New Siddhanth and Shilpa FF: Lucky in Love - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
unbelievable i have wrote for part 3 and what a suprise a saw part four will read and comment
but i have to say it is great from you that you update regularly👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
shilpa is there😊
ohh so that means she find him sexy,
nooo sid dont compare shilpa with riddhima she is better..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ -jas-

anytime, have missed you here😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Read last chapter,,loved d chapter,,u r really good in writing,,plss keep it up,,ths ws short chapter plss make it lng next time,,conti soon ,,,,,,, @hangok thnks again
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Chapter 5

He scared her a little...so she decided to obey his command and turned around walking towards her Audi...but then she suddenly turned around and walked right back and looked him straight in the eyes and said...hey mister...who do you think you are this isn't a private road...I don't have to listen to you...I mean for a guy...whose life I just saved your mighty grateful. And she continued as a matter of fact...since I hit you you're my responsibility...and you're bleeding I can't just leave...

Sid looked at her and was surprised she looked scared of him for a minute but had the guts to come back...because he was hurt...but he still didn't want to take her help...but he was tired...while he was battling himself...he looked at her and said...do you think I'm some cute little puppy whom you hit but now will take care of and keep with you...I'm a grown man...and I'm fine...ok...and he turned around...with that action he started to get giddy because of his head injury.

Before he hit the ground she caught him...and slowly with all her might took him towards her car...and made him sit in the front seat...she took the water bottle that was in her hand this whole time and gave him some water to drink...while he was doing so she went to the drivers seat and opened the glove compartment...it was stuck so she pulled really hard...and then all the contents of the glove compartment came out...before she could pick it up...Sid's attention caught what had fallen...it was a box... of condoms...she shut her eyes as he picked it up...as if in that moment she would become invisible... she looked at him...as he gave her a quizzical look...

They aren't mine...I swear...I mean actually...my friend...Rohan...we share this car...sometimes I drive it sometimes...him...and those are definitely his...and without thinking in her nervousness and embarrassment blurted out...I mean how could they be mine...I mean I'm still a virgin...plus isn't this something guys carry around when they know they are getting lucky...

He didn't reply...or react to what she had just said...there was an awkward pause...after which he squinted in pain and said...the first aid box...

She was reminded...again what she was doing and quickly got on with it ...she first picked up the first aid kit that had also fallen when she had opened the compartment... and thought to herself...why the hell hadn't his eyes looked at this instead of those...she shook her head...and then took out cotton and pour some Dettol on to it to clean is gash... she was about to apply it to his forehead...

But before she could complete the action...he caught her wrist...and in a husky whisper (because he was still obviously in pain) said..mein kar loonga...but she too was a hard nut...and she pulled her hand away and said...maine dard diya hein toh mein hi daava doungi...and moved his hand away before he could react...

She then proceeded to push his seat back so now he was in a semi-lying position. And from the side was almost on top of him as she slowly put the cotton on his wound...he hissed in pain...then she slowly blew on the gash as she was cleaning it so that it would burn less... Sid was lost in another world...he could feel her cool breaths on his forehead...it felt to good to be taken care of again...but then he was reminded of what had happened before when he had depended on someone...and was quickly broken from her spell...he looked into her eyes and told her...mujhe dard nahi ho rah...just get it over with already... but she continued to ignore him...and continued cleaning the wound...

He hissed again... he may have said that he felt no pain but it did hurt like hell...and then he felt something wet on his cheek...as he once again opened his eyes...he say the tears in her eyes...she looked at him as well but soon the moment ended... she moved away to get dressing for the gash and at the same time wipe away her tears as they threatened to fall...

Every time he had winced in pain...it was like she could physically feel his pain...she felt to guilty for hitting him with her car and made up her mind to make it up for him.

After Shilpa had dressed Sid's wounds...he was ready to leave...physically and mentally exhausted from what had happened and he knew his mom would be worried sick...and he as he was about to open the door...he heard a click...the doors were locked...he turned around and looked at Shilpa who was looking at him with a "what" look on her face as if nothing was wrong... his anger started rising up again... what the hell was going inside this girl's mind...

