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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

It was beautiful... Heart touching..

Loved it

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hey Tanya!! 😊 Awesome OS dear. 👏 Yeah true, the smallest one by u but the sweetest one which u have written. 😳 The emotions, pain of Sharon was described beautifully.⭐️ Loved this OS dear. After life ages I read an OS and it was more than worth. ❤️ Loved it. Great job as always. But out of all the words I loved these "My wish was your command no?" and "I know you are enjoying there with those bitch fairies.". 😃

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Rabina

@raveena2807

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Its quite short but you still managed to portray Sharon's feelings clearly... Its nice.

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

That was awesome OS

Sharon remembering her husband nd She miss him lot.
Sharon loss of words when she remembering him.
Her feeling overpowered to go upto her husband but for Tanya, she have to control them

Sunil

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful :-) loved how you expressed Sharon's pain

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--devilish--

@--devilish--

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Oh...ye padna hi start kiya,,,,thn katam...hogaya..nevermind...OS bada ho ya chota...OS OS hotha hai...😉it was beautifull...love the way u described sharon's feelings..."short and too sweet" it was 😃

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Heart touching OS Marium...beautifully written ❤️ ❤️

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Damn, that was the shortest OS I have ever read, but a soulful one as well. They say, sometimes you don't need long paragraphs to express your feelings, and this one was just like it.

Awesome work Marium, it's wonderful.

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

short but sweet 😊...i actually had tears though i didnt cry... since it was a very short update by the time i had tears in my eyes the update was already over😛 so sorry i could'nt cry but it was surely one of the most heart touching updates👍🏼 well done..