Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 9

Originally posted by: tunna

yoooooooo Shirl !!!!!!! ur back
🤗

Missed U loads hunny !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just kept checking if ur back... n yaar... ur 2weeks hav taken toooooooooooooooooooooooo long okay !!!

Just hope ur trip was fab..amazing..or something liem that.. hope ur fine n rocking..

n cant wait for the next episode hunny..n the one after that..n after that..actually cant wait for u to again start rtiting...

GLAD TO HAV U BACK DEAR ! 😃
🤗

will start writing again...been unwell ans busy lately...will write the next episode 2day...just wait...😃

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

wow!! shirley ur back....was waitin for a long time.........and oh u r back........hope u had a great time in ur journey........ 😊

yeah..i had a fine and great journey...and its gud 2 be back..and have u..and my oher frends and IF back...gud 2 be back...😛😳

Originally posted by: amina877

Yahoooooooooo!! 😃 😛 shirley u r back 😃 ....gr8 2 see u back buddy 🤗 ...i hope u had fun there 😃 ....
love uu🤗 🤗
Amina

yep..i'm back....i had fun...it was enjoyable..but at some times..i kinda missed u all....😳😃

love u...Shirley🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Shirley

will start writing again...been unwell ans busy lately...will write the next episode 2day...just wait...😃

heyi honey !!!!!!!! hope U total fine... wat happened... take good care..😃

Originally posted by: tunna

heyi honey !!!!!!!! hope U total fine... wat happened... take good care..😃

hiya hunny....i'm fine..what about you? oh..nothing much..just was busy...my mum wasnt feeling well.....but doing the update now..😊

hey guys..sorry for the long..long..delay....updating episode 7 now.. 😃

Episode 7

(The house is all decorated...and just the final touches r left)

kashish: ok..so..kavya..i think..thats all..yeah?
kavya: wait a minute...erm...we still got more balloons to go through...
kashish: ok..(out of breath a little): but..i...i think that we should have red balloons only..yeah?
kavya: hmm..nice idea...kashish...kool..yaar..
kashish(smiling): any time...
kavya: and..we will have them all over the floor..more fun that way..(smiles 😃)
kashish: well..its fun..when frends r around...doesnt matter about the balloons..
kavya: really..?
kashish: yeah..
kavya: what kind of frends?
kashish: ones..like you..
kavya: aww...so sweet...
kashish: ok..erm...i'll get other stuff..ready..ok?
kavya: ok...

(in the kitchen..gauri making the cake)

gauri: erm...ok..mamta..whats next?
mamta: two..teaspoons..of...baking powder..
gauri: alrite..(puts it in): next ingrdient?
mamta: basically...flour...butter...margarine...eggs...and sugar..mix in together...
gauri: alrite!! (mixes it all hard...and sets it out onto a baking tray...)
mamta: how long..does it take to cook a cake?
gauri: oh..about 1/2 an hr...just leave it to the expert...oh...u have to get ready as well...mamta..
mamta: ok...cant wait to see the cake...
gauri: neither can i..

(half an hr later...gauri takes the cake out..the cake luks really good..and is a four layered chocolate cake..)

gauri(in a posh voice): wow..gauri..u r such a good chef...(normal tone): oh..thank you...maam...

(later...gauri adds icing sugar to the cake..and adds ribbons..and beautiful designs and decorations..and is just putting on the candles..)

prerna(coming in): gauri?
gauri: yes mum/
prerna: come on...gauri...u have to get ready..yur outfit is upstairs...
gauri: ok...

(later..for the evening...the boys are dressed in rich..royal..dark..colours...and the girls..in bright..vibrant colours)

anurag: ok..gauri..place the cake here...
gauri: yes papa..(puts the cake down): my beautiful work..
mamta: luks yummy..(keeps luking at the cake)
priya: dismiss any further thoughts...
prerna: ok...kashish...rose..bring in tuhina...

(kashish and rose bring tuhina in)

everyone: HAPPY BIRTHDAY TUHINA!!!
tuhina(surprised: omg...this is..so..oh..everyone..thanks so much...this..is great...i'm..so.happy...
mamta: alrite...dont be the humble tuhina...i like the other one...
tuhina: i really luv the cake..who made it?
gauri: erm..well...an expert like me...
tuhina: aww..thankoo little sis..
gauri: no worries...happy birthday...

(later after cutting the cake..everyone dances)

daniel: oh..busy day...isnt it?
rose: yeah..it has been a busy day...i mean...the decorations..and...well...diya's birthday is coming up..after 2 days...
daniel: oh..karan has a lot of plans for that...u should see him...
rose: i'm sure..diya will like his plans...
daniel: u luk really nice today..
rose: really? i do?
daniel: yeah...all the time...(smiles)
rose: thanx..and u luk..really ncie too..and smart...
daniel: seriously? this black shirt and jacket...
rose: yeah...
daniel(gives out his hand): dance?
rose: thought u were not going to ask...sure...

(both dance together...with the song titanic playing..)

kavya: so..kashish...?
kashish: yeah..?
kavya: why r u here? i mean..veryone is having so much fun...
kashish: yeah..but i'm kinda tired...after working all day...
kavya: i'm tired..but i am having fun..come on..i will show you a dance..that u will never get tired of....
kashish: and what dance is that?
kavya: i will show you...come on...

