ker ker raha tha)
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Race start n they stil didnt found any thing..
(Arjun apni durbin se charo taraf najer rakhta hai..)
but he didnt found that horse..
(Race almost start n all rider apni majil ke tarf aage bad chuke hain)
Sudenly arjun graze fell on one horse ..
the same dragen stemp jaisa shree ne bataya tha..
the rider of the horse is in mid way..so its not possible to stop or catch him..
esliye arjun imediatly without waisting any second..
hiyer other horse n start racing...
they r far away from each others..
Arjun increaded his speed to coverup the distance..
The rider of dragen horse unwhere the fact that arjun following her..
at one point arjun succesfull to overtake..
(Arjun sidha apne ghode se uske ghode per jump kerta hai)
the action was very quik..due to this Both lost their balance n fall on the one side of the road..
Both sliding together on the road ..
Arjun on the top of second rider ..
his body languge shows he is very engry on arjun..
he try his hard to free himself from arjun's hold..
but arjun hold his tighty by both his hand..
Arjun moved his hand..wanna to remove his halmat..
TBC-

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago