Ariya FF : Tum ho mera pyaar*Thread 2 link pg114*

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*Ariya FF:Tum Ho Mera Pyar*





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CONCEPT:-


Arjun lost every thing..his fame name...or his lv...due to one girl..
He rezine etf due to some reasion before five years...
Now he is jobless n completely broken man...
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Is riya is capable to bring all this ..??

Is riya is the girl which givs him all happiness



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-----(Arjun suryakant rawte)


CHARACTER SKATCH-

SAMEER RATHORE-
AGE
-30-Stil unmarried...
Etf cheif..smart handsome..
Every criminal has a fear of his name..
Arjun's consion brother..
(His father n arjun mather r brother n sister)
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ARJUN RAWTE-
AGE
-27-Unmarried..
Samart n inteligent police officer...befor five years..
yes now he is not the part of police force...
rude n angry man...
no one hav a dare to come n stay in front of him..
hate girls...
he lvs somone ...but somthing is hidden..Wait for this..
he lost is father n now both arjun n his mother stay in sameer house..
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Ayesha-
AGE
-25 -single
beautiful n smart girl..
know every skil of fights..
Etf member..
her interest in sameer..
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SHREE N CHOTU N LIZA-Same as show
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RIYA MOKHARGEE -
AGE-21:-Single..
Smart beautiful..Cute bubly girls,
whenever she goes give happiness...like god angle,
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Not a part of etf but soon she will join,
Commissioner daughter,n lv somone,
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Naina Rawte-
Arjun mother..Sweet n simple..
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Raj n Sanjana rathor-
sameer parents..
his mother not like arjun n his mother...
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PIHU Rathore-
Sameer sister..
age=18
smart n beautiful like her brother...but hate arjun,
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ROSHANI-
Age-24rich n clever girl...like vamp..n lot of mistry ...n pchyco persenality,Madly lv with arjun,

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Posted: 12 years ago
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dil se likh rahi hoon..hop app sab ke dilon main bhi jaye..
I hope u like my story..yahan arjun jobless n life se hara huya insan hai..
plz enjoy..its not sad..
PART=1
"Dhup phir se khilati hai,to
mujhe ek dusara moka kyun nahi.. (arjun rawte..)"


IN SAMEER HOUSE-
SITUATION-
Arjun was not in home..
sameer's father waitng for him,
arjun's mom n sameer mom making dinner in kichen..
Pihu (Sam sister) was in study room..
n sam was in his room..
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(sammer comes out his room)
Sameer-papa its to late or arjun abhi tak nahi aya..
Raj(sam father)-haan kaphi der ho gaye per ker bhi kya sakte hai,pata nahi kahan hoga..
pihu comes out her rooms n say..to Raj-kerna kya hai papa,arjun bhaeya ne kabhi kisi ke suni hai,jo aaj vo apki sunege..
jaror kahin na kahin ghum rahe honge..
sameer n raj give shut look to pihu..
tum chup chap ja ker apni study karo..
Sameer moms comes out...
Loked her husband..
per pihu ko kyun dand rahe hain..akhir thik he to keh rahi hai vo,
na waqt ka pata hai,na khud ka..
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(Sudenly door bell rang)
tringg tringg..
Sanjana shout-deko naina(arjun's mom) kon hai...
Raj-tum naina se kyun keh rahi ho,main kholta hain..
jaror arjun he aya hoga..
Pihu-or kon hoga es waqt papa..ye to roj ke adat hai arjun bhaeya ki..roj late ana..
Raj-ab bus bhi ker pihu..
kyun apne munh ko takleef de rahi ho..
sameer giv angry look to her sister..(he knew her sister bus uper se kadvi but no one know she lvs arjun most then sameer)..
(Raj Opened door n saw)
darwaje per ek smart young sweet n payari se ek ladki khadi the..
she wears short sleevless white shirt with pink shade n blune jense pent..
hath main one diamond breslet..light makeup(accutaly no need of makup).
matching white long
earing ,open hair which disturbing her face,
she looks fabulus


Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Just like
princess..
Raj-Ji kahiye aapko kisase milana hai..or aap kon hain..
she gives a cute dimple smile..n put her hair layer behind her ears..
she forward her hand in front of Raj n Say..
hellow uncle ..*I M RIYA*..umm riya mukhergee..
raj reply..namaste baida per maine tumhen pehchana nahi..
Ri-humm aap mujhe pehchanege bhi kaise..hum pehali baar jo mil rahe hai..
Acctualy uncle i wanna to meat here * Mr. ASR*
plz aap use bula dete to..
Sanjana notice that girl n think kise rich family se belongs kerti hai..
Sanjana-dekhiye tumhen shayad kuch misunderstanding huye hai yahan koe Mr. ASR Nahi rehata,
Riya-nahi mujhe ko galat pehami nahi huye..ASR ne to mujhe yahi adress diya tha..

