VirIka FF :- U R D REASON - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
amazing concept sravi!!
really loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
ya plz continue wil b waiting
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Nice intro.. would love to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
amazing concept
loved it
damn good
continue soon
waiting for part 01
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
behna character sketch is really intresting...would luv to read this story...do update when cum bck & pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Interesting concept. Continue soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Yh plz continue and plz pm me too
Xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Good concept
It is interesting
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Thnkzz everyone fr d response...hope u will like d first chptr...introducing some chracters

Vanshika :- Viren's mom
Vikram :- Viren 's dad
Virat :- Viren's arrogant elder brother

Priya :- Jeeviks's mom
Prem :- Jeevika' Father
Manvi :- jeevika 's elder sis...


PART-1

Vanshika :- Gud mrng beta...
Viren :- gud mrng maa
Vanshika :- Have a nice day beta...cme fast ...its &:30 dnt be late fr dbreakfast..otherwise
Viren :- otherwise..i knw mom i cant eat d breakfast..i dnt understand one thing ..r des rules made only frme...
Vanshika :- nthng like dat beta..
Viren :- plzz mom i m hearing d same from my childhood but nothing seems so
Vanshika :- no beta
Viren :- plzz leave me alone mom
Vanshika :- beta.. u know u r brther engagement z on next monday ..hope u will attend
Viren :- mom.. its only u who cares ..whether i attend it or not...i will try 2 attend depends on my mood
Vanshika ;- thnkzz beta
Viren :- mom but if anyone insults dis time..
Vanshika :- nothing will happen..n cme fast...its aloo paratha 2day ur fvrte
Viren k mom..


In choudarys' house

Jeevika :- mom my pen z missing
Priya :- here it z dnt get tensed
Jeevika :- thnkzz mom
Priya :- all d best beta..u will rock d exam
Jeevika :- thnk u so much mom
Priya :- love u beta
Jeevika :- where z dad??? he said he will drop me
Manvi :- ho he z mre imp things den 2 drop u... r u a samll kid dat someone should drop u
Jeevika :- lol see who z talking ...dnt u frget manvi DI dat u r d one who z afraid of dark going alone nt me...šŸ˜•
Manvi :- u
Priya :- Stop it manvi...she z gng fr her exam ..n y r u always behind her..
Manvi :- mom stop it...
Jeevika :- let be mom..i better leave ..
Manvi :- dats better...
Priya :- all d best beta..

Precap :- VirIka first meeting

I knw its all crap but no chappals..n eggs

SravyašŸ˜›

FR PM ADD ME ...

Edited by rocksravya11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awesome one dear!
Cntinue asap!
Loved it!

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