Sarcastically he said...is this something you do to lure men or something...first hit them with your car...stare at them when they are unconscious...then lock them inside your car with the false pretense of tending their wounds...that oddly were given by you as well...

She looked offended...hello...she took her hand and pulled his face by grabbing his chin in order to get his face closer to her's...do you think I would need to do all this just to get a man...come on look at me right in the eyes and say that you're not attracted to me...anyone would be...

He turned his face away from her grasp and looked away...her green eyes were too much for him...and he mumbled something...

She couldn't hear what he had said...but then she got to the point...look mister...I want to make it up to you...I mean come on...I bashed you with my car...itna to haak banta hain mera...anyways I'll drop you home...waise bhi...how do you think you're gonna get home like this...she said pointing out his current state..

He looked at her and said...thanks for the generous offer...but no...I'm not going to take chances with you behind the wheel...I actually want to reach home...I may have looked it but I'm not suicidal...and I don't want a stranger to know where I live...

Well I'll make this easy for you she said...Mera naam Shilpa hein...Shilpa Malhotra...mein like you live here in Houston...mera a boutique hain..aur mere Dad...Houston General ke Head Doctor...hein Dr. Rishab Malhotra...I'm allergic to nuts...mein ek virgin hoon..ok you already knew that...I love the rain..now there you go...tum mujhe abhi mere friends se be zaada jaan te ho...she smiled...now tell me how to get to your house...

He was surprised...how much she trusted him without knowing anything about him...she told him so much about herself and didn't even know his name...

Tumhe mujh pe intnaa vishwaas...why do you trust me...I mean I could be some psycho ready to kill you...he questioned genuinely

Just a feeling...mister...you don't look the type...plus I very good at vetting people after I meet them for the first time...she smiled at him...

That smile made him feel warm inside...for the first time the numbness subdued for a moment and he gave a small smile...if was definitely not the smiles the past Siddhant Modi gave...but it was an improvement to his solemn look.

He gave her the directions...and soon you could see a bright light through the darkness...maybe this bright light was not limited to the road but also his life.


Hey guys...chapter 6 will be up in a couple of hours...I was actually out so wasn't able to write a new chapter...anyways hope you like the interaction between Shilpa and Sid...Shilpa is attracted to him only...it will take her sometime to get to know him and then fall in love...Sid of course is going to resist as long as he can..anyways..please keep commenting...it really encourages me to write and update 😉


Cheers,

KaransWorld

Edited by KaransWorld - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
just too good, love shilpa how she can talk non stop😊
sid she is the one for you😉

your writing is great, looking forward for their story
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Hey guys...just another little update...

Chapter 6 ---will be coming tonight...when exactly I'm not sure because my hands hurt from typing chapter 5 so quickly..lol

I've already planned out chapters 7 and 8 and they will be coming tomorrow

I hope through my constant updates...y'all can see my dedication towards this story...I would love to hear more comments...thank you to the people that comment immediately...I mean I don't want to sound desperate...but lets face it..I am desperate for any response good/bad...it really makes me want to update as quickly as possible...and if you like my fic I would be very grateful if y'all can get your friends to read it too...I'm a newbie..so I don't have many people that can read the fic...so I would love the support on that front too!

Hehe...I'm so greedy...anyways...

Cheers,
KaransWorld ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have to say that i really appreciate it that oyu update regullarly,

hats off👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love d update,,waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Chapter 6

They finally reached in front of Modi Mansion...the lights were still on inside...Siddhant knew he was in big trouble...He was 25 but he like most people was still scared of his mom...wasn't there a saying somewhere...that hell has no fury like a woman scorned...and his mother was going to be mighty pissed...So he decided to hurry inside and get the yelling match over with.

Hey turned towards...the girl who had hit him...what was her name...Shilpa...

Can you at least open the door now...we've reached...this is were we go our separate ways...she looked at him...and then opened the car locks... he got out of the car...and started walking towards the iron gates...that would lead him into his home...