Sameer comes forward n say mom mujhe pata hai shayad ye kiss ke baat ker rahi hai,
Sam-kahin tum arjun ke baat to nahi ker rahi naa..
Riya could reply phihu spoke first..
Pihu-enhen dekh ker lagta nahi ye arjun bhaeya se milane aye hain..
Raj yelled in mid..
Bus karo tum sab pehale es bachhi ko to bolane do ke ye kiss se milane aye hai..
Riya-dekhiye main yahan ASR se..I mean arjun rawte se milane aye hoon..
vo mujhe airport per lene ane vala tha..per pata nahi kyun nahi aya..
to main khud chali aye..
Sameer n all ask..kya tum sach main arjun se milane aye hoo,
(they all r shock bez arjun hates girl but yahan to kuch or hi..loll..abhi to bahoot kuch hona baki hai..)
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sudenly someone call riya from behind..
Tuh yahan or main tumhen pagalon ke tarah airport per dhund raha tha..
Kamal ho tum..
(Ye to jani pehachani avaj the)
it was non other than arjun...
her ASR..
Riya (angrly look him)-
tumhen ab meri yaad aye..
main airport per tumhara wait ker rahi the or tum aye he nahi..
or kya kaha tumne..
riya comes closer to arjun n point her finger on his chest..
or kya kaha tumne..
tum mujhe dhoond



Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Raho ho..
ab chup kyun ho kuch bologe..
(All loks both with shocking eyes..yes somone hv a guts to shut arjun voice)
Raj hits sam shoulder..
tum jante ho ese..
Sa- no dad..
yakeeb nahi ho raha papa..koe to hai jisne arjun ke bolti band ker di..
Arjun(safaye dete huye)-humm riya plz dont be hipper yr..
Pihu-What bhai call her yr..ye chal kya raha hai..kahi main sapna to nahi dekh rahi..
Ar-kya karon etana traffic jam tha thoda late ho gaya..
Ri-i kno i kno tum hamesha yahi kahoge..
mujhe to adat ho gaye hai tumhara wait kerne ke..
Ar-achha her baar..tum to ehse bol rahi ho jaise tum kabhi late nahi hoti..rised his one eyebrow thoda late ho gaya to etana gussa..Han
Raj interept in mid-are ye sab kya chal raha hai..
But didnt listen what raj says..they r busy their own wold..
Ri-ek sorry nahi keh sakte.
Ar(in attitude)-sorry or main..
Ri-Achha baba mujhe pata hai aap sorry to kahenge nahi..etani salown baad mile hai ..to kaam se kam gale to laga sakte ho..
Arjun gives a smile..
All again shocked ye arjun sach main has raha hai..
arjun comes near n both hug each other unwere the fact all looked in their direction..
(it was light hug thats meen sorry its ariya codword to say sorry to each other there nothing any other meaning)
all r stil in big shock arjun was laughing after such a big times..
then sam n raj interept..
Yuhh yuhh arjun tumhen nahi lagta ke tumhen riya ko ander bulana chahiye..
both imedeatly brock that hug..
Ar-vo ..main or i mean riya or main..
(vo jaldy se riya se piche hat jata hai)
boths comes inside ..its to late..so raj say to stay riya in guest room...
TBC-ARIYA MOMENTS...SO BORE YA MAST..guys PLZ tell me apko mera first part kaisa laga pl live ur comments..n hit like button
Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mujhe koi prob nahi,

ariya ho ya arakshi,

i love both of them,
its 50 -50 fr me.

Aur waise bhi ariya ko bhulna itna aasan thodi hoga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow cool...
waiting for it... :))
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey no problem . I am still a ariya fan . So please start the story . :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow thts a v v v v v good news.

thank u sooo sooo muchhh.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice cs n waiting for more.

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