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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
😊 cs was common ,...only some changes but i think u should have give some teaser for the story ! ,...anyways ! ab chalega,...update the chapter 1 soon,...nd do pm me ! Ty :]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice nice one more taarey ff
taarey fan following increasing day by day...
loving it...
ur ff ka concept is nice...
pls kria n taani now wat pls taarey ko ek kar do...
pls do pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
wow interesting haa i am
waiting for ur stry thanks
for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
really liked the concept...eagerly waiting for the first part...
update soon and please PM me =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
wow dis concept is nice...
itane time se kaha chupa kar baithe the...
update next soon
n thanx 4 d pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
thnx guys 4 ur lovely support...
here u go...
Chapter 1
REY father (RF) Anirudh singhania
mother (RM) Madhavi singhania

SWAYAM father ( SF) Kailash shikawat
mother (SM) Aarthi shikawat

AT SINGHANIA MANSION
Around 6'o clock in mrng we can see a large room in which all things r scattered everywhere
One lady enters de room wid coffee n searches everywhere but finds no one...
LADY: ye rey kaha hai???????
then she finds a note on de table she takes it n read it
" MAA i am going to colg
imp work hai sry nahi utaya
appko disturb nahi karna chahtatha
Gud mrng... love u"

RM : ye ladka bhi na... pata nahi kya kaam hoga itni subah subah chala gaya kher...ye kamra ufff... ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega kitna gandha karke raka hai kamre ko
pata nahi jab meri bahu ayegi tho kaise samhalegi isse...

smiles to herself n starts to clean de room

SCENE SHIFTS TO St.LOUIS COLG
boys locker room

one boy is walking to n fro his face is not shown, bhar bhar mirror mein apne baal thik karaha hai his hair n eyes r shown
he takes his phone n starts talking his lips r shown
THAT BOY: hello swayam kaha hai tu???? kitni der se wait karraha hu
SWAYAM : aaa raha hu jusss 5 min...
BOY : thik hai jaldi aa...

BOY cuts de phone n again starts walking to n fro...dekh ke koi bhi keh saktha hai bohot tension mein hai
His back is facing de entrance he hears footsteps n turns
HE is none other than our handsum REY...
SWAYAM enters rey runs towards swayam

R: kaha tha tu ??? kab se wait kar raha hu
S: ( in sleepy mood ) chup karr yaar ... pehle itni subah subah colg bulaya hai aur abh mujpe chilaraha hai baat kya hai
while saying so he sits on de bench
rey while sitting beside swyam
R: Arey yaar muje bohot tension horahi hai ...aaj mein kria ko propose karne jaaraha hu
S : soo?????
R: soo??????? tu itna normal kaise ho saktha hai mera yaha tension se jaan nikli jaarahi hai aur tu hai ki... pata nahi kaise react karegi
S: just chill yaar !!! tu aisa behave kar raha hai jaise koi worldwar mein participate karne jaa raha hai sirf propose hi tho karna hai...
R : not funny swayam... i am feeling very nervous yaar
S: ok cool down... jo dil mein hai woh bolde , be strong yaar
trust me result acha hi hoga
R: thnks dude...
he hugs swayam
they broke de hug
R : ye sharo kaha reh gayi????
listening sharon name swayam blushes...
reu notices this
R ; oh hoo... mera majnu blush kar raha hai
S ; stop it yaar...
they starts talking on random things n waits 4 de team to cum...
SCENE SHIFTS TO JODHPUR...
Around 6 am
sun rays r falling on her beautiful face her eyes r shown n then her rosy lips n then her gorgeous face...her face was glowing due due to sun rays... she is none other than our heroin TAANI
she wakes up n sit on her bed n looks at window
kya surya bagwan ji aaj phir se itni jaldi agaye app
anyways gud mrng...
n looks at sky n says
hey my cute krishnaji gud mrng... aaj ka din acha jaaye aur sabh ko kush rakna ok

SHE gets ready n go to puja ghar n does puja n then goes to de hall...
IN DE HALL
she goes n hugs her dadi frm behind...
T ; gud mrng jaanu
D ; gud mrng princess , need kaisi thi
T ; achi thi...
she goes to her bade papa(BP) n badi maa (BM) n take their blessing n wish them gud mrng

TAANI lives wid her dadi, swayam parents...she lost her parents at young age but swayam ke parents ne usse apni bachi jaise samja apne parents ki kami mehsus hone nahi diya...they luv her alot

BM ; taani beta jaldi se apna breakfast karo
T ; ji ayi badi maa

AT DINING TABLE...

T ; kya baat hai bade papa app par ye shirt bohot achi lag rahi hai bohot handsum dikhrahe ho...kahi dusri shaadi karne ka irada tho nahi hai naaa n giggles
BP ; acha bhachu aaj tho bohot makhan lagarahi hai sedhe sedhe bata kya chahiye tume
T ; appna kitne ache ho meri baat avey samaj jate ho woh kya hai na muje Rs 10,000 chahiye...
BM ; muje pata hai tuje itna paisa kyun chahiye... phir woh tere little frnds ke sath masti jo karna hai... rite
T ; arey my darling...abh krishnaji ne life di hai tho usse jee bhi lene chahiye aur woh bhi...
BP ; aur woh bhi full on masti karke
T ; rite
n they give hi-five to each other
BP ; yelo beta tumare paise...
T ; thank you bade papa love u...love u all bye...
she rushes to de door
BM ; Arey... nashta tho puraa karke jaa...
T ; time nahi hai darling... bye...
BM ; ye ladki bhi naaa
n trio laughs...

PRECAP ; rey proposes kria

hope u all like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
YIPPIEE...... ME FIRST TO COMMENT...
OMG WOT IS THIS DEAR. 😲..
IS IT TAAREY FF OR KRIYANSH FF...😕... I M TOTALLY CONGUSED..
BUT A NICE START I MUST SAY...👍🏼.
HMM WE LL SEE WOTS KRIA'S REACTION TOWARDS REY'S PROPOSAL...😳...
...UPDATE SOON AND PM ME...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
hmm gud updte pls pm me next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sangeethask152

YIPPIEE...... ME FIRST TO COMMENT...

OMG WOT IS THIS DEAR. 😲..
IS IT TAAREY FF OR KRIYANSH FF...😕... I M TOTALLY CONGUSED..
BUT A NICE START I MUST SAY...👍🏼.
HMM WE LL SEE WOTS KRIA'S REACTION TOWARDS REY'S PROPOSAL...😳...
...UPDATE SOON AND PM ME...😊

thank u... it is taarey ff

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
really liked the first chap...cant wait for for the next part...
update soon =)

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