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Dee.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

i'm tongue-tied.. :/ .. no actually hand-tied :P ... i've no words... no words at all to describe ur update.. it was simply fabulous..

continue soon..
and thnx for the pm :)

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divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awe - dats my fst reactn vn i saw ur pm

u js startle us vth ur pms

im amazed a thriller n an chick - flick of d 90s

wooowww

lukng fwd js brng it on

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oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Loved this part:

She quickly turned around, grabbed a magazine on display and hid her face behind it as if she was reading it intently all along. 😆

You're awesome,ji :)

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Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

are you for real?
u are writing something intense like escape velocity and reading marvel civil war with it and now u have initiated a typical chick flick!!! tell me how old are you i refuse to believe that you are younger thn me and so super talented. its ok if u are elder but if younger thn i am gonna feel very bad abt myself :(.

a girl who lets her bf takeover her personality to such an extent hmmm not very much appreciated.

i hope with arnav she is just like herself and do not adopt his interests as her own.

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Oh dear...she brought her laptop to the loo? 🤣

Khushi has to learn to stop changing herself for the men in her life; perhaps '5 o'clock shadow and Bournvita eyes' will appreciate her for who she really is? 😆

You are an amazing writer that's all I can say: we've had politics, the dynamics of an 'unequal marriage', romance and despair, a thriller and now a lighthearted journey of Khushi as a star of her own 90's chick flick-type story. 👏

Edited by moomin4455 - 12 years ago

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suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

ah.. this one is all chick-flick to balance escape velocity... ehehhehe nice nice

whatever u write- i am in to read and comment away...

the most hilarious part was when she says Payal had to box her ears for taking the laptop to the loo. I have to learn that. :D gaming can be addictive I hear although have not tried it myself.

totally get the changing yourself to suit the guy you are dating part!! lol..

nice one RB! waiting for the story to unfold with the Bournvita guy ;)

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Sur_10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Lots of experimentation going on I see...

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Great start. Whatever you write is fab so looking forward to this.

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shaheen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Exact color of bournvita!!!luvd the way u describe!
Interesting

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-Reader-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Chick Flick? - You are kidding me right?😳

So you give us WTP, Gravity, Escape Velocity and then Love Inc. I am not doubting your talent to write different genres but just amazed at with your ability to handle multiple emotions and depths at the same time. BRILLIANT!!👏

I am sucker for chick flicks...

After the intricate and convoluted journey(in a good way) you taking our brains on with "Escape Velocity, Love. Inc is like a breather!!

Since its a chick flick my comments will be in PINK😉

Edited by Prakal - 12 years ago