(takes her into his arms..and holds her hand and dances..)

kashish: i know this dance...and i will get tired..kavya..
kavya: no..you wont..
kashish: why is that?
kavya: bcoz you will just keep luking in my eyes..and will never stop...
kashish: what?
kavya: joke..yaar...
kashish(smiles): rite..

(next scene): sujal..and amina..and the others...

sujal: so amina..tell me..how have u been?
amina: fine..and erm...
sujal: havennt been in swimming pools lately?
amina: hehe...very funny...sujal..no..i havent...
diya; oh besdies...my birthday is coming up soon...cant wait for it...
karan: birthday is a very enjoyable occasion...diya..and it shouldnt eva be missed...dont miss it..
diya: no..how can i? especially..wid sweet sisters..and best frends like you..and everyone..how can i?
karan: thats more..like it..isnt it?
diya: so..karan...erm...dance?
karan: yeah..why no? lets go..we can dance the night away...
diya: hehehe...karan..u r too much...

(both dance together..the song agar tum mil jao..comes on)

angad: karan..and all the guys r having gud luck...i am not..uff..(sees a girl): wow...kya larki hai yeh?
(angad leaves)
akshat: seriously..doesnt he get fed up of flirting wid girls?
gunjan: probably..never...hehe..
akshat: so..gunjan..coming 2 skool 2morrow?
gunjan: yeah...after all..frends r there...kyun? (gives each other a high-five)
akshat: right u r...
gunjan: dance..akshat?
akshat: yeah..sure..for you..i will do it all night..
gunjan: nah..just for a while..

(both dance together...the song choti choti raatein comes on)

marriyam: erm..arjun...erm...i..
arun: i what?
marriyam: erm...i wanted to ask you...if..if...erm...oh..thanx arjun..
arjun: thanx?
marriyam: yeah..
arjun: for what?
marriyam: erm....thanx..because..you helped me...with this party..and..erm..
arjun: u luk gorgeous in white...(smiles)
marriyam: erm...thanx...i guess...
arjun: u have a ncie taste...
marriyam: u helped me..out as well..u know...
arjun: hey no thanx either...lets dance too..shall we?
marriyam: yeah..why not?

(both dance with the song tumhi dekho na..from kabhi alveidaa na kehna)

poonam: so sush..'m so glad u came for this party..mujhe buhut ache laga...
sush: hey..poonam..i'm yur frend...cant i do this much for you? besides..tuhina is much as a frend as you r...i couldnt upset her either...
poonam: gud...e like that always..dont change...
sush: i neva will....
(rahul comes)

rahul: hi girls...erm...you r?
poonam: oh yeah..rahul..this is sush...and..sush..this is rahul..my childhood frend....
sush: nice to meet you...
rahul: nice 2 meet you...
poonam: erm..why dont we all dance? yeah?
rahul: erm..yeah..sure...why not?

vikram: oh god...stuck ehre all alone...
sia: there we go again..complains...phir se..
vikram: sia...my dear sia...
sia: hey..dont call me yur dear sia...
vikram: being frendly...yar...and u r the one..who keeps fighting wid me...
sia: i dont keep fighting with you...
vikram: if yuo dont..then prove it..
sia: ok..i will..i will prove it...
vikram: there is a way..
sia: what?
vikram: dance with me...
sia: what?
vikram: dance with me..
sia: i cant..
vikram: dance with me...(takes her hand and both dance together..the song suru ru..from tum bin comes on)

sohan: so..tuhina.how did u like tonight?
tuhina: i luved tonight..i enjoyed it so much....
sohan: erm..i got something for you...
tuhina: what?
sohan: erm..close yur eyes...
tuhina: erm..ok...(closes her eyes)
sohan: dont open them....ok? dont open them...
tuhina: ok..got them closed...really..seriously...
sohan: ok...now..you can open them..

(tuhina opens her eyes..and sees sohan holding a chain...with a heart...hanging..the ehart is divided into 2 parts...)

tuhina: thats so..beautiful...
sohan(giving her a piece): one part will be with you..and one with me....best frends for ever!
tuhina: this is so precious...for me...and i will neevr remove it from my neck..
sohan: happy birthday...
tuhina; thanx...

Precap: School Day. Karan begins preparing Diya's Birthday, meanwhile the other jodis are becoming more close, and the gornw-ups are planning of a trip for Diya's birthday.

Howz dat, ppl?

wow aweosome part shirley 👏

and awww i hope ur mother feels better soon...Inshahlla 😊

love uuu!!!
Amina

superb part....... 👏

and dear the wait was worth .......u have written really nice episode......too beautiful.......

whoopi !!!
whoopi !!!
whoopi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

first one... for shirl ur back !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 🤗

2nd for... the SUPERB episode.... 👏 👏 👏 lovely total... romantic ofcours... but total solid !! 👏

n 3rd for...... WOW [/B} my bday was sooooooooooo lovely 😳 the cake was YUMMY !!!!!!!!!!! ( thanks to Gauri ) n the best part was Sohan's gift.... tooooooo good !!! The chain... really toooooo good n toooooo sweet n toooooo lovely 😳