Shilpa kept on waiting from him to turn around and give her one last look...Houston wasn't a tiny place...perhaps they wouldn't see each other again... she wanted to run up to him and look into his deep brown eyes that looked directly into his soul...she wanted to feel his touch again...even though they had met in such circumstances he had left an impression on her...but he kept on walking...without breaking his stride...no good bye or see you another time when you hit me with your car...she didn't know why but it hurt to see him walk away...but why she asked herself...he was a stranger that came into her life only for sometime...he had been right they were on separate paths going the opposite direction...but she had wished for a moment that that their paths diverged into one...but then the moment ended and she decided to say goodbye to the stranger that she would oddly miss...she started her car...but it wouldn't budge...she tried again and again...but again nothing...she opened the car door...and stepped onto the gravel and walked toward the hood of her car... she opened it and looked inside...she loved cars...she knew all the names and how fast they went but she was no mechanic...nothing that was staring her right in the face made any sense to her and to make matters worse...it started to rain.

Shit...this was definitely karma...but come on she had helped the guy after hitting him...that had to count for something ... she looked up in the sky and asked...WHY? WHY NOW!!! COME ON!!! And apparently she had not only thought those words put also spoke them... enough that she saw a women in her pink nightie come walking towards her with a large black umbrella.

Siddhant had this lingering feeling that he should turn around and look back...it made no sense to him...the girl had hit him with her car...she talked so much...blah blah blah...the car ride here had been consisted of her telling him random things about herself and Houston...he was so happy to have reached his destination even though nothing happy was going to come of tonight as his mom would have been angry...but he decided he needed to face it and get it over with...and without a glance behind he went inside...his mom was seated on the sofa...wearing her reading glasses...with the newspaper in front of her...he knew then he was in a lot of trouble because this was her patented position when she was angry at him...he remembered all the times he was caught coming home late and drunk...or worse sober...because then she would really give to him...she sensed him coming towards her and put down the paper...pulled off her reading specs and stood up...he looked directly at him and saw him with his head down like a school boy...before she could say anything something else caught her eye...she looked out the window and saw a girl standing outside a car looking frustrated and then saw the down pour that had started...Houston was a pretty stable city... it didn't rain like this unannounced...and before she could consciously make a decision her feet automatically got into action...and without a second thought Nivedita Modi walked outside in her nightie with an umbrella to help the girl standing outside her mansion.

Siddhant was so confused...when he looked up he saw a glimpse of pink and then his mother walking outside...he turned around to see her bring into their home that girl that had been the cause of everything...and before he could react further he heard a bout of laughter...what was she doing...how could she make his mom laugh...she had been so angry and now she was laughing...how could someone have such an effect on her...for a moment jealousy crept into him...and then he just continued to stand there as anger within him began to boil.

Shilpa was relieved when Sid's mother came to her aid and invited her inside...she could immediately tell that his mother was very kind hearted...they had began talking as they proceeded toward the house...and they had a lot in common...it felt like she was meeting a friend...and they had a good laugh as they came inside...when she was inside the living room she could see his back...it was slowing vibrating...she wondered he was standing their so stiffly...had she interrupted an important conversation with her pleas to god to stop the rain...but then she felt a hand on her shoulder leading her to take a seat onto the sofa.

Nivedita was the first to talk...Sid why are standing...you're hurt why don't you sit down...Shilpa though oh...his name his Sid...but what's the full form...it was like Nivedita knew what she was thinking because the very same moment she heard her speak sternly saying...Siddhanth Modi...I'm talking you know...you can't ignore me...now get you butt onto the sofa...and then with a tender voice as he sat down she put a hand on his chin and looked at him closely...at his forehead closely and asked...beta does it hurt? Are you ok? You shouldn't have done that...what if you had gotten seriously injured...thank god that it was Shilpa that hit you...I mean if it was someone else they might have left...what was the need to walk in the middle of the road...couldn't to hear the honking...he suddenly looked up in surprise...so she had told his mother about what had happened...and what the hell he was the one that got hit by the car not her...how was she getting the sympathy...he looked from his mother to Shilpa as his anger reflected through his eyes...

Sorry for the delay..I had this chapter ready last night but then my laptop just shut down..and this chapter was gone...so I wrote it again this morning...it turned out different from when I had first written it but...well...can't do anything about that...anyways...will write ch.7 and 8 soon.


cheers,

KaransWorld

Edited by KaransWorld - 11 years ago

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